Dialogue changes to NPCs

Improved the dialogue of the bookshelf containing "zukminbirf."
Added "croupier" name tag to the Roulette NPC's dialog
Improved grammar and wording
Replaced ". " with ". "
Replaced " -- " with an en dash (" – ").

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt
index 99287a77..d4c3b8f7 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/bard.txt
@@ -71,28 +71,28 @@ L_Question:
 
 L_Q_oldwiz:
     mes "[" + @name$ + "]";
-    mes "\"The old wizard has been an old man for as long as I remember, living near the mountains in his magic hut-- a hut that is bigger on the inside, just like in the old tales of Gyer Filla the Wise....\"";
+    mes "\"The old wizard has been an old man for as long as I remember, living near the mountains in his magic hut – a hut that is bigger on the inside, just like in the old tales of Gyer Filla the Wise....\"";
     next;
     mes "[" + @name$ + "]";
-    mes "\"I doubt that they are the same person, though.  For one, I have never seen his hut fly.  For another, Gyer never took apprentices.\"";
+    mes "\"I doubt that they are the same person, though. For one, I have never seen his hut fly. For another, Gyer never took apprentices.\"";
     next;
     goto L_Main;
 
 L_Q_elanore:
     mes "[" + @name$ + "]";
-    mes "\"Elanore is this town's healer.  Rumor has it that she traveled far and wide when she was younger, to learn the deepest secrets of healing magic, after her brother caught a mysterious illness.\"";
+    mes "\"Elanore is this town's healer. Rumor has it that she traveled far and wide when she was younger, to learn the deepest secrets of healing magic, after her brother caught a mysterious illness.\"";
     next;
     goto L_Main;
 
 L_Q_manaseed:
     mes "[" + @name$ + "]";
-    mes "\"The Mana Seed is said to be a source of great magic.  Perhaps some witch or wizard might know more about it?\"";
+    mes "\"The Mana Seed is said to be a source of great magic. Perhaps some witch or wizard might know more about it?\"";
     next;
     goto L_Main;
 
 L_Q_wyara:
     mes "[" + @name$ + "]";
-    mes "\"Wyara is not actually from Hurnscald.  As a young witch, she decided to settle down there to help the people of Hurnscald.  She is kind and gentle, except towards the Doctor, who seems to have little respect for her potions.\"";
+    mes "\"Wyara is not actually from Hurnscald. As a young witch, she decided to settle down there to help the people of Hurnscald. She is kind and gentle, except towards the Doctor, who seems to have little respect for her potions.\"";
     next;
     goto L_Main;
 
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ L_Q_sagatha:
     mes "\"Sagatha!  Ah, such a wonderful and mysterious being; the center of many a tale...\"";
     next;
     mes "[" + @name$ + "]";
-    mes "\"Some say that she is the most powerful witch in all of Argaes.  I don't know whether that is true or not, but I am quite certain that she is the most beautiful witch of all!  Alas, she will let no man touch her...\"";
+    mes "\"Some say that she is the most powerful witch in all of Argaes. I don't know whether that is true or not, but I am quite certain that she is the most beautiful witch of all!  Alas, she will let no man touch her...\"";
     mes "He sighs.";
     next;
     mes "[" + @name$ + "]";
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ L_Q_sagatha:
     mes "\"First, she will suffer no fool easily, particularly no man.\"";
     next;
     mes "[" + @name$ + "]";
-    mes "\"Second, the creatures of the forest mean everything to her.  Harm them, and you may find her an enemy-- and a powerful one at that...\"";
+    mes "\"Second, the creatures of the forest mean everything to her. Harm them, and you may find her an enemy – and a powerful one at that...\"";
     next;
     goto L_Main;