Updates to scripts, removing spelling errors and merging messages together.

5 files changed, 37 insertions, 35 deletions

diff --git a/npc/tulimshar/barber.txt b/npc/tulimshar/barber.txt
index dfd2d45e..b9a14057 100644
--- a/npc/tulimshar/barber.txt
+++ b/npc/tulimshar/barber.txt
@@ -14,24 +14,20 @@ style:
 	"Curly",style2,
 	"Scruffy",style3,
 	"Slick",style4,
-	"Mohowk (needs CVS)",style5;
+	"Mohawk (needs CVS)",style5;
 
 style1:
 	setlook 1,1;
 	close;
-
 style2:
 	setlook 1,2;
 	close;
-
 style3:
 	setlook 1,3;
 	close;
-
 style4:
 	setlook 1,4;
 	close;
-
 style5:
 	setlook 1,5;
 	close;
diff --git a/npc/tulimshar/guards.txt b/npc/tulimshar/guards.txt
index 5c349e5c..375199eb 100644
--- a/npc/tulimshar/guards.txt
+++ b/npc/tulimshar/guards.txt
@@ -1,27 +1,27 @@
 new_3-1.gat,48,79,0	script	Guard	104,{
-mes "[Soldier]";
-mes "Protecting this place is my job.";
-mes "If you walk outside, there are" ;
-mes "monsters harder than anyhting in here.";
-next;
-menu "What kind of monsters have you seen?",L_Exp,"Nevermind that",L_Nev;
-L_Exp:
-	mes "Well, in my whole carrier, I've only seen Maggots and Scorpions.";
+	mes "[Soldier]";
+	mes "Protecting this place is my job. Be careful if you walk outside, there are monsters harder than anything you find here.";
 	next;
-	mes "So please don't ask me about monsters.";
+
+	menu
+	"What kind of monsters?",L_Exp,
+	"Nevermind",L_Nev;
+
+L_Exp:
+	mes "Actually, in my whole career, I've only seen maggots and scorpions. So please don't ask me about monsters.";
 	next;
-	mes "This place is actualy pretty safe";
+	mes "This place is actually pretty safe.";
 	close;
+
 L_Nev:
-	mes "Be careful...";
+	mes "Careful!";
 	close;
 }
 
 new_3-1.gat,40,79,0	script	SGuard	104,{
-mes "[Soldier]";
-mes "ZzzZzzZ...";
-next;
-mes "Heh, what?";
-mes "I wasn't sleeping, I just had my eyes closed!";
-close;
+	mes "[Soldier]";
+	mes "ZzzZzzZ...";
+	next;
+	mes "Heh, what? I wasn't sleeping, I just had my eyes closed!";
+	close;
 }
diff --git a/npc/tulimshar/monster_guide.txt b/npc/tulimshar/monster_guide.txt
index 088efbb3..5f9834c8 100644
--- a/npc/tulimshar/monster_guide.txt
+++ b/npc/tulimshar/monster_guide.txt
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ spawn:
 new_3-1.gat,46,66,0	script	MonsterGuide	102,{
 if(MPQUEST == 0) goto Register;
 	mes "[Monster Guide]";
-	mes "you currently have " +Mobpt+ " Monster Points";
-	mes "These points are acuired while killing monsters"; 
+	mes "You currently have " +Mobpt+ " Monster Points";
+	mes "These points are acquired while killing monsters"; 
 	close;
 Register:
 	mes "[Monster Guide]";
diff --git a/npc/tulimshar/ptsrewards.txt b/npc/tulimshar/ptsrewards.txt
index 955737a0..4dd567b7 100644
--- a/npc/tulimshar/ptsrewards.txt
+++ b/npc/tulimshar/ptsrewards.txt
@@ -1,11 +1,17 @@
 new_3-1.gat,55,51,0	script	Rewards	106,{
+	if (MPQUEST == 0) goto Register;
+
 	mes "[Rewards Master]";
-	mes "Welcome";
-	mes "Would you like to exchange some points for items?";
+	mes "Welcome! Would you like to exchange some points for items?";
 	next;
 	menu "Yes",Y1,"No Thanks",LEAVE;
 	next;
 
+Register:
+	mes "[Rewards Master]";
+	mes "Hey, it seems like you didn't register as a quest participant yet! You can sign up at the gate below.";
+	close;
+
 Y1:
 	mes "[Rewards Master]";
 	mes "Ok lets check those points.";
diff --git a/npc/tulimshar/villagers.txt b/npc/tulimshar/villagers.txt
index dfe68a96..6fb28fb4 100644
--- a/npc/tulimshar/villagers.txt
+++ b/npc/tulimshar/villagers.txt
@@ -1,17 +1,17 @@
 new_3-1.gat,114,43,0	script	Guard	102,{
-mes "[Man]";
-mes "Ouch! it hurts, this wound I got from battle";
-next;
-menu "Tell me more",L_Exp,"Nevermind that",L_Nev;
+	mes "[Man]";
+	mes "Ouch! It hurts, this wound I got from battle.";
+	next;
+	menu "Tell me about it",L_Exp,"Nevermind",L_Nev;
+
 L_Exp:
-	mes "I was fighting scorpions for experience and I bumped into a RED"; 
-	mes "one. I have NEVER seen it before!";
+	mes "I was fighting scorpions for experience and I bumped into a RED one. I had NEVER seen it before!";
 	next;
-	mes "Luckily i had a camera with me! Here's a picture of it...";
-	mes " Let me find it. I in my pocket sumwhere";
+	mes "Luckily i had a camera with me! Here's a picture of it... Let me find it, I put it in my pocket somewhere...";
 	next;
-	mes "Oh gawd! my pockets been ripped clean off!";
+	mes "Oh man! My pockets have been ripped clean off!";
 	close;
+
 L_Nev:
 	mes "Hmpf!";
 	close;