Initial spell/grammar check for tutorial

1 files changed, 18 insertions, 18 deletions

diff --git a/npc/042-1/kaan.txt b/npc/042-1/kaan.txt
index 494dc874..6b9e34ca 100644
--- a/npc/042-1/kaan.txt
+++ b/npc/042-1/kaan.txt
@@ -17,11 +17,11 @@
 	next;
 	mes "\"She was babbling at me about it all the morning until I sent her to take care of the maggots in the storehouse.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "Kaan grins mischievous";
+	mes "Kaan grins mischieviously.";
 	mes "[Kaan]";
 	mes "\"She hates maggots.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Maybe you should go to see her, she was really upset about what happened with you.\"";
+	mes "\"Maybe you should go and see her...she was really upset about what happened to you.\"";
 	set kaan, 1;
 	if (tanisha >= 3)
 		goto L_Tanisha2;
@@ -43,42 +43,42 @@ L_Tanisha:
 		"Yeah, and she's done with the maggots.",-;
 L_Tanisha3:
 	mes "[Kaan]";
-	mes "\"Ah, that are good news.";
+	mes "\"Ah, that is good news.";
 	mes "You know, we have a lot of problems with bugs here.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"If we don't watch out the maggots will eat all of our stocks.";
 	mes "And the desert is crawling with scorpions.";
 	mes "They also come here and you need to watch out not to step on them.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"But I took care about that problem.\"";
+	mes "\"But I took care of that problem.\"";
 	mes "He looks very proud.";
 	next;
 	mes "\"I build this fence to keep them out.\"";
 	next;
 	menu
-		"Impressive! Just a bit... skew.",-,
+		"Impressive! Just a bit... skewed.",-,
 		"Wow, it looks very - ahm, unconventional.",-;
 	mes "[Kaan]";
 	mes "\"Well, it keeps the scorpions out. That's all that matters.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Are you going to visit main Tulimshar?";
-	mes "The bazaar there is a wondeful place! Traders, entertainers, adventurers - it's very exciting there.\"";
+	mes "\"Are you going to visit Tulimshar?";
+	mes "The bazaar there is a wondeful place! Traders, entertainers, adventurers - it's very exciting.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"And Ian the trainer is hanging around there often. You should talk to him, he's a smart guy.\"";
 	set kaan, 2;
 	if (hasan)
 		menu
-			"A guy named Hasan doesn't let me enter main Tulimshar.",L_Hasan,
+			"A guy named Hasan won't let me enter Tulimshar.",L_Hasan,
 			"Thanks for the advice.",L_Close;
 	close;
 
 L_Out:
 	mes "[Kaan]";
-	mes "\"Hello! How are you? Did you already visit main Tulimshar?\"";
+	mes "\"Hello! How are you? Did you already visit Tulimshar?\"";
 	next;
 	if (hasan)
 		menu
-			"A guy named Hasan doesn't let me enter main Tulimshar.",L_Hasan,
+			"A guy named Hasan won't let me enter Tulimshar.",L_Hasan,
 			"Not yet.",L_Close;
 	menu
 		"Not yet.",L_Close;
@@ -86,18 +86,18 @@ L_Out:
 
 L_Hasan:
 	mes "[Kaan]";
-	mes "\"Hasan! That's crazy. He becomes more cheekily with every day.";
+	mes "\"Hasan! That's crazy. He becomes more cheeky with every day.";
 	mes "I'd like to help you, but - I won't risk an open confrontation with him.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"Sometimes he just freaks out and then he's dangerous.";
-	mes "We should think about some trick. Ah, if I'd now what's his weak point.\"";
+	mes "We should think about some kind of trick. Ah, if only I knew his weak point.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"He might listen to one of the adult men, but they're all off to work in main Tulimshar during the day.\"";
+	mes "\"He might listen to one of the adult men, but they're all off to work in Tulimshar during the day.\"";
 	set kaan, 3;
 	next;
 L_Trick:
 	mes "[Kaan]";
-	mes "\"Do you have an idea what Hasans weakness could be?";
+	mes "\"Do you have any idea what Hasans weakness could be?";
 	if (hasan < 2)
 		close;
 	next;
@@ -106,14 +106,14 @@ L_Trick:
 		"No idea.",L_Close;
 	mes "[Kaan]";
 	mes "\"Scorpions?! Right! How could I forget?";
-	mes "When he was a child, he nearly died because he felt in a scorpion nest.\"";
+	mes "When he was a child, he nearly died because he fell into a scorpion nest.\"";
 	next;
 L_Explain:
 	mes "\"Ok, then here's the plan:";
 	mes "I will catch one of the scorpions that's coming to the fence from the desert.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"You'll go to Hasan and give me a sign when you're ready.";
-	mes "Let's say the sign is that you're scratching your head.";
+	mes "Lets say the sign is that you're scratching your head.";
 	mes "I'll watch you from this point.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"When you give me the sign, I'll throw the scorpion down on him.";
@@ -140,13 +140,13 @@ L_Hasan_Saved:
 	mes "\"I told you to pass when he's distracted, not to fight the scorpion!";
 	mes "But maybe Hasan is thankful now?\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Maybe you should talk to him again.\"";
+	mes "\"Why don't you talk to him again and see what he says.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Tut_Done:
 	mes "[Kaan]";
 	mes "\"Hi there. I hope you enjoy your time in Tulimshar.";
-	mes "Hasan is a real troublemaker, but it seems he calmed down now.\"";
+	mes "Hasan can be a real troublemaker, but it seems like he has calmed down for now.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Run: