More spelling and grammar corrections.

8 files changed, 47 insertions, 47 deletions

diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/alacrius.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/alacrius.txt
index 16ebf399..e94bd053 100755
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/alacrius.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/alacrius.txt
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@
 // start quest section
     mes "Hi, want to fight the reaper?";
     menu   
-    "Let's go",L_START,
-    "No thank you",-;
+    "Let's go!",L_START,
+    "No, thank you.",-;
     close;
 
 L_START:
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ OnTimer300000:
     killmonsterall "027-4.gat";
     end;
 OnTimer301000:
-    npctalk "You have failed the mission";
+    npctalk "You have failed the mission.";
     end;
 
 // cooldown before the quest can be restarted
diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/alacrius2.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/alacrius2.txt
index aa5eda08..b48ebd3f 100755
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/alacrius2.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/alacrius2.txt
@@ -4,23 +4,23 @@
 	if ($@FIGHT_ALACRIUS_STATUS != 0) goto L_Enjoy;

 

 

-   mes "[ALACRIUS]";

+   mes "[Alacrius]";

    mes "\"Hello, I'm Alacrius. \"";

    next;

-   mes "[ALACRIUS]";

-   mes "\"A very long time ago, I figured a way to cheat death and the limits of time and space. You may think it actually is evil, but I did it because of true love... \"";

+   mes "[Alacrius]";

+   mes "\"A very long time ago, I figured a way to cheat death and the limits of time and space. You may think it is evil, but I did it because of true love... \"";

    next;

-   mes "[ALACRIUS]";

-   mes "\"The reaper kidnapped my beloved wife, and took her to the underworld, so I had to find a way to stop him, and as time went by, I became what you can see now... But if you dare to cheat death, time and space you'll have to pay a high price... \"";

+   mes "[Alacrius]";

+   mes "\"The reaper kidnapped my beloved wife, and took her to the underworld.  I had to find a way to stop him, and as time went by, I became what you can see now... But if you dare to cheat death, time and space you'll have to pay a high price... \"";

    next;

 

-   mes "[ALACRIUS]";

+   mes "[Alacrius]";

    mes "\"Being away from time and space doesn't allow me to try to save my beloved wife... I need your help. Do you think you have what it takes to handle the most powerful monsters over the world of Mana? \"";

    next;

 

    menu   

-      "Let's go",L_PLAY_OK,

-      "No thank you",-;

+      "Let's go!",L_PLAY_OK,

+      "No, thank you.",-;

    close;

 

 

@@ -36,12 +36,12 @@ L_PLAY_OK:
 

 L_Enjoy:

    if ($@MO_REAPER == 1) goto L_AllDead;

-   mes "[ALACRIUS]";

+   mes "[Alacrius]";

    mes "\"...Please hurry up, the time is running...\"";

    goto L_Exit;

 

 L_AlreadyStarted:

-   mes "[ALACRIUS]";

+   mes "[Alacrius]";

    mes "\"The Reaper is alive.\"";

    goto L_Exit;

 

@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ OnTimer120000:
    stopnpctimer;

    setnpctimer 0;

    set @PRIZE, 0;

-   npctalk "Oh my beloved wife, you could not have been rescued! I will have to purge my mistakes again...";

+   npctalk "Oh my beloved wife, you could not be rescued! I will have to purge my mistakes again...";

    npctalk "Please, help my beloved wife!!";

 

    end;

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ L_AllDead:
    if (@inventorylist_count == 100) goto L_TooMany;

    getitem "CasinoCoins", 1;

 

-        mes "[ALACRIUS]";

+        mes "[Alacrius]";

    mes "Thank you very much, you saved my love!! Here you are, a prize according to the dangers you've been exposed to.";

    set @PRIZE , 0;

         set $@MO_REAPER,0;

@@ -98,12 +98,12 @@ L_AllDead:
         end;

 

 L_TooMany:

-        mes "[ALACRIUS]";

+        mes "[Alacrius]";

    mes "You have no room for the reward.";

    close;

 

 L_NOHERO:

-        mes "[ALACRIUS]";

+        mes "[Alacrius]";

    mes "Sorry, but you didn't save my love... Try it again when you're ready...";

    close;

         end;

diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt
index 7c3b3465..51476106 100644
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/crying_child.txt
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ L_intro:
 	next;
 	menu
 		"My name is "+strcharinfo(0)+". I heard you cry and decided to ask if you need help.",-;
-	mes "The child looks at you from head to toe and say: \"" +@madamsir$+ ", aren't you scared of me?\"";
+	mes "The child looks at you from head to toe and says: \"" +@madamsir$+ ", aren't you scared of me?\"";
 	next;
 	menu
 		"No... Why would I be scared of you?",-;
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ L_return2:
 	menu
 		"Don't worry, you don't need to give me anything...",-;
 	mes "[Aldred]";
-	mes "\"Are you serious? That is why you are so great! But hey, I have an idea. What if you talk to my parents about this item? If it is not important or valuable, I don't think it would be a problem to let you keep it. And I really want to know if they are acting all weird because I lost it. Would you do this for me?\"";
+	mes "\"Are you serious? That is why you are so great! But hey, I have an idea. What if you talk to my parents about this thing? If it is not important or valuable, I don't think it would be a problem to let you keep it. And I really want to know if they are acting all weird because I lost it. Would you do this for me?\"";
 	next;
 	menu
 		"Sounds interesting... But who are your parents?",-,
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ L_return4:
 		"She said it makes her sad",-;
 	mes "\"Ohh... really? I don't like when my mother gets sad... If this thing is making her feel bad, I should keep it away from her. \"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Well, I guess you can keep it, but don't show it to my mother again, she is already very sad. But now I am really curious, who would give a gift to my mother? There are so many strange things happening lately...\"";
+	mes "\"Well, I guess you can keep it, but don't show it to my mother again, she is already very sad. But now I am really curious, who else would give a gift to my mother? There are so many strange things happening lately...\"";
 	getinventorylist;
 	if (@inventorylist_count == 100) goto L_full;
 	getitem "ScarabArmlet", 1;
diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/diary.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/diary.txt
index e3dbc1d6..15eaa85e 100644
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/diary.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/diary.txt
@@ -8,13 +8,13 @@
 	end;
 
 L_Diary:
-	mes "You pull out Reid's diary from behind a huge poem book. In the back part of the book, you find some entries which seem to be about Savaric.";
+	mes "You pull out Reid's diary from behind a huge poem book. In the back of the book, you find some entries which seem to be about Savaric.";
 	next;
 	mes "'Savaric keeps confusing me - one time he is so flirty and slinky, another time he is cold and unfriendly. What is it with this man?'";
 	next;
 	mes "'I need to stay away from him! It's not right, what I am feeling. It seems Hamond doesn't suspect anything of my feelings - but I know, it's just a matter of time. I need to come to my senses again!'";
 	next;
-	mes "'Oh, this chaos between Savaric and me is getting serious. I was in his room today and he put his arms around me - I wanted to push him away, but I couldn't move. It was such a sweet feeling. I was twisted between my brain saying 'No!' and my body wanting to feel his touch. Then Aldred showed up and Savaric let me go.'";
+	mes "'Oh, this chaos between Savaric and me is getting serious. I was in his room today and he put his arms around me - I wanted to push him away, but I couldn't move. It was such a sweet feeling. I was torn between my brain saying 'No!' and my body wanting to feel his touch. Then Aldred showed up and Savaric let me go.'";
 	next;
 	mes "The next part is blurred - it seems Reid was crying while writing.";
 	mes "'Savaric was talking again about leaving, because he can't find the mana seed. The thought that I would never see him again made me feel like I was falling into a big black hole! I need to decide what to do. But Hamond - I owe him so much. And what about Aldred?'";
diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/husband.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/husband.txt
index 03ac84a0..3c05a985 100644
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/husband.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/husband.txt
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ L_Check_Ice:
 	next;
 	mes "\"I know, this is a bit strange - I'm still getting used to being dead. But a patron's wish is a patron's wish!\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Can you bring me a huge amount of bones and skulls? This way I can fulfill that peculilar wish and make another patron very happy!\"";
+	mes "\"Can you bring me a huge amount of bones and skulls? This way I can fulfill that peculiar wish and make another patron very happy!\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Check_Bones:
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ L_Brought_Bones:
 L_Savaric:
 	mes "Hamond's face turns into an ugly grimace.";
 	mes "[Hamond]";
-	mes "\"This egomaniac cheekily - \"";
+	mes "\"That cheeky egomaniac - \"";
 	next;
 
 	if ((Sex == 0) && (@kidstate < 7)) goto L_Woman;
@@ -196,7 +196,7 @@ L_Jealousy:
 	next;
 	mes "Hamond seems to nearly burst with anger.";
 	next;
-	mes "\"I guess, they think I don't see what they are doing! But they are flirting all the time, my poor Reid seems not to be able to have a straight thought anymore.\"";
+	mes "\"I guess, they think I don't see what they are doing! But they are flirting all the time, my poor Reid seems unable to have a straight thought anymore.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"I already thought about throwing him out of the inn - but he is a patron! I can't be rude to a patron.\"";
 	next;
@@ -208,19 +208,19 @@ L_Jealousy:
 L_Man:
 	mes "[Hamond]";
 	mes "\"You're a man - I think you would understand what is happening to me.\"";
-	mes "\"But, to be honest, I think I will only be able to talk about such a complicated matter if I am sure I am sharing my feelings with a good, wise and understanding person. No offense, it is just that I barely know you...\"";
+	mes "\"But, to be honest, I think I'd only be able to talk about such a complicated matter if I am sure I am sharing my feelings with a good, wise and understanding person. No offense, it is just that I barely know you...\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Woman:
 	mes "[Hamond]";
 	mes "\"Hrm - I don't think you'll understand. It is a problem between men.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"And, to be honest, I will only be able to talk about such a complicated matter if I am sure I am sharing my feelings with a good, wise and understanding person. No offense, it is just that I barely know you...\"";
+	mes "\"And, to be honest, I'd only be able to talk about such a complicated matter if I am sure I am sharing my feelings with a good, wise and understanding person. No offense, it is just that I barely know you...\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Bracelet:
 	mes "[Hamond]";
-	mes "\"Well.. this is just a cheap bracelet, it is very popular with the young kids these days, specially the magic students. They call it 'Scarab Armlet'. Fancy name, huh? But for me it is just a cheap bracelet.\"";
+	mes "\"Well.. this is just a cheap bracelet.  It is very popular with the young kids these days, especially the magic students. They call it 'Scarab Armlet'. Fancy name, huh? But to me it is just a cheap bracelet.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"They also say it increases 'magic attack'. But, in fact, I think these kids are delusional. Magic, pah.\"";
 	next;
@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@ L_News:
 	mes "[Hamond]";
 	mes "\"You did? Amazing! Please tell me.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "You explain to him how you came here, about your researches and what Golbanez showed to you.";
+	mes "You explain to him how you came here, the results of your research and what Golbanez showed to you.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Hamond]";
 	mes "\"WHAT? This is just crazy! But - you've shown me that you're trustworthy. This must be the truth.\"";
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ L_Apologize:
 	mes "[Hamond]";
 	mes "\"I thank you! Reid came to me to talk about what happened.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"We talked about all the stuff that happened. It's hard for me, but I accepted her feelings for that mage. I mean - we are dead! And we have to stay at this place together for the rest of eternity! This is just perverted.\"";
+	mes "\"We talked about all the stuff that happened. It's hard for me, but I accepted her feelings for that mage. I mean - we are dead! And we have to stay in this place together for the rest of eternity! This is just perverted.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"But whatever, we need to get along with each other someway and I won't be the one who makes this difficult.\"";
 	next;
diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt
index cefbf61d..9a8072cc 100644
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ L_Check_Tears:
 	callsub S_Update_Mask;
 
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
-	mes "\"These tears.. how they shimmer in the candle light. Yes, it seems you are serious about your offer. I think you have the sensibility to help me find out the real meaning behind this terrible feeling.\"";
+	mes "\"These tears.. how they shimmer in the candle light. Yes, it seems you are serious about your offer. I think maybe you have the sensibility to help me find out the real meaning behind this terrible feeling.\"";
 	next;
 L_Ask_Life:
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
@@ -175,12 +175,12 @@ L_Ask_Life:
 
 	if (@kidstate == 5)
 		menu
-			"Please tell me about your life. Maybe this will give a clue about what happened.",L_Skip2,
+			"Please tell me about your life. Maybe this will give us a clue about what happened.",L_Skip2,
 			"Hi. I found this in the main hall. Do you know to whom it belongs?", L_Bracelet,
 			"I need to think about that.", L_Close;
 L_Skip2:
 	menu
-		"Please tell me about your life. Maybe this will give a clue about what happened.",-,
+		"Please tell me about your life. Maybe this will give us a clue about what happened.",-,
 		"I need to think about that.", L_Close;
 
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/lover.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/lover.txt
index ee2f5833..e194dce5 100644
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/lover.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/lover.txt
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ L_Crystals:
 	set hp, 5;
 	mes "The crystals explode and hit you!";
 	next;
-	mes "You fall down on the floor and blink frantically to regain your eyesight again.";
+	mes "You fall down on the floor and blink frantically to regain your eyesight.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Hanged Man]";
 	mes "\"Hello? You're ok? I'm sorry, something went wrong. It seems, not only is there a magical barrier, but also my manaflow is blocked. I don't know if this is because I'm dead or part of the barrier spell.\"";
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ L_News:
 	if ((@woman < 6) && (@golbanez > 0))
 		menu
 			"Yes, let me tell you.",L_Golbenez,
-			"I don't think so",L_Close;
+			"I don't think so.",L_Close;
 
 	if ((@woman >=  6) && (@golbanez == 0))
 		menu
@@ -132,10 +132,10 @@ L_News:
 		menu
 			"Can you tell me about your relationship to Reid?",L_Reid,
 			"Yes, let me tell you.",L_Golbenez,
-			"I don't think so",L_Close;
+			"I don't think so.",L_Close;
 
 L_Golbenez:
-	mes "You explain how you came in the inn and what Golbenez said to you.";
+	mes "You explain how you came to the inn and what Golbenez said to you.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Savaric]";
 	mes "\"This... this is very disturbing news. Playground he said? Mh.. \"";
@@ -149,9 +149,9 @@ L_Golbenez:
 	next;
 	mes "\"Oh, right - I was just thinking. It makes me feel uncomfortable to hear about Golbenez being involved in this.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"I told you, I'm the apprentice of a demon summoner, remember? Well, this includes learning about the astral beings in this world.\"";
+	mes "\"I told you I'm the apprentice of a demon summoner, remember? Well, this includes learning about the astral beings in this world.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"And Golbenez - he is a very powerful being, a Demi-God, with a very questionable sense of humor. He was worshipped by a group of cultists some hundred years ago - uhm, some hundreds of years ago from my lifetime, I mean.\"";
+	mes "\"And Golbenez - he is a very powerful being, a Demi-God, with a very questionable sense of humor. He was worshipped by a group of cultists some hundred years ago - uhm, some hundred years ago from my lifetime, I mean.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"But most of his adherents died when he thought it would be funny to test their loyality by sending them on a journey over the sea to a paradise island he promised them - of course, there was no such island.\"";
 	next;
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ L_Golb:
 	mes "You tell Savaric about what Golbenez showed to you.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Savaric]";
-	mes "\"I.. I can't believe.. My master told me, I need to be careful because of my temper - but I never thought, it would lead me to make such a terrible mistake. Oh, Reid - and all the people in the inn! What have I done?!\"";
+	mes "\"I.. I can't believe.. My master told me, I need to be careful because of my temper - but I never thought it would lead me to make such a terrible mistake. Oh, Reid - and all the people in the inn! What have I done?!\"";
 	next;
 	mes "He seems pained by his guilt.";
 	next;
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ L_Apologize:
 	next;
 	mes "\"You did so much for me, can I ask you for one last favor?\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Golbenez took my soul and I want it back. You were very clever how you negotiated with him so far. Could you get my soul back for me?\"";
+	mes "\"Golbenez took my soul and I want it back. You were very clever with how you negotiated with him so far. Could you get my soul back for me?\"";
 	set @state, 6;
 	callsub S_Update_Mask;
 	close;
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ L_Want_Soul:
 	mes "[Savaric]";
 	mes "\"Welcome back! Are you still working on getting my soul back?\"";
 	menu
-		"I'm doing my best",-,
+		"I'm doing my best.",-,
 		"Yes, but it isn't easy.",-;
 
 	mes "[Savaric]";
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ L_Have_Soul:
 
 L_Reid:
 	mes "[Savaric]";
-	mes "\"Relationship? Well, she is the innkeeper of this inn and I'm a patron. There is nothing more about this to say.\"";
+	mes "\"Relationship? Well, she is the innkeeper of this inn and I'm a patron. There is nothing more to say about this.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Not_Enough_Crystals:
diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/werewolf.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/werewolf.txt
index 098a8699..fcce057b 100644
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/werewolf.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/werewolf.txt
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 	mes "\"Just the stuff they call 'food' in here is awful, bah.\"";
 	if (baselevel < 80) goto L_Close;
 	next;
-	mes "\"I like bones from big animals, the best would be with some raw flesh at it. But only the bones are fine too.\"";
+	mes "\"I like bones from big animals, the best would be with some raw flesh on it. But just the bones are fine too.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"Can you bring me " + @ANIMALBONES_AMOUNT + " of them?\"";
 	set @state, 1;
@@ -60,12 +60,12 @@ L_Human:
 	mes "[Werewolf]";
 	mes "\"What?! That's a humans bone! I don't eat humans. That brings only trouble.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Beside of that I heard, they taste is bad.\"";
+	mes "\"Besides, from that I heard, they taste bad.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Not_Enough:
 	mes "[Werewolf]";
-	mes "\"Are you trying to kid me? I do can count.\"";
+	mes "\"Are you trying to kid me? I can count.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Happy:
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ L_Happy:
 	mes "\"Delicious. Thanks again.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"By the way... would you be interested in a little round of black jack?\"";
-	mes "He pulls a card game out of his pocket.";
+	mes "He pulls a deck of cards out of his pocket.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Werewolf]";
 	mes "\"You will need " + @money + " GP.\"";