Reviewed the whole quest's storyline. + Reorganised the mob db to make it clearer.

1 files changed, 28 insertions, 26 deletions

diff --git a/npc/009-2/olana.txt b/npc/009-2/olana.txt
index 76381e7e..820fab7b 100644
--- a/npc/009-2/olana.txt
+++ b/npc/009-2/olana.txt
@@ -16,22 +16,23 @@
   if (Rossy_Quest == 2) goto L_Daughter;
 
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"I come from Tulimshar and am here with my two daughters, Rossy and Julia, for vacation. I already have been to Hurnscald once and I feeled quite safe...\"";
+  mes "\"I come from Tulimshar to Hurnscald for vacation with my two young daughters, Rossy and Julia. I already have been to Hurnscald once and felt quite safe in ths area.\"";
   next;
   mes "\"I let my two lovely girls play in the woods near by but they still didn't came back!\"";
-  mes "*Olana starts crying...*";
+  next;
+  mes "\"Please go and have a look in the forest near the swamps and come back to see me when you'll find them.\"";
   close;
 
 L_Daughter:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"I come from Tulimshar and am here with my twin daughters, Rossy and Julia, for vacation. I already have been to Hurnscald once and I feeled quite safe...\"";
-  next;
+  mes "\"I come from Tulimshar to Hurnscald for vacation with my two young daughters, Rossy and Julia. I already have been to Hurnscald once and felt quite safe in ths area.\"";
   mes "\"I let my two lovely girls play in the woods near by but they still didn't came back!\"";
+  next;
   mes "*Olana begins to sobb...*";
   next;
   menu
     "Wait, I saw Rossy, she is fine.", L_Help,
-    "Wait a bit, I'm sure they'll get back soon.", L_No;
+    "Wait a bit, I'm sure they'll both get back soon.", L_No;
 
 L_No:
   close;
@@ -42,7 +43,7 @@ L_Help:
   next;
   mes "\"Oh by the way, I would need your help myself too. My water supply ran out and I can't go down the stairs anymore, my knees hurt a lot.\"";
   menu
-    "Sure I can help you, how much do you need?", L_Set,
+    "Sure I can help you, how much water do you need?", L_Set,
     "Sorry, I'm too busy.", L_No;
 
 L_Set:
@@ -68,17 +69,17 @@ L_See:
 
 L_Task:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Thank you very much. I have another task for you, would you like to help me again?\"";
+  mes "\"It seems I have another task for you, would you like to help me again?\"";
   menu
-    "Tell me about it.", L_Cont,
+    "Sure, tell me about it.", L_Cont,
     "No, sorry, I'm busy.", L_No;
 
 L_Cont:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Can you give this letter to my little daughter please? Her teacher asked me to do it, but I can't walk up to my daughter, my knees...\"";
+  mes "\"Can you give this letter to my little daughter please? Her teacher asked me to do it, but I can't walk, my knees...\"";
   menu
     "Of course I can. Hand me the letter, I'll give it to Rossy as soon as I see her.", L_Let,
-    "No, sorry, I'm not interested in that sort of task. Hand it yourself.", L_No;
+    "No, sorry, I'm not interested in that sort of task. Hand it to her yourself.", L_No;
     
 L_Let:
   mes "[Olana]";
@@ -93,7 +94,7 @@ L_Bring:
   
 L_BL:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Good, now she remembers it! Please, "+ strcharinfo(0) +", help Rossy, she will tell you what to do.\"";
+  mes "\"Good, now she remembers that she needs to craft a potion! Please, "+ strcharinfo(0) +", help Rossy, she will tell you what to do.\"";
   close;
   
 L_Done:
@@ -103,21 +104,22 @@ L_Done:
   
 L_Rose:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"I have another task for you, would you help me?\"";
+  mes "\"I would like congratulate my daughter, Rossy, would you help me?\"";
   menu
-    "Tell me what to do.", L_RL,
+    "Just tell me what to do.", L_RL,
     "No, I'm busy, maybe later.", L_No;
     
 L_RL:
   mes "[Olana]";
   set Rossy_Quest, 9;
-  mes "\"Can you bring me 15 [Red Rose]s? I would like to give them to my daughter because she succesfully passed her magic exam!\"";
+  mes "\"Can you bring me 15 [Red Rose]s? I would like to give them to my daughter because she succesfully made her potion!\"";
   menu
-    "Ok, I will be back with these.", L_RG;
+    "Ok, I will be back with these.", L_RG,
+    "I'm allergic to roses, can't even touch them. Sorry.", L_No;
     
 L_RG:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Please, bring me 15 [Red Rose]s.\"";
+  mes "\"Please, bring me 15 [Red Rose]s as soon as you can.\"";
   close;
 
 L_RC:
@@ -129,23 +131,23 @@ L_RC:
   
 L_BringRose:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Now, please hand them to my brilliant daughter, Rossy.\"";
+  mes "\"Now please hand them to my brilliant daughter, Rossy.\"";
   close;
   
 L_Allergic:
   mes "[Olana]";
   set Rossy_Quest, 12;
-  mes "\"Did she liked my present?\"";
+  mes "\"Did she like my present?\"";
   menu
-    "Well, you should know that your daughter is allergic to roses.", -;
+    "Sure she did...", L_No,
+    "Well, you should of known that your daughter is allergic to roses.", -;
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"How stupid I am! Here, take some of my money and buy [Red Tulip]s instead, about the same amount. The roses are for you sweety.\"";
+  mes "\"How stupid I am! Here, take some of my money and buy [Red Tulip]s instead, about the same amount. Keep the flowers.\"";
   set zeny, zeny + 1500;
   next;
-  mes "[Olana]";
   mes "\"I want Rossy to be happy and to forgive me for my stupidity.\"";
   menu
-    "Ok, I will.", -;
+    "I will give her the tulips when I'll see her.", -;
   mes "[Olana]";
   mes "\"And don't forget to tell her that I'm really sorry.\"";
   close;
@@ -157,19 +159,19 @@ L_Give:
   
 L_Best:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\""+ strcharinfo(0) +", thank you for your help!\"";
+  mes "\"Thank you for your help "+ strcharinfo(0) +"!\"";
   close;
 
 L_Julia:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Where is Julia? I want to know where she is! Go and find her please "+ strcharinfo(0) +".\"";
+  mes "\"Where is Julia? I want to know where she is! Go and find her please "+ strcharinfo(0) +"!\"";
   close;
 
 L_End:
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Where is Julia? I want to know where she is! Go and find her please "+ strcharinfo(0) +".\"";
+  mes "\"Where is Julia? I want to know where she is! Go and find her please "+ strcharinfo(0) +"!\"";
   menu
-    "She'll be back soon, trust me, I saved her.", L_Found,
+    "She'll be back soon, trust me, I saved her from an evil spirit.", L_Found,
     "I didn't saw her yet, sorry.", L_No;
 
 L_Found: