Language checks and standardization++.

1 files changed, 16 insertions, 16 deletions

diff --git a/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/nathan.txt b/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/nathan.txt
index 17a57872..dde61d84 100644
--- a/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/nathan.txt
+++ b/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/nathan.txt
@@ -17,24 +17,24 @@
 	
 
 	mes "[Nathan the Miner]";
-	mes "\"It's very dangerous in here.  We had a big earthquake here just recently, too... so be careful!\"";
+	mes "\"It's very dangerous in here.  We had a big earthquake here just recently, too...  so be careful!\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nathan_Okay:
 	set TMW_Quest, 21;
 	mes "[Nathan]";
-	mes "\"Hey!  Just mining away down here.  Nickos, was worried?  Nothing down here we can't handle, but try to be safe down here.  The monsters can be rather aggressive.  You might want to check on Naem to make sure he's okay.  You can find him on the southeast corner of the mine.\"";
+	mes "\"Hey there!  Just mining away down here.  You say Nickos was worried about us?  Nothing down here we can't handle, but you should try to be safe down here yourself.  The monsters can be rather aggressive.  Come to think of it, you might want to check on Naem to make sure he's okay.  You can find him in the southeast parts of the mine.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nathan_Cool:
 	mes "[Nathan]";
-	mes "\"Hey, be careful down here, the monsters can be rather aggressive.  You might want to check on Naem.  He's at the southeast corner of the mine.\"";
+	mes "\"Hey, be careful down here, the monsters can be rather aggressive!  You might want to check on Naem too.  He's at the southeast parts of the mine.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nathan_Help_1:
 	set TMW_Quest, 24;
 	mes "[Nathan]";
-	mes "\"Oh hey again.  Nickos told you we need some help down here?  Yeah, Naem could use some help moving his bags of ore to me.  He's got a lot of work built up.  Just go talk to him and he'll give you the bags.  You might have to make a few trips, but I'll make it worth your troubles.\"";
+	mes "\"Oh, hey again!  Nickos told you we need some help down here too?  Yeah, Naem could use a spare pair of hands moving his bags of ore to me.  He's got a lot of work built up.  Just go talk to him and he'll give you the bags.  You might have to make a few trips, but I'll make it worth your troubles.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nathan_Waits_1:
@@ -44,23 +44,23 @@ L_Nathan_Waits_1:
 
 L_Nathan_Help_2:
 	set TMW_Quest, 26;
-	mes "[Nathan]";
 	mes "You give the bag of ore to Nathan";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Ah, thank you.  Just a couple more and we'll be caught up.\"";
+	mes "[Nathan]";
+	mes "\"Ah, thank you.  Just a couple more and we'll have caught up!\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nathan_Waits_2:
 	mes "[Nathan]";
-	mes "\"Just a couple more and we'll be caught up.\"";
+	mes "\"Just a couple more and we'll be all caught up!\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nathan_Help_3:
 	set TMW_Quest, 28;
-	mes "[Nathan]";
-	mes "You hand the bag of ore to Nathan";
+	mes "You hand the bag of ore to Nathan.";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Just one more bag and you'll be done.\"";
+	mes "[Nathan]";
+	mes "\"Just one more bag and you'll be done!\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nathan_Waits_3:
@@ -74,11 +74,11 @@ L_Nathan_Help_Done:
 	set TMW_Quest, 30;
 	getitem "MinersHat", 1;
 	mes "[Nathan]";
-	mes "You hand the bag of ore to Nathan";
+	mes "You hand the bag of ore to Nathan.";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Ah, that should be it.  Thank you for your help.  Here, take this miner's hat.  You're a real miner now!\"";
+	mes "\"Ah, that should be it!  Thank you for your help.  Here, take this [Miner's Hat].  You're a real miner now!\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"I noticed a problem with these angry scorpions down here, they seem to make things much more difficult.  Maybe you could tell Nickos about it?\"";
+	mes "\"Oh, and I noticed a problem with these angry scorpions down here, they seem to make things much more difficult.  Maybe you could tell Nickos about it on your way out?\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nathan_TooMany:
@@ -88,17 +88,17 @@ L_Nathan_TooMany:
 
 L_Nathan_Help_Cool:
 	mes "[Nathan]";
-	mes "\"Be safe down here, it's dangerous.  Mining is a dangerous job, but somebody's got to do it.\"";
+	mes "\"Be safe down here, it's dangerous for the unexperienced.  Mining is a dangerous job, but somebody's got to do it!\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nathan_UGQ_Naem:
 	mes "[Nathan]";
-	mes "\"Thanks for thinning down the angry scorpion numbers.  It has made mining a little easier down here.  Oh, Nickos has given you permission to check out the underground palace?  Talk to Naem, he's got the key and the code.\"";
+	mes "\"Thanks for thinning down the angry scorpion population.  It sure has made mining a little easier down here!  Oh, you say Nickos has given you permission to check out the underground palace?  Talk to Naem, he's got the key and the code.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Nathan_Complete:
 	mes "[Nathan]";
-	mes "\"Mining is a dangerous job, but somebody's got to do it.\"";
+	mes "\"Mining is a dangerous job, but somebody's got to do it!\"";
 	close;
 
 }