Language polishing on Bernard.

1 files changed, 17 insertions, 17 deletions

diff --git a/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/bernard.txt b/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/bernard.txt
index efef3167..1cf63d8c 100755
--- a/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/bernard.txt
+++ b/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/bernard.txt
@@ -12,20 +12,20 @@
 
 L_Opening0:
 	mes "[Bernard]";
-	mes "\"In Tulimshar, there are a lot of maggots. I need a favor, please help me. Will you?\"";
+	mes "\"Tulimshar is crawling with maggots. Hey, I need a favor, could you help me a bit?\"";
 	next;
 	goto L_Ask;
 
 L_Opening1:
 	mes "[Bernard	]";
-	mes "\"The taste of maggots in soup is... unforgettable, taste so good. Will you help me kill some?\"";
+	mes "\"The taste of maggots in soup is... unforgettable, they taste simply divine! Would you help me kill some?\"";
 	next;
 	goto L_Ask;
 
 L_Ask:
 	menu
-		"Yes", L_Yes,
-		"No", L_No;
+		"Yes.", L_Yes,
+		"No.", L_No;
 
 L_Yes:
 	set @TEMP, rand(2);
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ L_Yes:
 
 L_Req0:
 	mes "[Bernard]";
-	mes "\"I need a [Roasted Maggot] for my soup.\"";
+	mes "\"Great! I need a [Roasted Maggot] for my soup.\"";
 	next;
 	goto L_Set;
 
@@ -47,14 +47,14 @@ L_Req1:
 L_Set:
 	set TMW_Quest,1;
 	mes "[Bernard]";
-	mes "\"Please bring me it!\"";
+	mes "\"Please bring it to me!\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Progress:
 	if (countitem("RoastedMaggot") < 1) goto L_NotEnough;
 	mes "[Bernard]";
-	mes "\"Perfect! It's perfect !";
-	mes "You brought me my Roasted Maggot!  Here, have some cake.\"";
+	mes "\"Oooh, perfect! It's perfect!";
+	mes "You brought me my Roasted Maggot! Here, have some cake for your troubles.\"";
 	getinventorylist;
 	if (@inventorylist_count - (countitem("RoastedMaggot") == 1) > 99 - (countitem("CherryCake") == 0) ) goto L_TooMany;
 	delitem "RoastedMaggot", 1;
@@ -66,8 +66,8 @@ L_Progress:
 L_Progress2:
         if (countitem("MaggotSlime") < 3) goto L_NotEnough1;
         mes "[Bernard]";
-        mes "\"Nice ! It'll perfect, so perfect !";           
-        mes "You brought me the 3 maggots slimes! Here, have some beer.\"";
+        mes "\"Nice! They're perfect, just perfect!";           
+        mes "You brought me the 3 maggot slimes! Here, have some beer as reward.\"";
         getinventorylist;             
         if ((@inventorylist_count - (countitem("MaggotSlime") == 3) > 99  - (countitem("Beer") == 0) )) goto L_TooMany;
         delitem "MaggotSlime", 3;
@@ -79,28 +79,28 @@ L_Progress2:
 
 L_NotEnough:
 	mes "[Bernard]";
-	mes "\"Please hurry and bring me a [Roasted Maggot].\"";
+	mes "\"Oh, please hurry and bring me a [Roasted Maggot]. I'm yearning for maggot soup!\"";
 	close;
 
 L_NotEnough1:
         mes "[Bernard]";
-        mes "\"Please hurry and bring me 3 [Maggot Slime]s.\"";
+        mes "\"Please do hurry and bring me 3 [Maggot Slime]s, so I can finish my soup!\"";
         close;
 
 
 L_Done1:
 	mes "[Bernard]";
-	mes "\"Thank you so much !\"";
-	mes "\"But something is missing to make the soup creamy!\"";
+	mes "\"Thank you so much!\"";
+	mes "\"But... something is missing to make the soup creamy.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"I need 3 [Maggot Slime]s for the soup.\"";
-	mes "\"Bring me them. I'll give you something if you do.\"";
+	mes "\"I need 3 [Maggot Slime]s for that.\"";
+	mes "\"Bring them to me, and I'll give you something nice.\"";
 	set TMW_Quest,3;
 	close;
 
 L_Done2:
         mes "[Bernard]";
-        mes "\"I didn't tell you, I also put beer in my soup.  I hope you like beer as much as I do because..\"";
+        mes "\"I didn't mention it before, but I also put beer in my soup.  I hope you like beer as much as I do, because, you see...\"";
         next;
         mes "\"Beer is life!\"";
         close;