Minor spelling/grammar/punctuation updates.

Rossy quest and July news entry

4 files changed, 10 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/news.txt b/world/map/news.txt
index 2ad0bdac..6ac00660 100644
--- a/world/map/news.txt
+++ b/world/map/news.txt
@@ -30,14 +30,14 @@
 ##0 Hurnscald Inn, has been away to Tulimshar with
 ##0 her family since before the Earthquake.
 ##0 "The Earthquake may of happened a couple years
-##0 ago, but the everything is still messed up.
+##0 ago, but everything is still messed up.
 ##0 I would've returned immediately, but I didn't
 ##0 want to put my family at risk until travel
 ##0 became a little safer."
 
 ##0 When asked about her daughters, Olana smiled
-##0 "They love wandering the woods around here,
-##0 other than the occasional bandit group, things
+##0 "They love wandering the woods around here.
+##0 Other than the occasional bandit group, things
 ##0 are usually much more peaceful around here than
 ##0 in Tulimshar.  I just hope they don't wander
 ##0 near these caves...I've heard many of them can
diff --git a/world/map/npc/009-2/olana.txt b/world/map/npc/009-2/olana.txt
index 0cc855b1..4faa2567 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/009-2/olana.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/009-2/olana.txt
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
   if (Rossy_Quest == 1 || Rossy_Quest == 2) goto L_Daughter;
 
   mes "[Olana]";
-  mes "\"Hello. We don't usually get a lot of guests here.\"";
+  mes "\"Hello. We don't usually get guests back here.\"";
   next;
   mes "\"My name is Olana and my father owns this inn. I live in Tulimshar, but came to Hurnscald on vacation with my two young daughters, Rossy and Julia.\"";
   if (baselevel < 50) close;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt b/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt
index 835487fe..f93be8b2 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/025-1/rossy.txt
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   mes "[Young Girl]";
   mes "\"No. I am crying because I lost all my fruits. My sister and I were collecting some near Dimond's Cove, but then I stumbled on a giant snail and it attacked us!";
   next;
-  mes "But we were lucky, because the snail is really slow and we ran away from it. Julia ran to the left and I ran to the right. The snail got pretty confused, because we are identical twins... But the problem is that I dropped the basket full of fruits on the ground and that evil snail ate them all! And I can't find Julia to help me collect more fruits.\"";
+  mes "But we were lucky, because the snail is really slow and we ran away from it. Julia ran to the left and I ran to the right. The snail got pretty confused, because we are identical twins... But the problem is that I dropped the basket full of fruits on the ground and that evil snail ate them all! And now I can't find Julia to help me collect more fruits.\"";
   next;
   menu
     "Did you say Julia? I talked to you mother. She is very worried about you.", -;
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ L_Check:
   mes "[Rossy]";
   set Rossy_Quest, 4;
   getexp 2000, 0;
-  mes "\"I can't believe it, you got them all! Please give them to my mother, she is in one of the buildings in the town north east from here. Tell her it is a gift from me and Julia and there is no reason to worry about us.\"";
+  mes "\"I can't believe it, you got them all! Please give them to my mother. She is in one of the buildings in the town north east from here. Tell her it is a gift from me and Julia and there is no reason to worry about us.\"";
   next;
   mes "(Rossy mumbles to herself)   *I hope*   ";
   next;
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ L_End:
   mes "[Rossy]";
   mes "\"Oh no, Julia... Why would you go to that scary place? Have you seen her yet?\"";
   menu
-    "She'll be back soon, trust me, I saved her.", L_Found,
+    "She'll be back soon, trust me. I saved her.", L_Found,
     "I didn't see her yet, sorry.", L_No;
 
 L_Found:
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ L_Clear:
 
 L_FinalEnd:
   mes "[Rossy]";
-  mes "\"Julia and I are playing hide and seek right now, it is funny in the forest!\"";
+  mes "\"Julia and I are playing hide and seek right now. It is fun in the forest!\"";
   mes "*The young girl laughs quietly.*";
   close;
 
diff --git a/world/map/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt b/world/map/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt
index 5d1d1ad7..bc3c9f27 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/025-4/clauquer.txt
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ L_Help:
     "I'm not lost and I don't need help, bye.", L_No;
   next;
   mes "[Clauquer]";
-  mes "\"How do I know you're looking for her? Well, because I saw her. I also heard her, she screamed and still screams like hell. Moreover, I don't think you would enter these caves just for fun!\"";
+  mes "\"How do I know you're looking for her? Well, because I saw her. I also heard her. She screamed, and still screams like hell. Moreover, I don't think you would enter these caves just for fun!\"";
   menu
     "Of course not.", -;
   next;
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ L_Help:
     "Please go on.", -;
 L_Advice:
   mes "[Clauquer]";
-  mes "\"I advise you to be mentally prepared for this rescue operation. A fey nature spirit creature kidnapped the little girl and is planning to replace her with a changeling.\"";
+  mes "\"I advise you to be mentally prepared for this rescue operation. A fey nature spirit kidnapped the little girl and is planning to replace her with a changeling.\"";
   next;
   mes "\"The old tales of Hurnscald say this spirit always exchanges his offspring with beautiful and smart human children, to use them as servants. And his offspring usually forget about their own origin, growing up in a human family. But they are usually 'people' with really bad tempers, the kind of people who do terrible things in this world...\"";
   next;