add revisions about : argeas/bandit; demon_mask; hinnak; inspector; orum_quest and kaizei/fur_quest

6 files changed, 66 insertions, 59 deletions

diff --git a/quests/argeas/bandit.xml b/quests/argeas/bandit.xml
index ad43013c..4024c3d5 100644
--- a/quests/argeas/bandit.xml
+++ b/quests/argeas/bandit.xml
@@ -11,27 +11,30 @@
     <effect map="009-2.tmx" npc="182" value="2,6" effect="46"/>
     <quest name="Bandit Quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="1">
       <name>Lena</name>
-      <text>You accepted to help Lena to fight bandits, fight them and come back with 10 [@@4016|@@] !</text>
+      <text>You agree to help. Find the Bandit Caves and kill Bandits. Pick up 10 Bandit Hoods.</text>
+      <text>Return to Lena with the Bandit Hoods.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Bandit Quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="2">
       <name>Lena</name>
-      <text>You got a [@@770|@@] !</text>
+      <text>As a reward, you get a Fairy Hat [@@770|@@]!</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Bandit Quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="3">
       <name>Lena</name>
-      <text>Sadly the leader of bandits are still in a cave just west of Hurnscald, defeat him !</text>
+      <text>Now Lena asks you to kill the Bandit Lord.</text>
+      <text>You agree to do it. First, go through the Hermit's Cave and Lake Cave to find Bryant's Cave. There, Bryant will instruct you.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Bandit Quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="4">
       <name>Lena</name>
-      <text>Bryant find the Bandit Lord, he is in cave of south and east, a red carpet is in front of cave. Be strong and defeat the Bandit Lord !</text>
+      <text>Next, search within the Lake Cave for a cave entrance with a red carpet outside. Go in to fight the Bandit Lord.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Bandit Quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="5">
       <name>Lena</name>
-      <text>You finally defeat the Bandit Lord ! Go to see Lena.</text>
+      <text>You slayed the Bandit Lord! Now return to Lena once more.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Bandit Quest" group="Argeas" complete="6">
       <name>Lena</name>
-      <text>You got the incredible [@@782|@@] ! The peace coming back to Hurnscald.</text>
+      <text>As a reward, you get the incredible Forest Armor [@@782|@@]!</text>
+      <text>You have finished the quest and Hurnscald is at peace again. Well done!</text>
     </quest>
   </var>
 </quests>
diff --git a/quests/argeas/demon_mask.xml b/quests/argeas/demon_mask.xml
index 874c3994..77a5ee67 100644
--- a/quests/argeas/demon_mask.xml
+++ b/quests/argeas/demon_mask.xml
@@ -11,15 +11,16 @@
     <effect map="013-3.tmx" npc="111" value="3" effect="46"/>
     <quest name="Demon Mask" group="Argeas" incomplete="1">
       <name>Demon Mask</name>
-      <text>You learned the ritual for open the barrier in north of mine. Bring a [@@1198|@@] for pass the barrier.</text>
+      <text>From one of the bookshelves in the mines, you learn about the ritual.</text>
+      <text>You will need many items, including a Jack O Soul [@@1198|@@].</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Demon Mask" group="Argeas" incomplete="2">
       <name>Demon Mask</name>
-      <text>You passed the barrier, you need some item for open the chest.</text>
+      <text>Pass through the barrier, and talk to the chest.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Demon Mask" group="Argeas" complete="3">
       <name>Demon Mask</name>
-      <text>You got a [@@679|@@].</text>
+      <text>You got the Demon Mask [@@679|@@]! Congratz!</text>
     </quest>
   </var>
 </quests>
diff --git a/quests/argeas/hinnak.xml b/quests/argeas/hinnak.xml
index 7195e799..7c50c4c0 100644
--- a/quests/argeas/hinnak.xml
+++ b/quests/argeas/hinnak.xml
@@ -11,14 +11,14 @@
     <effect map="008-1.tmx" npc="142" value="2" effect="46"/>
     <quest name="Farmer's Scythe" group="Argeas" incomplete="1">
       <name>Hinnak</name>
-      <text>The Hinnak farmer want catch pinkies who destroy his harvest.</text>
-      <text>He want pink antennas for proof of their capture.</text>
+      <text>You agree to help. Hunt Pinkies and collect 10 Pink Antennae. (But avoid Ginaria, who loves Pinkies!)</text>
+      <text>Return to Hinnak with the Pink Antennae.</text>
       <text/>
       <text>%%E  10 [@@614|@@]</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Farmer's Scythe" group="Argeas" complete="2">
       <name>Hinnak</name>
-      <text>He is happy by your hunt. You got a great weapon for your success.</text>
+      <text>You have completed the task. The Scythe, an excellent weapon, is your reward!</text>
       <text/>
       <text>Quest Giver: Hinnak.</text>
       <text>Reward: [@@623|@@].</text>
diff --git a/quests/argeas/inspector.xml b/quests/argeas/inspector.xml
index 2fc715d3..df2dd9ce 100644
--- a/quests/argeas/inspector.xml
+++ b/quests/argeas/inspector.xml
@@ -11,67 +11,69 @@
     <effect map="009-2.tmx" npc="150" value="15" effect="46"/>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="1">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>Inspector need your help for solve the robberie problem, talk to villagers.</text>
+      <text>The Inspector in Hurnscald needs help to solve robberies.</text>
+      <text>You agree to help. Start by interviewing the Old Woman in Hurnscald.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="2">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>The old Woman seem wanted to talk only with inspector.</text>
-      <text>Talk to this to inspector, or maybe if you wear the same outfit of inspector...</text>
+      <text>Report back to the Inspector.</text>
+      <text>Interview the Old Woman again while wearing Dark Blue clothing.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="3">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>You have an information ! Talk to this to inspector !</text>
+      <text>Report back to the Inspector.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="4">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>The troup leader is suspect, try to talk with him he moved to Tulimshar recently.</text>
+      <text>Interview the Troupe Leader at the Wizard's Rest in Tulimshar.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="5">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>The troup leader seeing an old man near to the troup in Hurnscald.</text>
-      <text>Inspector need this information.</text>
+      <text>Report back to the Inspector.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="6">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>You have to interrogate the old man, find him.</text>
+      <text>Interrogate the Old Man in Hurnscald.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="7">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>That seem are not the old man.</text>
-      <text>Talk to this to inspector, or verify the alibi this with his wife.</text>
+      <text>Report back to the Inspector.</text>
+      <text>Interview the Old Woman yet again.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="8">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>Defenetly, his wife say they are stay in home all night.</text>
+      <text>Report back to the Inspector.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="9">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>We return to the first point, ask villagers again...</text>
+      <text>Interview the Old Woman once more. </text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="10">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>Seem the old woman see someone with a large satchel, talk to this to inspector.</text>
+      <text>Interview Malek the Miner at the Woodland Mining Camp north of Hurnscald.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="11">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>Search in basement, something here has informations.</text>
+      <text>Search the bookcase in the Woodland Mining Camp basement. </text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="12">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>You find a mask and a note, grind it to inspector.</text>
+      <text>You discover a mask and a note inside a hollowed out book. Report back to the Inspector and show him what you found. </text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="13">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>Inspector want you for return the mask to the troup.</text>
+      <text>The Inspector sends you back to the Troupe Leader.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" incomplete="14">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>The troup leader are happy by your job, he give you a [@@678|@@] !</text>
+      <text>The Troupe Leader is thankful for what you have done. </text>
+      <text>As a reward, you get to keep the mask that you found, the Noh Mask [@@678|@@]!</text>
+      <text/>
       <text>You receive 1500 EXP too.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Robberies In Hurnscald" group="Argeas" complete="15">
       <name>Inspector</name>
-      <text>The roberrie of Hurnscald are solved, but we don't know who make this...</text>
+      <text>You have finished the quest. Well done! All the stolen items have been found in the Woodland Mining Camp, but the identity of the robber remains a mystery!</text>
       <text>You receive 2500 EXP.</text>
     </quest>
   </var>
diff --git a/quests/argeas/orum_quest.xml b/quests/argeas/orum_quest.xml
index e4bcac8b..186bcc55 100644
--- a/quests/argeas/orum_quest.xml
+++ b/quests/argeas/orum_quest.xml
@@ -75,11 +75,11 @@
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="15">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>You pass the door, what is this cave ?</text>
+      <text>Talk to Orum and offer your services.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="16">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>Prove you are serious, and bring to Orum this items :</text>
+      <text>Orum asks for items.</text>
       <text/>
       <text>%%E 5 [@@566|@@]</text>
       <text>%%E 5 [@@701|@@]</text>
@@ -87,15 +87,15 @@
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="17">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>Orum gave you the first magic flower, place it in the right place.</text>
+      <text>You get an Orange Summoning Flower. Leave the Woodland Hills Labyrinth and place the flower in the right location.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="18">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>The first flower is placed, go back to Orum.</text>
+      <text>Return to Orum.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="19">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>Prove you are serious, and bring to Orum this items :</text>
+      <text>Orum asks for more items.</text>
       <text/>
       <text>%%E 5 [@@565|@@]</text>
       <text>%%E 5 [@@507|@@]</text>
@@ -103,15 +103,15 @@
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="20">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>Orum gave you the second magic flower, place it in the right place.</text>
+      <text>You get a second flower, a Purple Summoning Flower. Leave the Woodland Hills Labyrinth and place the flower in the right location.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="21">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>The second flower is placed, go back to Orum.</text>
+      <text>Return to Orum.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="22">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>Prove you are serious, and bring to Orum this items :</text>
+      <text>Orum asks for more items.</text>
       <text/>
       <text>%%E 5 [@@611|@@]</text>
       <text>%%E 5 [@@517|@@]</text>
@@ -119,15 +119,15 @@
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="23">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>Orum gave you the third magic flower, place it in the right place.</text>
+      <text>You get a third flower, a White Summoning Flower. Leave the Woodland Hills Labyrinth and place the flower in the right location.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="24">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>The second third is placed, go back to Orum.</text>
+      <text>Return to Orum.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="25">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>Prove you are serious, and bring to Orum this items :</text>
+      <text>Orum asks for more items.</text>
       <text/>
       <text>%%E 5 [@@613|@@]</text>
       <text>%%E 5 [@@4000|@@]</text>
@@ -135,15 +135,15 @@
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="26">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>Orum gave you the fourth magic flower, place it in the right place.</text>
+      <text>You get a fourth flower, a Yellow Summoning Flower. Leave the Woodland Hills Labyrinth and place the flower in the right location.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="27">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>The second fourth is placed, go back to Orum.</text>
+      <text>Return to Orum.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="28">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>Here we go for the last flower, bring to Orum this items :</text>
+      <text>Orum asks for more items.</text>
       <text/>
       <text>%%E 20 [@@743|@@]</text>
       <text>%%E 5 [@@709|@@]</text>
@@ -152,26 +152,26 @@
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="29">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>Ouch... You fail the mixture. But, you won a [@@897|@@] !</text>
-      <text>Bring a [@@661|@@] to Orum.</text>
+      <text>Your choice did not work. But you get the beautiful [@@897|@@] !</text>
+      <text>Orum needs another [@@661|@@] to complete the mixture. Give it to him.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="30">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>Orum gave you the fourth magic flower, place it in the right place.</text>
+      <text>You get a fifth flower, a Red Summoning Flower. Leave the Woodland Hills Labyrinth and place the flower in the right location.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" incomplete="31">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>The second fourth is placed, go back to Orum.</text>
+      <text>Return to Orum.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Orum and Waric follow-up quest" group="Argeas" complete="32">
       <name>Orum</name>
-      <text>The pentagram is ended. Orum is happy by your job.</text>
+      <text>You have finished Part 1 of the quest, and received the rewards. Well done! (Part 2 is OPTIONAL.)</text>
       <text/>
       <text>You won 100,000 GP and 100,000 EXP.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Dark Magic Skill" group="Argeas" incomplete="33">
       <name>Waric</name>
-      <text>Are you really ready for learn the Dark Skill ?</text>
+      <text>If you choose to proceed, follow Waric's instructions and take the oath.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Dark Magic Skill" group="Argeas" incomplete="34">
       <name>Waric</name>
@@ -183,30 +183,30 @@
     </quest>
     <quest name="Dark Magic Skill" group="Argeas" incomplete="36">
       <name>Waric</name>
-      <text>You are officialy the ennemie of Sagatha, welcome in the dark side !</text>
+      <text>You have received the Dark Magic Skill. Welcome to the dark side!</text>
       <text/>
       <text>You won 150,000 EXP.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Dark Magic Skill" group="Argeas" incomplete="37">
       <name>Waric</name>
-      <text>You learn #helorp ! Try to learn some speel to Waric.</text>
+      <text>Waric teaches you a spell to summon Wicked Mushrooms: #helorp (It requires 1 Dark Crystal and 1 Small Mushroom.) </text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Dark Magic Skill" group="Argeas" incomplete="38">
       <name>Waric</name>
-      <text>You learn #phlex ! Try to learn some speel to Waric.</text>
+      <text>Waric teaches you a spell to poison players with a poison dart: #phlex (It requires 2 Roots.)</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Dark Magic Skill" group="Argeas" incomplete="39">
       <name>Waric</name>
-      <text>This time Waric need ingredient for learn you a spell.</text>
+      <text>Waric needs items before he will teach you the next spell.</text>
       <text>Gring him a [@@740|@@] and a [@@714|@@].</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Dark Magic Skill" group="Argeas" incomplete="40">
       <name>Waric</name>
-      <text>Ask Waric about the spell.</text>
+      <text>Waric teaches you a spell to summon Snakes: #halhiss (It requires 1 Dark Crystal and 1 Snake Egg.)</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Dark Magic Skill" group="Argeas" complete="41">
       <name>Waric</name>
-      <text>You learn #halhiss, this is the last spell. For now...</text>
+      <text>That is all Waric will teach you, for now.</text>
     </quest>
   </var>
 </quests>
diff --git a/quests/kaizei/fur_quest.xml b/quests/kaizei/fur_quest.xml
index 2061cfb8..499f2f0c 100644
--- a/quests/kaizei/fur_quest.xml
+++ b/quests/kaizei/fur_quest.xml
@@ -55,18 +55,19 @@
     </quest>
     <quest name="Agostine The Tailor" group="Kaizei" complete="9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23">
       <name>Fur Quest</name>
-      <text>Agostine made a pair of matching Fur Boots for you.  Congratz!</text>
+      <text>Agostine made a pair of matching Fur Boots for you. Congratz!</text>
       <text/>
       <text>Quest Giver: Agostine.</text>
       <text>Reward: [@@655|@@]</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Lora Tay The Legendary Seamstress" group="Argeas" incomplete="10">
       <name>Lora Tay</name>
-      <text>Lora Tay has difficulty talking.</text>
+      <text>Lora Tay starts coughing and has difficulty talking. Give her a Bottle of Water.</text>
     </quest>
     <quest name="Lora Tay The Legendary Seamstress" group="Argeas" complete="11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23">
       <name>Lora Tay</name>
-      <text>A Bottle of Water has cured her cough.  Nice!</text>
+      <text>The water has calmed her cough. Nicely done!</text>
+      <text>Lora Tay will now make or alter clothing for you, if you want.</text>
       <text/>
       <text>Reward: 50,000 EXP.</text>
     </quest>