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authorNick Ashley <nick@shley.us>2015-05-03 22:29:02 -0400
committermekolat <mekolat@users.noreply.github.com>2015-05-04 01:49:46 -0400
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A few improvements to the beginner's Candor Quest Log
-rw-r--r--quests.xml8
1 files changed, 4 insertions, 4 deletions
diff --git a/quests.xml b/quests.xml
index 5520ac98..9536b991 100644
--- a/quests.xml
+++ b/quests.xml
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
</quest>
<quest name="Tutorial" group="Candor Island" incomplete="3">
<name>Introduction</name>
- <text>Sorfina wants to make sure that you can dress yourself. Open up your inventory, and equip the clothes you took from the dresser.</text>
+ <text>Sorfina wants to make sure that you can dress yourself. Open up your inventory and equip the clothes you took from the dresser.</text>
<text>You can equip items irregardless of your location, but you may prefer to change in the privacy of the corner at (26,23) in Candor Island Indoor.</text>
</quest>
<quest name="Tutorial" group="Candor Island" incomplete="4">
@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@
</quest>
<quest name="Tutorial" group="Candor Island" complete="8">
<name>Introduction</name>
- <text>You finished all the work that Tanisha had for you. She still seems happy to talk to you though.</text>
- <text>Tanisha is located at (110,88) in Candor Island Indoor.</text>
+ <text>You finished all the work that Sorfina and Tanisha had for you. They still seem happy to talk to you though.</text>
+ <text>Sorfina is located at (27,27) and Tanisha is located at (110,88) – both are in Candor Island Indoor.</text>
</quest>
<quest name="Bully" group="Candor Island" incomplete="9">
<name>Bully</name>
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
<effect map="029-1.tmx" npc="165" value="1,2,3" effect="46"/>
<quest name="Bug Bomb" group="Candor Island" incomplete="1">
<name>Buggy</name>
- <text>Zegas needs some help. As an aspiring adventure, you should see if you can help her out.</text>
+ <text>Zegas needs some help. As an aspiring adventure, you should see if you can assist her.</text>
</quest>
<quest name="Bug Bomb" group="Candor Island" incomplete="2">
<name>A what bomb?</name>