Update kevin.txt - fix style and UX issues

1 files changed, 14 insertions, 12 deletions

diff --git a/npc/009-3/kevin.txt b/npc/009-3/kevin.txt
index 622b4624f..419854010 100644
--- a/npc/009-3/kevin.txt
+++ b/npc/009-3/kevin.txt
@@ -3,11 +3,10 @@
 //    Saulc
 //    Vasily_Makarov (original from Evol)
 //    Jesusalva
-//Dye Quest added by:
+// Dye Quest added by:
 //     Povo
 // Description:
-// Description:
-//    Status Reset
+//    Status Reset, mixed gem powder, dye
 
 009-3,39,48,0	script	Kevin	NPC_PLAYER,{
 
@@ -96,16 +95,19 @@ L_Powder:
 
 L_Dye:
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Actually, using a byproduct of my other works and a few additional ingredients, I could make @@", getitemlink(PinkDye));
+    mesq l("Actually, using a byproduct of my other works and a few additional ingredients, I could make a %s", 
+                      getitemlink(PinkDye));
     if (BaseLevel < 25) {
-        mesq l("Hmm...actually nevermind.");
+        mesq l("Hmm...actually, nevermind.");
         next;
-        mesq l("I cannot in good faith ask someone with such little experience to risk their life for something so trivial. Come back when you are stronger.");
+        mesq l("I cannot in good faith ask someone with so little experience to risk their life for something so trivial.");
+        mesq l("Come back when you are stronger.");
         next;
         goto L_Menu;
     }
     next;
-    mesq l("Bring me 1 @@, 20 @@, and 30 @@ and I can make it for you... oh and it will be 500 GP for my work.", getitemlink(BottleOfTonoriWater), getitemlink(PinkBlobime), getitemlink(Plushroom)); 
+    mesq l("Bring me %d %s, %d %s, and %d %s and I can make it for you... oh and it will be %d GP for my work.", 
+                      1, getitemlink(BottleOfTonoriWater), 20, getitemlink(PinkBlobime), 50, getitemlink(Plushroom), 500); 
     if (getq(HalinarzoQuest_Kevin) < 1) 
         setq HalinarzoQuest_Kevin, 1;
    next;
@@ -113,13 +115,15 @@ L_Dye:
         l("Yeah, I need one."),
         l("Thanks for the help, but no."),
         l("Actually, nevermind. Good bye!");
+    mes "";
     if (@menu == 2)
         goto L_Menu;
 
     if (@menu == 3)
         goto L_Quit;
 
-    if (countitem(BottleOfTonoriWater) >= 1 && countitem(PinkBlobime) >= 20 &&
+    if (countitem(BottleOfTonoriWater) >= 1 &&
+          countitem(PinkBlobime) >= 20 &&
           countitem(Plushroom) >= 30 && Zeny >= 500) {
         inventoryplace PinkDye, 1, EmptyBottle, 1;
         delitem BottleOfTonoriWater, 1;
@@ -128,18 +132,17 @@ L_Dye:
         Zeny=Zeny-500;
         getitem PinkDye, 1;
         getitem EmptyBottle, 1;
-        if(getq(HalinarzoQuest_Kevin) == 1 ) {
+        if (getq(HalinarzoQuest_Kevin) == 1) {
             setq HalinarzoQuest_Kevin, 2;
             getexp 300, 0;
         }   
         mesn;
-        mesq l("Thanks! Here you go. Perhaps you need another one?");
+        mesq l("Thanks! Here you go. Perhaps you want another one?");
         next;
         goto L_Dye;
     } else {
         mesn;
         mesq l("Sorry, you don't seem to have everything I need.");
-        next;
     }
     close;
 
@@ -148,7 +151,6 @@ L_Quit:
     goodbye;
     close;
     
-    
 OnInit:
     .@npcId = getnpcid(.name$);
     setunitdata(.@npcId, UDT_HEADTOP, FancyHat);