1 files changed, 12 insertions, 13 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
index d31c84391..daf149a72 100644
--- a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
+++ b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
@@ -4,8 +4,9 @@
 //    Qwerty Dragon
 //    Reid
 //    Vasily_Makarov
+//    Jesusalva
 // Description:
-//    Starting script of Evol Online.
+//    Starting script of Evol Online, modified for TMW2.
 
 000-0,23,20,0	script	Sailors	NPC_SAILORS,6,6,{
 
@@ -15,38 +16,34 @@ OnTouch:
     if (.@lang >= 0 && .@lang <= 9) Lang = .@lang;
 
     mesn "Narrator";
-    mes col(l("You are on a raft, adrift in the sea."), 9);
+    mes col(l("You open your eyes. The salt water is not helping your vision."), 9);
     next;
-    mes col(l("With hunger, thirst, and sleep as your only companions, you have the disturbing realization that you can't remember anything of your former life or identity."), 9);
+    mes col(l("A blur shape forms in your front. It seems to be a large ship."), 9);
     next;
-    mes col(l("All of a sudden, you hear voices from above."), 9);
+    mes col(l("Wait. A ship? Where are you, after all?"), 9);
     next;
-    mes col(l("Your body aches, even your hair hurts, and the bright daylight is painful."), 9);
+    mes col(l("Your body aches. You can't remember what happened."), 9);
     next;
-    mes col(l("But still, you open your eyes and see a large ship before you!"), 9);
-    next;
-    mes col(l("Aboard stand sailors trying to communicate with you."), 9);
+    mes col(l("But this is not important now. The ships sailors are shouting at you!"), 9);
     next;
 
     setcamnpc "Sailors", -64, -32;
     mesn "Kralog Voice";
-    mesq lg("Hey Frenchy!");
+    mesq lg("Hey kid! Can you hear me?");
     next;
 
     setcamnpc "Sailors", 0, -32;
     mesn "Human Voice";
-    mesq lg("Why Frenchy? It's a Russian!");
+    mesq lg("Hear you? How do you even know she can understand you?!", "Hear you? How do you even know he can understand you?!");
     next;
 
     setcamnpc "Sailors", 144, -80;
     mesn "Tritan Voice";
-    mesq lg("What are you guys saying ? It's a Yoiis!");
+    mesq lg("We speak various languages on this world. Let's try gesturing!");
     next;
 
     setcamnpc;
     mesn "Raijin Voice";
-    mesq lg("You stupid, she's English, look at the shape of her head.", "You stupid, he's English, look at the shape of his head.");
-    next;
     mesq l("Hey you! Can you hear us? Are you okay?");
     next;
     restorecam;
@@ -66,6 +63,8 @@ OnTouch:
     mesn "Narrator";
     mes col(l("The sailors take you aboard their ship."), 9);
     next;
+    mes col(l("You faint from the pain. At least now, you are in good hands."), 9);
+    next;
     mes col(l("Click on the NPCs (Non-Player Characters) around you to continue the introduction."), 9);
     next;