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| -rw-r--r-- | npc/003-10/guarddevoir.txt | 52 |
1 files changed, 26 insertions, 26 deletions
diff --git a/npc/003-10/guarddevoir.txt b/npc/003-10/guarddevoir.txt index 52d8a16ee..c63c351d8 100644 --- a/npc/003-10/guarddevoir.txt +++ b/npc/003-10/guarddevoir.txt @@ -10,66 +10,66 @@ 003-10,25,60,0 script Guard Devoir NPC_ELF_F,{ mesn; - mesq l("that's incredible! Monsters are now close to city gate! We need to stop them progression."); + mesq l("That's terrible! Monsters are piling up near city gates! We need to stop their progression."); if (BaseLevel >= 25) goto L_Menu; close; L_Menu: - mes "[Guard Devoir]"; - mesq l("Would you like to help us a protection the town of red scorpion invasion ??"); + mesn; + mesq l("Would you like to help us to protect the town from a red scorpion invasion??"); mes ""; menu - l("Yeah sure ! I'm brave as Simon"),L_Quest, - l("Where can i found them?"),L_Where, + l("Yeah, sure! I'm brave as Simon."),L_Quest, // famous player name + l("Where can I find them?"),L_Where, l("No, thanks."),L_Close; L_Quest: mes ""; .@q=getq(TulimsharQuest_Devoir); - mesq l("Nice ! I want you to kill some red scorpion! Mostly male!"); + mesq l("Nice! I want you to kill some red scorpions, as I said!"); next; if (.@q == 0) goto L_Continue; - if (.@q == 1 && gettimetick(2) >= DEVOIR_TIMER + 60 * 60 * 40) setq TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 2; + if (.@q == 1 && gettimetick(2) >= getq2(TulimsharQuest_Devoir) + 60 * 60 * 36) setq1 TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 2; // Repats every 36 hours if (.@q == 2) goto L_Repeat; close; L_Continue: - mesq l("Red Scorpion breed fast as Ratto! With small amount of guard, it's impossible to take over."); + mesq l("Red Scorpion breed as fast as the Ratto! With our current numbers, it's nearly impossible to take over."); next; - mesq l("To prove you help us in this purge i ask you to bring me 14 @@? I will reward you for your bravor.", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger)); + mesq l("I usually ask for 7, but to prove you are going to help us in this purge, I will ask you for 14 @@! I will reward you for your bravure.", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger)); mes ""; menu - rif(countitem(MaggotSlime) >= 7, l("Here they are miss!")), L_Finish, + rif(countitem(RedScorpionStinger) >= 14, l("Here they are, miss!")), L_Finish, l("I'll get to it."), L_Close; close; // double sure L_Repeat: - mesq l("How your purge was ? i hope you success it!."); + mesq l("How is your purge going? I hope you had success at it!"); next; - mesq l("Bring me 7 @@?", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger)); + mesq l("Did you brought me 7 @@?", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger)); mes ""; menu rif(countitem(RedScorpionStinger) >= 7, l("Here they are miss!")), L_Finish2, l("I'll get to it."), L_Close; close; -L_Finish2: - delitem RedScorpionStinger, 7; - getexp 999, 0; - Zeny = (Zeny + 680); // 70*7 = 490 base - setq TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 1; - set DEVOIR_TIMER, gettimetick(2); +// First Time Only +L_Finish: + delitem RedScorpionStinger, 14; + getexp 1555, 10; + Zeny = (Zeny + 1410); // 70*14 = 980 base + setq TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 1, gettimetick(2); mes ""; mesn; mesq l("Many thanks! Come back later to bring me extra @@!", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger)); close; -L_Finish: - delitem RedScorpionStinger, 14; - getexp 1555, 10; - Zeny = (Zeny + 1410); // 70*14 = 980 base - setq TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 1; - set DEVOIR_TIMER, gettimetick(2); +// Repeat +L_Finish2: + delitem RedScorpionStinger, 7; + getexp 999, 0; + Zeny = (Zeny + 680); // 70*7 = 490 base + setq TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 1, gettimetick(2); mes ""; mesn; mesq l("Many thanks! Come back later to bring me extra @@!", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger)); @@ -77,9 +77,9 @@ L_Finish: L_Where: mes ""; - mesq l("Ah, their is lot of in miner cave?"); + mesq l("Ah, there are lots on the miners cave."); next; - mes l("Be aware to don't attack them when they are in group!."); + mes l("Take care though, don't attack them when they are in group!"); next; mes l("Good luck."); goto L_Close; |