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-rw-r--r--npc/010-2/sawis.txt29
1 files changed, 16 insertions, 13 deletions
diff --git a/npc/010-2/sawis.txt b/npc/010-2/sawis.txt
index 314e0774f..dd18d68cc 100644
--- a/npc/010-2/sawis.txt
+++ b/npc/010-2/sawis.txt
@@ -4,20 +4,20 @@
// Reviewer:
// Jesusalva
// Description:
-// craft desert shirt refert to player msawis
+// craft desert shirt. Reference to player msawis
// id:193 HalinarzoQuest_Sawis
010-2,138,122,0 script Sawis NPC_PLAYER,{
- .@Miner = getq(HalinarzoQuest_Sawis);
+ .@q = getq(HalinarzoQuest_Sawis);
if (BaseLevel < 37) goto L_TooWeak;
- if (.@Miner == 1) goto L_Check;
- if (.@Miner == 2) goto L_Complete;
+ if (.@q == 1) goto L_Check;
+ if (.@q == 2) goto L_Complete;
L_GiveTask:
mesn;
mesq lg("Hello, wanderer!");
next;
- mesq l("No one visit me, im in peace there.");
+ mesq l("No one visit me, I'mm in peace there.");
next;
menu
@@ -30,15 +30,15 @@ L_Quest:
mesq l("I do some research about evolution of snake skin subject to hard sunlight.");
next;
mesn;
- mesq l("Then i craft some new typê of stronge desert shirt, to protect user from snake and sunlight.");
+ mesq l("Then I craft some new type of strong desert shirt, to protect users from snakes and sunlight.");
next;
mesn;
- mesq l("If you bring me some items, I can craft one for you and you will be my test subject.");
+ mesq l("If you bring me some items, I can craft one for you. You will be my test subject.");
next;
menu
- l("Yeah sure? What do you need?"), L_Start,
- l("Nah, sorry everythings good for me."), L_Quit;
+ l("Yeah, sure? What do you need?"), L_Start,
+ l("Nah, sorry, everything is good with me."), L_Quit;
L_Start:
setq HalinarzoQuest_Sawis, 1;
@@ -98,7 +98,10 @@ L_Give:
L_Complete:
mesn;
- mesq l("As i see, you stay alive!.");
+ mesq l("As I see, you stay alive!");
+ next;
+ mesn;
+ mesq l("I must keep notes of this.");
close;
// Funnier to write than to read, but the player lied. :angel:
@@ -106,13 +109,13 @@ L_Lying:
mesn;
mesq l("No no no, that's wrong.");
next;
- mesc l("You dont have all item required.");
+ mesc l("Actually, you could be really useful testing Snake Poison. What do you think about that?");
next;
goto L_List;
L_TooWeak:
mesn;
- mesq l("What are you doing here this place is too dangerous for you!");
+ mesq l("What are you doing here? This place is too dangerous for you!");
close;
OnInit:
@@ -124,7 +127,7 @@ OnInit:
setunitdata(.@npcId, UDT_HAIRCOLOR, 7);
.sex = G_MALE;
- .distance = 4;
+ .distance = 5;
end;
}