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1 files changed, 26 insertions, 26 deletions
diff --git a/npc/003-10/guarddevoir.txt b/npc/003-10/guarddevoir.txt
index 52d8a16ee..c63c351d8 100644
--- a/npc/003-10/guarddevoir.txt
+++ b/npc/003-10/guarddevoir.txt
@@ -10,66 +10,66 @@
003-10,25,60,0 script Guard Devoir NPC_ELF_F,{
mesn;
- mesq l("that's incredible! Monsters are now close to city gate! We need to stop them progression.");
+ mesq l("That's terrible! Monsters are piling up near city gates! We need to stop their progression.");
if (BaseLevel >= 25) goto L_Menu;
close;
L_Menu:
- mes "[Guard Devoir]";
- mesq l("Would you like to help us a protection the town of red scorpion invasion ??");
+ mesn;
+ mesq l("Would you like to help us to protect the town from a red scorpion invasion??");
mes "";
menu
- l("Yeah sure ! I'm brave as Simon"),L_Quest,
- l("Where can i found them?"),L_Where,
+ l("Yeah, sure! I'm brave as Simon."),L_Quest, // famous player name
+ l("Where can I find them?"),L_Where,
l("No, thanks."),L_Close;
L_Quest:
mes "";
.@q=getq(TulimsharQuest_Devoir);
- mesq l("Nice ! I want you to kill some red scorpion! Mostly male!");
+ mesq l("Nice! I want you to kill some red scorpions, as I said!");
next;
if (.@q == 0) goto L_Continue;
- if (.@q == 1 && gettimetick(2) >= DEVOIR_TIMER + 60 * 60 * 40) setq TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 2;
+ if (.@q == 1 && gettimetick(2) >= getq2(TulimsharQuest_Devoir) + 60 * 60 * 36) setq1 TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 2; // Repats every 36 hours
if (.@q == 2) goto L_Repeat;
close;
L_Continue:
- mesq l("Red Scorpion breed fast as Ratto! With small amount of guard, it's impossible to take over.");
+ mesq l("Red Scorpion breed as fast as the Ratto! With our current numbers, it's nearly impossible to take over.");
next;
- mesq l("To prove you help us in this purge i ask you to bring me 14 @@? I will reward you for your bravor.", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger));
+ mesq l("I usually ask for 7, but to prove you are going to help us in this purge, I will ask you for 14 @@! I will reward you for your bravure.", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger));
mes "";
menu
- rif(countitem(MaggotSlime) >= 7, l("Here they are miss!")), L_Finish,
+ rif(countitem(RedScorpionStinger) >= 14, l("Here they are, miss!")), L_Finish,
l("I'll get to it."), L_Close;
close; // double sure
L_Repeat:
- mesq l("How your purge was ? i hope you success it!.");
+ mesq l("How is your purge going? I hope you had success at it!");
next;
- mesq l("Bring me 7 @@?", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger));
+ mesq l("Did you brought me 7 @@?", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger));
mes "";
menu
rif(countitem(RedScorpionStinger) >= 7, l("Here they are miss!")), L_Finish2,
l("I'll get to it."), L_Close;
close;
-L_Finish2:
- delitem RedScorpionStinger, 7;
- getexp 999, 0;
- Zeny = (Zeny + 680); // 70*7 = 490 base
- setq TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 1;
- set DEVOIR_TIMER, gettimetick(2);
+// First Time Only
+L_Finish:
+ delitem RedScorpionStinger, 14;
+ getexp 1555, 10;
+ Zeny = (Zeny + 1410); // 70*14 = 980 base
+ setq TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 1, gettimetick(2);
mes "";
mesn;
mesq l("Many thanks! Come back later to bring me extra @@!", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger));
close;
-L_Finish:
- delitem RedScorpionStinger, 14;
- getexp 1555, 10;
- Zeny = (Zeny + 1410); // 70*14 = 980 base
- setq TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 1;
- set DEVOIR_TIMER, gettimetick(2);
+// Repeat
+L_Finish2:
+ delitem RedScorpionStinger, 7;
+ getexp 999, 0;
+ Zeny = (Zeny + 680); // 70*7 = 490 base
+ setq TulimsharQuest_Devoir, 1, gettimetick(2);
mes "";
mesn;
mesq l("Many thanks! Come back later to bring me extra @@!", getitemlink(RedScorpionStinger));
@@ -77,9 +77,9 @@ L_Finish:
L_Where:
mes "";
- mesq l("Ah, their is lot of in miner cave?");
+ mesq l("Ah, there are lots on the miners cave.");
next;
- mes l("Be aware to don't attack them when they are in group!.");
+ mes l("Take care though, don't attack them when they are in group!");
next;
mes l("Good luck.");
goto L_Close;