Minor fixes regarding code style and grammar.

Cherry Cake is not easy to obtain unless you grind Giant Maggots, whose levels
are above the Serf Hat's level (as stated on Total Visualization).

3 files changed, 40 insertions, 46 deletions

diff --git a/npc/003-1/sarah.txt b/npc/003-1/sarah.txt
index ebcd1131e..01bb2fbf9 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/sarah.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/sarah.txt
@@ -1,30 +1,30 @@
+// TMW2 Script
 // Author:
 //    Saulc
+// Description:
+//    Random NPC without any purpose but to give SerfHat. Uh.
 // TODO: Could be repeatable quest (eg. 60 GP for a cake every day, so you can have a 10 GP profit selling cakes)
 
 003-1,90,144,0	script	Sarah	NPC_FEMALE,{
 
     .cake = CherryCake;
     .reward = SerfHat;
-    
-    function quest_completed{
+
+    function quest_completed {
         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
             l("It was so tasty, I can't eat anything more... Thank you.");
             close;
     }
 
     function quest_open {
-        if (countitem(.cake) > 5)
-        {
+        if (countitem(.cake) >= 5) {
             speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
-                l("You brought me 6 @@ ! Here is your @@, as promised.",getitemlink(.cake), getitemlink(.reward));
-            delitem .cake,6;
+                l("You brought me 5 @@ ! Here is your @@, as promised.",getitemlink(.cake), getitemlink(.reward));
+            delitem .cake,5;
             getitem .reward,1;
             setq TulimsharQuest_Sarah, 1;
             close;
-        }
-        else 
-        {
+        } else {
             speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE,
                 l("Sorry, that is not the cake I love.");
             close;
@@ -35,22 +35,21 @@
         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
             l("Oh, Welcome then.");
         speech S_LAST_NEXT,
-            l("Can you bring me 6 piece of Cherry Cake? Pretty please?");
+            l("Can you bring me 5 pieces of Cherry Cake? Pretty please?");
         do
         {
-        select
-            l("Here is it!"),
-            menuaction(l("Quit"));
+            select
+                l("Here they are!"),
+                menuaction(l("Quit"));
 
-        switch (@menu)
-        {
-            case 1:
-                quest_open;
-                break;
-        }
-    } while (@menu != 2);
+            switch (@menu) {
+                case 1:
+                    quest_open;
+                    break;
+            }
+        } while (@menu != 2);
     }
-   
+
     do
     {
         .@chest = getq(TulimsharQuest_Sarah);
@@ -61,8 +60,7 @@
             l("Hello, I'm new here! Can I help you?")),
             menuaction(l("Quit"));
 
-        switch (@menu)
-        {
+        switch (@menu) {
             case 1:
                 quest_started;
                 break;
diff --git a/npc/004-1/_mobs.txt b/npc/004-1/_mobs.txt
index 97f55c942..9c2d6ba46 100644
--- a/npc/004-1/_mobs.txt
+++ b/npc/004-1/_mobs.txt
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 004-1,44,26,7,5	monster	Croc	1006,3,35000,150000
 004-1,38,77,8,21	monster	Scorpion	1071,20,35000,300000
 004-1,108,65,10,7	monster	Giant Maggot	1031,4,35000,300000
-004-1,106,114,11,7	monster	Golden Scoprion	1078,1,99000,300000
+004-1,106,114,11,7	monster	Golden Scorpion	1078,1,99000,300000
 004-1,66,74,21,8	monster	Black Scorpion	1075,1,35000,300000
diff --git a/npc/005-2/saxsochest.txt b/npc/005-2/saxsochest.txt
index d21c30716..be84a3171 100644
--- a/npc/005-2/saxsochest.txt
+++ b/npc/005-2/saxsochest.txt
@@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
+// TMW2 Script
 // Author:
 //    Crazyfefe
 
@@ -6,48 +7,44 @@
     .key = SaxsoKey;
     .reward = ToothNecklace;
     
-    function quest_completed{
+    function quest_completed {
         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
-            l("you allready open the chest.");
+            l("you already opened the chest.");
             close;
     }
 
     function quest_open {
-        if (countitem(.key) > 0)
-        {
+        if (countitem(.key) > 0) {
             speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
                 l("You open the chest and found a @@.",getitemlink(.reward));
             delitem .key,1;
             getitem .reward,1;
             setq CandorQuest_Chest, 1;
             close;
-        }
-        else 
-        {
+        } else {
             speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE,
-                l("you don't have the key.");
+                l("You don't have the key.");
             close;
         }
     }
 
     function quest_started {
         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
-            l("it look close.");
+            l("It looks locked.");
         narrator S_LAST_NEXT,
-            l("you should use a key for open it.");
+            l("Perhaps you should use a key to open it.");
         do
         {
-        select
-            l("Use a key."),
-            menuaction(l("Quit"));
+            select
+                l("Use a key."),
+                menuaction(l("Quit"));
 
-        switch (@menu)
-        {
-            case 1:
-                quest_open;
-                break;
-        }
-    } while (@menu != 2);
+            switch (@menu) {
+                case 1:
+                    quest_open;
+                    break;
+            }
+        } while (@menu != 2);
     }
    
     do
@@ -59,8 +56,7 @@
             rif(.@chest == 0,l("There are a dusty chest.")),
             menuaction(l("Quit"));
 
-        switch (@menu)
-        {
+        switch (@menu) {
             case 1:
                 quest_started;
                 break;