Fix bugs in AyashaT, and basic grammar check at Ayasha.

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/npc/005-1/ayasha.txt b/npc/005-1/ayasha.txt
index f47968c48..a59b586df 100644
--- a/npc/005-1/ayasha.txt
+++ b/npc/005-1/ayasha.txt
@@ -19,11 +19,11 @@
     if (.@has == 0)

     {

         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,

-            l("Hello can you help me for find all kids");

+            l("Hello! can you help me for find all kids?");

         do

         {

             select

-                l("Yes"),

+                l("Yes!"),

                 menuaction(l("Quit"));

 

             switch (@menu)

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
     else if (.@has == 2)

     {

         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,

-            l("Thank you, there is your reward");

+            l("Thank you, here is your reward.");

             narrator("You receive 30 exp.");

         getexp 30, 0;

         setq CandorQuest_HAS, 3;

@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@
         close;

     }

 

-    closedialog;

-    goodbye;

+    //closedialog;

+    //goodbye;

     close;

 

 OnInit:

@@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ OnInit:
 

 

 function	script	CheckEnfant	{

-    .questCheck = .questCheck + 1;

+    .questCheck = .questCheck + 1; // NOTE: Do we really want this as a **NPC** variable? These affects other players, right?

             l("Oh Welcome then.");

         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,

-            l("Oh! You found me well played !.");

+            l("Oh! You found me. Well played!");

             narrator("You receive 5 exp.");

     if (.questCheck == 6)

     {