Minor fixes regarding code style and grammar.

Cherry Cake is not easy to obtain unless you grind Giant Maggots, whose levels
are above the Serf Hat's level (as stated on Total Visualization).

1 files changed, 21 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/npc/003-1/sarah.txt b/npc/003-1/sarah.txt
index ebcd1131e..01bb2fbf9 100644
--- a/npc/003-1/sarah.txt
+++ b/npc/003-1/sarah.txt
@@ -1,30 +1,30 @@
+// TMW2 Script
 // Author:
 //    Saulc
+// Description:
+//    Random NPC without any purpose but to give SerfHat. Uh.
 // TODO: Could be repeatable quest (eg. 60 GP for a cake every day, so you can have a 10 GP profit selling cakes)
 
 003-1,90,144,0	script	Sarah	NPC_FEMALE,{
 
     .cake = CherryCake;
     .reward = SerfHat;
-    
-    function quest_completed{
+
+    function quest_completed {
         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
             l("It was so tasty, I can't eat anything more... Thank you.");
             close;
     }
 
     function quest_open {
-        if (countitem(.cake) > 5)
-        {
+        if (countitem(.cake) >= 5) {
             speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
-                l("You brought me 6 @@ ! Here is your @@, as promised.",getitemlink(.cake), getitemlink(.reward));
-            delitem .cake,6;
+                l("You brought me 5 @@ ! Here is your @@, as promised.",getitemlink(.cake), getitemlink(.reward));
+            delitem .cake,5;
             getitem .reward,1;
             setq TulimsharQuest_Sarah, 1;
             close;
-        }
-        else 
-        {
+        } else {
             speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE,
                 l("Sorry, that is not the cake I love.");
             close;
@@ -35,22 +35,21 @@
         speech S_FIRST_BLANK_LINE | S_LAST_NEXT,
             l("Oh, Welcome then.");
         speech S_LAST_NEXT,
-            l("Can you bring me 6 piece of Cherry Cake? Pretty please?");
+            l("Can you bring me 5 pieces of Cherry Cake? Pretty please?");
         do
         {
-        select
-            l("Here is it!"),
-            menuaction(l("Quit"));
+            select
+                l("Here they are!"),
+                menuaction(l("Quit"));
 
-        switch (@menu)
-        {
-            case 1:
-                quest_open;
-                break;
-        }
-    } while (@menu != 2);
+            switch (@menu) {
+                case 1:
+                    quest_open;
+                    break;
+            }
+        } while (@menu != 2);
     }
-   
+
     do
     {
         .@chest = getq(TulimsharQuest_Sarah);
@@ -61,8 +60,7 @@
             l("Hello, I'm new here! Can I help you?")),
             menuaction(l("Quit"));
 
-        switch (@menu)
-        {
+        switch (@menu) {
             case 1:
                 quest_started;
                 break;