NPC Improvements

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
index 3a315b107..2e3c00821 100644
--- a/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
+++ b/npc/000-0/sailors.txt
@@ -28,13 +28,14 @@ OnTouch:
     if ($EVENT$ == "Steam") goto L_FiresOfSteam;
 
     mesn "Narrator";
-    mesc l("You open your eyes. The salt water is not helping your vision.");
+    mesc l("You open your eyes. The remants of the salt water in your eyes is not particularly helping you see.");
     mesc l("(Click next button to advance dialogs)"), 3;
     next;
     mesc l("What in the world is happening?! Where in Jesusalva's name are you?!");
     next;
-    mesc l("Actually. Who are you again? A headache which doesn't wants to pass strikes you.");
-    mesc l("And on the meanwhile, ships sailors are shouting at you.");
+    mesc l("Actually. Who are you again? A headache which doesn't want to pass strikes you.");
+    mesc l("You can hear creaking planks and a sail flapping in the storm. A ship?");
+    mesc l("You hear shouting directed at you. Sailors from the ship?");
     next;
 
     showavatar NPC_ORC_MAN;
@@ -53,7 +54,7 @@ OnTouch:
     setcamnpc "Sailors", 144, -80;
     mesn l("Tritan Voice");
     mesq l("We speak various languages on this world. Let's try gesturing!");
-    mesq l("Hey, you on the stranded island! Can you hear us?!");
+    mesq l("Hey, you on the dune! Can you hear us?!");
     next;
     restorecam;
 
@@ -67,13 +68,13 @@ OnTouch:
     next;
     showavatar NPC_TRITAN_MAN_SAILOR;
     setcamnpc "Sailors", 144, -80;
-    mesq lg("This girl needs help, we need to rescue her!", "This guy needs help, we need to rescue him!");
+    mesq lg("This girl needs help, we need to rescue her!", "This boy needs help, we need to rescue him!");
     next;
     mesn;
     mesc l("This is a menu. You can click on the desired option and press \"Send\", and double-clicking should work, too.");
     mes "";
     select
-        l("I don't need a rescue. I'm enjoying myself here."),
+        l("I don't need to be rescued. I'm enjoying myself here."),
         l("Thanks... I guess..."),
         l("(Don't respond)");
     mes "";
@@ -83,7 +84,8 @@ OnTouch:
         mesq l("What do you mean? Do you at least have a rowboat with you?!");
         next;
         mesn l("Billy Bons");
-        mesq l("We can't let you die from hunger! That wouldn't be cool at all! And I'm very cool!");
+        // Dying of thirst will set in waaaay sooner than dying of hunger.
+        mesq l("We can't let you die of thirst! That wouldn't be cool at all! And I'm very cool!");
         next;
     } else if (@menu == 2) {
         mes ""; // You don't need to thank us!