Begin rewriting Nard to new storytelling style

1 files changed, 15 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/npc/002-3/nard.txt b/npc/002-3/nard.txt
index c94eb7c6e..631d32bf1 100644
--- a/npc/002-3/nard.txt
+++ b/npc/002-3/nard.txt
@@ -63,7 +63,11 @@ L_MenuQuest:
     LOCATION$ = "Candor";
     setq ShipQuests_Julia, 3;
     next;
+    .@price=1200;
     mesc b(l(".:: Main Quest 1-3 ::.")), 3;
+    msObjective(getq(CandorQuest_HAS) >= 4, l("* Help Ayasha to take care of the kids."));
+    msObjective(getq(CandorQuest_Trainer) >= 12, l("* Get trained by Valon, in the big house."));
+    msObjective(getq(CandorQuest_Barrel) >= 4, l("* Ask Zegas, the mayoress, if she needs help."));
     msObjective(Zeny >= .@price, l("* Collect @@/@@ GP", Zeny, .@price));
 
 L_Referral:
@@ -177,16 +181,16 @@ L_CandorIsland:
 L_NotYet:
     .@price=1200;
     mesc b(l(".:: Main Quest 1-1 ::.")), 3;
-    if (Zeny >= .@price)
-        mesc l("* @@/@@ GP", Zeny, .@price), 2;
-    else
-        mesc l("* @@/@@ GP", Zeny, .@price), 9;
+    msObjective(getq(CandorQuest_HAS) >= 4, l("* Help Ayasha to take care of the kids."));
+    msObjective(getq(CandorQuest_Trainer) >= 12, l("* Get trained by Valon, in the big house."));
+    msObjective(getq(CandorQuest_Barrel) >= 4, l("* Ask Zegas, the mayoress, if she needs help."));
+    msObjective(Zeny >= .@price, l("* Collect @@/@@ GP", Zeny, .@price));
     mes "";
     select
         rif(Zeny >= .@price, l("I've brought the money you've asked for.")),
         rif(#REFERRAL_PROG == 0 && $REFERRAL_ENABLED && BaseLevel <= 10,
             l("I forgot to say earlier, but indeed, I was invited by someone!")),
-        l("Where are we?"),
+        l("Captain, why have you brought me to a deserted boring island?!"),
         l("Please excuse me, captain.");
 
     mes "";
@@ -196,6 +200,12 @@ L_NotYet:
         goto L_CandorIsland;
 
     mesn;
+    if (getq(CandorQuest_HAS)     < 4 ||
+        getq(CandorQuest_Barrel)  < 4 ||
+        getq(CandorQuest_Trainer) < 12) {
+        mesq l("You didn't help all my friends yet, and without trainment, I can't send you to such dangerous place as Tulimshar.");
+        close;
+    }
     if (Zeny >= .@price) {
         mesq l("Ten, fifty, thousand... Yep, this is the amount I've asked for.");
         next;