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| -rw-r--r-- | world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt | 24 |
1 files changed, 12 insertions, 12 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt index 6749f0e3..5ad738a9 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ L_1: mes "[Aisha]"; - mes "\"Maggots are soo slimey!\""; + mes "\"Maggots are so slimey!\" %%^"; goto L_Close; L_2: @@ -26,12 +26,12 @@ L_2: L_3: mes "[Aisha]"; - mes "\"There are so many monsters; I hate scorpions!\""; + mes "\"There are so many monsters! I hate scorpions!\" %%3"; goto L_Close; L_4: mes "[Aisha]"; - mes "\"When I grow up, I want to be strong enough to kill a scorpion!\""; + mes "\"When I grow up, I want to be strong enough to kill a scorpion!\" %%="; goto L_Close; L_5: @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ L_5: L_6: mes "[Aisha]"; - mes "\"Have you tried to eat a roasted maggot? They are sooo yummy! And you feel much healthier afterwards, too!\""; + mes "\"Have you tried to eat a roasted maggot? They're sooo yummy! Mommy says they're healthy too!\" %%8"; goto L_Close; L_7: @@ -51,23 +51,23 @@ L_7: L_8: mes "[Aisha]"; - mes "\"That volcano was sooo scary! The earth was shaking and everything was breaking down... but now they have rebuilt everything.\""; + mes "\"That earthquake was sooo scary! The earth was shaking and everything was breaking down... but now they've rebuilt everything.\""; goto L_Close; L_9: - mes "\"I know a very bad word. But I must not say it, because monsters will come and get me if I do!\""; + mes "\"I know a very bad word. But I can't say it because monsters will come and get me if I do!\""; next; menu "A bad word?", L_tell, - "Oh, you better keep it for yourself then.", L_Close; + "Oh. You better keep it to yourself then.", L_Close; L_tell: mes "[Aisha]"; - mes "\"Yes, I heard my mother say it once. And she made me promise her to never say it. Never.\""; + mes "\"I heard my mother say it once, and she made me promise her to never say it. ##BNever##b!\""; next; menu "If I promise to never tell anyone, can you tell me the word?", L_keepword, - "I understand, you do not need to tell me...", L_giveword, + "I understand. You don't need to tell me...", L_giveword, "Goodbye!", L_Close; L_keepword: @@ -77,13 +77,13 @@ L_keepword: L_giveword: mes "[Aisha]"; - mes "Aisha looks around as she hushes you to silence. After a few seconds, she whispers to you."; - mes "\"I like you! So I will tell you the bad word. But you can't tell anyone else about it! The bad word is '" + getspellinvocation("aggravate") + "'.\""; + mes "Aisha looks around as she leans in and hushes you to silence. After a few seconds, she whispers to you:"; + mes "\"I like you, so I'll tell you the bad word. But you can't tell anyone else about it! The bad word is '" + getspellinvocation("aggravate") + ".'\""; next; mes "[Aisha]"; mes "Terrified, she looks around once more."; - mes "\"But you mustn't tell anyone!\""; + mes "\"But you can't tell anyone!\" %%>"; goto L_Close; L_Close: |