Fixed Grammar/Dialogue issues in the Blue Sage Quest

21 files changed, 126 insertions, 127 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/bluesageConfig.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/bluesageConfig.txt
index 284aefb6..22eb36ba 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/bluesageConfig.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/bluesageConfig.txt
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 // Blue Sage quest
-// The mansion of the Sage is in confusion, because a magic experiment with the slimes went wrong,
+// The mansion of the Sage is in disarray, because a magic experiment with the slimes went wrong,
 // the white and blue slimes got out of control, ate most of the books in the library
 // and most of the slimes escaped to the outside world
 // Variable used: QUEST_BlueSage
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperAccused.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperAccused.txt
index 5cd15965..c02b6ff3 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperAccused.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperAccused.txt
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
     if (@investigate > 1) goto L_Query;
     if (@investigate == 1) goto L_Help;
 
-    mes "You see a rather stressed helper, mumbering to himself.";
+    mes "You see a rather stressed helper, mumbling to himself.";
     if (BaseLevel < $@Q_BlueSageMinimumLevel)
         goto L_Close;
     mes "[Peetu]";
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ L_Query:
         "Can you describe me what exactly you did?",-;
     mes "[Peetu]";
     mes "\"Well, ok, sure. So, as you know we're doing some researches on the nature of slimes, their connection to minerals and gemstones, their breeding behaviour, and, well, ahm, doing some magical experiments to analyze their reactions on different kinds of magic.";
-    mes "This experiments caused some ... mutations, and the Blue and White Slimes developed some behaviour different from the slimes usual behaviour, making them more dangerous.\"";
+    mes "This experiments caused some ... mutations, and the Blue and White Slimes developed some behaviour different from the slimes usual behavior, making them more dangerous.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"This is the reason why they have to be magically sealed away for the night, since we didn't want them to get out in the wilderness... Oh, if I imagine what damage they do to the environment!\"";
     mes "He sighs.";
@@ -86,12 +86,12 @@ L_Query:
     mes "\"That night when the slimes escaped, I did all of this as usual. Everything seemed alright after I cast the guarding spell, so I went to bed. But I woke up in the middle of the night because I felt the spells... oh, it's hard to describe... it seems the spell which defines the magical cage started to... inflate itself, causing the guarding spells to vanish, since they're intended against threads from the outside, not the inside.";
     mes "While expanding, the cage went thinner and thinner until it just... faded.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"This left all the slimes free in the workshop, right next to the library. Of course I hasted there as fast as I could, yelling to wake up everyone, but that caused so much confusion that we fell over each other in the corridor and when we finally reached the librabry, the slimes were already spread all over the room, eating the books and dripping out of the windows.\"";
+    mes "\"This left all the slimes free in the workshop, right next to the library. Of course I hurried there as fast as I could, yelling to wake up everyone, but that caused so much confusion that we fell over each other in the corridor and when we finally reached the librabry, the slimes were already spread all over the room, eating the books and dripping out of the windows.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"We tried to block the windows to prevent them escaping, but as most of the helpers aren't experienced in fighting and only some of us have a higher magical education, the slimes are rather dangerous for most of them.";
     mes "We weren't able to get the situation under control until most of the slimes had escaped.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Since it was my responsibility to sealing them away, I was preliminarily suspended and sent to my room. Since then I've been thinking over and over again about the happenings and how I cast the spell, trying to find the mistake I did.";
+    mes "\"Since it was my responsibility to seal them away, I was preliminarily suspended and sent to my room. Since then I've been thinking over and over again about the happenings and how I cast the spell, trying to find the mistake I did.";
     mes "But now that I described you the spells, I'm sure I casted it correctly. Thinking again about the effect of the sealing inflating, I suppose it might have to do with the ingredients I used for the spell.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"I never tried it, because it makes no sense to do that, but theoretically adding some Silk Cocoons could have such an effect. That's pretty basic nature magic.";
@@ -102,21 +102,21 @@ L_Query:
 
 L_Investigate:
     mes "[Peetu]";
-    mes "\"Hello. Did you find out anything more yet?\"";
+    mes "\"Hello. Did you find out anything else yet?\"";
     if (@investigate != 11)
         menu
             "I'm still collecting information.",L_Close;
     if (@inventorylist_count == 100)
         goto L_TooMany;
     menu
-        "Yes, I already talked with Chief Oskari.",-,
+        "Yes, I have already talked with Chief Oskari.",-,
         "Not yet.",L_Close;
     mes "You explain your gained insights to Peetu and what conclusions Chief Oskari drew.";
     mes "[Peetu]";
     mes "\"Oh, I'm so relieved!";
     mes "I mean, this are alarming news, but I'm so glad that this isn't my fault and that I deserve keep my job.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"It isn't much, but please take this Silk Gloves. We use those when we have to protect our hands, but still need to perform magic.\"";
+    mes "\"It isn't much, but please take these Silk Gloves. We use those when we have to protect our hands, but still need to perform magic.\"";
     getitem "SilkGloves", 1;
     set @investigate, 12;
     callfunc "updateBlueSageInvestigate";
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages1.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages1.txt
index b92802cf..43dbff5b 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages1.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages1.txt
@@ -16,14 +16,14 @@
     if (@bookpages > 0) goto L_Progress;
 
     mes "[Ensio]";
-    mes "\"Hello. Did you come here to see the library? It's not much left... But we're working on recovering the books by collecting the ripped out book pages, sorting them and recreating the books.\"";
+    mes "\"Hello. Did you come here to see the library? There isn't much left... But we're working on recovering the books by collecting the ripped out book pages, sorting them and recreating the books.\"";
     if (BaseLevel < $@Q_BlueSageMinimumLevel)
         goto L_Close;
     menu
         "Good luck with that. See you in ten years or something.",L_Investigate,
         "Can I help somehow?",-;
     mes "[Ensio]";
-    mes "\"Oh, would you? That'd be great! You see, the slimes ate most of the books and it is difficult to get back the bookpages.";
+    mes "\"Oh, would you? That'd be great! You see, the slimes ate most of the books and it is difficult to retrieve the bookpages.";
     mes "If you feel capable of this task, you could go out to hunt the Blue and White Slimes to get back the bookpages from them.\"";
 L_Progress:
     mes "[Ensio]";
@@ -43,11 +43,11 @@ L_Progress:
     callfunc "updateBlueSageBookPages";
     getexp @new_bookpage_exp, 0;
     mes "[Ensio]";
-    mes "\"Ah, wonderful! This is a page we didn't find yet!\"";
+    mes "\"Ah, wonderful! This is a page we haven't find yet!\"";
     if (@bookpages < 31)
         goto L_Progress;
     next;
-    mes "\"Amazing. I think you found all the missing pages of which we don't had a copy. This is a great help! I'll mention this towards Nikolai.\"";
+    mes "\"Amazing. I think you found all the missing pages of which we didn't have a copy. This is a great help! I'll mention this to Nikolai.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_OldPage:
@@ -79,13 +79,13 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages2.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages2.txt
index 93eca664..c25b90d2 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages2.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages2.txt
@@ -12,15 +12,15 @@
     if (@bookpages == 31) goto L_Thank;
     if (@bookpages > 0) goto L_Progress;
 
-    mes "You see a helper looking through some papers which exhale a strange smell.";
+    mes "You see a helper looking through some papers that have a strange smell.";
     mes "[Henriikka]";
-    mes "\"Oh, hey. Welcome to the library, or what's left of that.\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, hey. Welcome to the library, or what's left of it.\"";
     mes "She sighs.";
     menu
         "What are you doing?",-,
         "You seem to be busy. See you.",L_Close;
     mes "[Henriikka]";
-    mes "\"We're trying to repair the books by collecting the ripped out bookpages and sorting them and copying them for new books. It's a lot to do, and after being eaten by a slime they're stinking!";
+    mes "\"We're trying to repair the books by collecting the ripped out bookpages and sorting them and copying them for new books. It's a lot to do, and after being eaten by a slime they stink!";
     mes "And a lot of pages are missing, since most of the slimes escaped. I suppose we'll have to go out and hunt them once we're done here.\"";
     menu
         "Maybe I can help with that?",-,
@@ -59,13 +59,13 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ L_Visitor:
 
 L_Helper:
     mes "[Henriikka]";
-    mes "\"Oh, I never really thought about that. He was the one who failed the sealing spell, right? But I heard it's a quite difficult spell, so I suppose this could've happened to anyone. I don't know. Why are you asking so difficult questions?\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, I never really thought about that. He was the one who failed the sealing spell, right? But I heard it's a quite difficult spell, so I suppose this could've happened to anyone. I don't know. Why are you asking such difficult questions?\"";
     next;
     mes "\"I need to go on with sorting the bookpages now.\"";
     goto L_Close;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages3.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages3.txt
index 1d90aa76..b261c3bd 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages3.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperBookpages3.txt
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
     if (@bookpages > 0) goto L_Progress;
 
     mes "[Teuvo]";
-    mes "\"I always thought it's a bad idea to play around with the slimes. And as if holding them in here isn't bad enough, no, they also had to mess around with magic.\"";
+    mes "\"I always thought it was a bad idea to play around with the slimes. And as if holding them in here isn't bad enough, no, they also had to mess around with magic.\"";
     mes "He seems to be rather upset.";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
@@ -40,13 +40,13 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt
index c8085a4c..c5d0ab12 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperChief.txt
@@ -17,23 +17,23 @@
     if (@investigate == 0)
         goto L_Close;
     menu
-        "Peetu asked me to talk to you about his mischance.",-,
+        "Peetu asked me to talk to you about his mishap.",-,
         "Ok, see you.",L_Close;
 
-    mes "You explain about your conversation with Peetu, how he's blaming himself and his worries about loosing his job.";
+    mes "You tell him about your conversation with Peetu, how he's blaming himself and his worries about losing his job.";
     next;
-    mes "Oskari keeps silent a moment after you ended, pondering. Then he talks to you.";
+    mes "Oskari keeps silent a moment after you end, pondering. Then he talks to you.";
     mes "[Oskari]";
     mes "\"You know, Peetu is one of my most experienced and reliable employees. This whole situation is very disquieting, not to say suspicious.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Due to all the trouble I haven't had time to have a talk with him nor to make further investigations. You already showed some good knowledge of human nature by the way you calmed him down and talked to me.\"";
+    mes "\"Due to all the trouble, I haven't had time to have a talk with him nor to make further investigations. You already showed some good knowledge of human nature by the way you calmed him down and talked to me.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Would you be willing to talk with Peetu and the other helpers, doing some investigation about what actually happened?\"";
+    mes "\"Would you be willing to talk with Peetu and the other helpers, investigating what actually happened?\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"As someone who's not a member of our team you might be able to get a more unbiased view of the situation, beside of the fact that all of us are very busy with getting the situation under control again.\"";
+    mes "\"As someone who's not a member of our team you might be able to get a more unbiased view of the situation, besides the fact that all of us are very busy with getting the situation under control again.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"I suggest to start by talking to Peetu again to get a precise idea of his workflow and what he thinks that happened.";
-    mes "Oh, and please tell him that I'm not considering to fire him in the current situation. It might be needed to calm him down to get meaningful information.\"";
+    mes "Oh, and please tell him that I'm not considering firing him in the current situation. That might be needed to calm him down to get meaningful information.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"You should find out if someone observed something unusual during the time before the accident happened.\"";
     set @investigate, 2;
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ L_Investigate:
         menu
             "I'm still collecting information.",L_Close;
     next;
-    mes "You explain who you talked to, the helpers positive opinion about Peetu and what you find out about the suspicious visitor.";
+    mes "You explain who you talked to, the helpers positive opinion about Peetu and what you found out about the suspicious visitor.";
     mes "[Oskari]";
     mes "\"With a mask you say? This reminds me... wait a moment.\"";
     mes "He turns to his desk and searches through some papers.";
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ L_Investigate:
     mes "\"Mh... yes. It fits together.";
     mes "Listen, this is a letter from Chief Warrick from Santa's team. It seems they encountered some sabotaging during their preparations for the Christmas time, the letter mentions a masked person as well.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"And this are some reports about cases of unusal behaviour of native animals in various places of Kaizei that came to the Sages notice.\"";
+    mes "\"And there are some reports about cases of unusal behaviour of native animals in various places of Kaizei that came to the Sages notice.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"And now this accident in our house, also a person with a mask... and given the context of the recent frictions within the Sages...\"";
     mes "Oskari seems rather excited.";
@@ -65,13 +65,12 @@ L_Investigate:
     mes "\"I think you revealed some important connections. I need to notify Nikolai and the other Sages.\"";
     menu
         "I'm confused now.",-,
-        "What are you talking about?",-,
-        "Could you stop speaking in fractions?",-;
+        "What are you talking about?",-;
     mes "[Oskari]";
-    mes "\"I'm sorry. I think you deserve some explanation. You see, the Sages of Kaizei are a circle of wise wizards who work together for the prosperity of this continent.";
+    mes "\"I'm sorry. I think you deserve an explanation. You see, the Sages of Kaizei are a circle of wise wizards who work together for the prosperity of this continent.";
     mes "Recently there was some conflict among the Sages which caused one of the members to leave the circle. It's all very unfortunate.";
     next;
-    mes "\"However, taking all this different events into account, I came to the suspicion that there might be a connection. Of course we don't have evidence yet, so I don't want to be too clear. Well, I'll bring this to the Sages notice.\"";
+    mes "\"However, taking all these different events into account, I came to the suspicion that there might be a connection. Of course we don't have evidence yet, so I don't want to be too sure. Well, I'll bring this to the Sages' notice.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"You were a great help! I'll inform Nikolai about your involvement in clarifing this matter.\"";
     next;
@@ -96,13 +95,13 @@ L_GoodJob:
 
 L_Sages:
     mes "[Oskari]";
-    mes "\"Well, as I said the Sages are a circle of powerful wizards. There are twelve of them - eh, actually, now there are only elven of them.\"";
+    mes "\"Well, as I said the Sages are a circle of powerful wizards. There are twelve of them - eh, actually, now there are only eleven of them.\"";
     mes "He sighs.";
     next;
     mes "[Oskari]";
-    mes "\"However, they live in different places all over Kaizei, but meet sometimes to discuss about differents matters. They work hard for the prosperity of this continent, trying to improve the living conditions by both political work and magical researches, with the aid of their helpers.\"";
+    mes "\"However, they live in different places all over Kaizei, but they meet sometimes to discuss differents matters. They work hard for the prosperity of this continent, trying to improve the living conditions by both political work and magical researches, with the aid of their helpers.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"The politics on Kaizei are rather complicated, the Sages have great influence, but there are also other organziations and groups. Due to the harsh clima on this continent, villages or towns can be cut off the rest of the world for several weeks sometimes, so most of them tend to be rather independent.\"";
+    mes "\"The politics on Kaizei are rather complicated, the Sages have great influence, but there are also other organziations and groups. Due to the harsh climate on this continent, villages or towns can be cut off the rest of the world for several weeks sometimes, so most of them tend to be rather independent.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"Also there's the Order of Ice, an organization which represents the national interests of Kaizei in a rather narrow-minded way compared to the Sages.\"";
     goto L_Close;
@@ -111,11 +110,11 @@ L_Conflict:
     mes "[Oskari]";
     mes "\"Oh, I'm not sure if I should talk about that... It's a rather delicate situation.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Basically there was a disagreement between the Sages. Usually those things can be solved by discussion, but this time... things got rather personal and one of the members accused Santa to value his own interests over the general good.\"";
+    mes "\"Basically there was a disagreement between the Sages. Usually those things can be solved by discussion, but this time... things got rather personal and one of the members accused Santa of valuing his own interests over the general good.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"This is of course nonsense, Santa would never do that and it's more that the person accusing him could be suspected to act this way. The other Sages were on Santa's side and I fear this harsh rejection caused a lot of hurt feelings.\"";
+    mes "\"This of course is nonsense, Santa would never do that, and it's more that the person accusing him has been suspected to act this way. The other Sages were on Santa's side and I fear this harsh rejection caused a lot of painful feelings.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Personally I think that he was jealous about Santa's influence and supremacy position since quite a while. However, he took this as a reason to leave the Sages and based on our insights it seems he decided to work against the Sages.";
+    mes "\"Personally I think that he was jealous about Santa's influence and high position for quite a while. However, he took this as a reason to leave the Sages and based on our insights, so it seems he decided to work against the Sages.";
     mes "It really is a shame.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning1.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning1.txt
index a76ab7ad..cd0eef2d 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning1.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning1.txt
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
     if (@slimes > 0) goto L_Progress;
 
     mes "[Pyry]";
-    mes "\"Welcome to the library of Sage Nikolai. I'm very sorry, but as you see it's not in a good shape at the moment. Most of the books got eaten by the slimes or damaged and we're working hard on cleaning up the mess.";
+    mes "\"Welcome to the library of Sage Nikolai. I'm very sorry, but as you see it's not in a good shape at the moment. Most of the books were eaten by the slimes or damaged and we're working hard on cleaning up the mess.";
     mes "I have to ask you not to go in the deeper parts of the library, since there are still some of the slimes left and they're dangerous.\"";
     if (BaseLevel < $@Q_BlueSageMinimumLevel)
         goto L_Close;
@@ -23,17 +23,17 @@
     mes "Pyry seems surprised.";
     mes "[Pyry]";
     mes "\"That... I didn't think about this possibility. But it'd be a great help!";
-    mes "Ok, there are some slimes left in the deeper parts of the library. They... erm, developed some very fast breeding behaviour, both the Blue Slimes and the White Slimes, but in a slightly different fashion.\"";
+    mes "Ok, there are some slimes around in the deeper parts of the library. They... erm, developed some very fast breeding behaviour, both the Blue Slimes and the White Slimes, but in a slightly different fashion.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"The Blue ones are able to generate smaller slimes which show a self-destructive behaviour to protect their... parent slime if you want to call it like that. You have to kill the big one, but be careful about the smaller ones while trying that.\"";
+    mes "\"The Blue ones are able to generate smaller slimes which show a self-destructive behaviour to protect their... parent slime if you want to call it that. You have to kill the big one, but be careful about the smaller ones while trying that.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"The White Slimes appear in groups and when you attack one of them, they also show some self-destructive behaviour to protect their group as a whole. You have to defeat all of one group, otherwise the remaining ones will breed new slimes to fill up their losses.\"";
+    mes "\"The White Slimes appear in groups and when you attack one of them, they also show some self-destructive behaviour to protect their group as a whole. You have to defeat the entire group, otherwise the remaining slimes will breed new slimes to replace their lost.\"";
     set QUEST_BlueSage, QUEST_BlueSage | $@Q_BlueSageSlimesStart;
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Progress:
     mes "[Pyry]";
-    mes "\"It's very brave of you to fight against those slimes deeper in the library. Remember that you have to kill all of one group to prevent them from breeding.\"";
+    mes "\"It's very brave of you to fight against those slimes deeper in the library. Remember that you have to kill the entire group to prevent them from breeding.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Thank:
@@ -54,23 +54,23 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
     mes "[Pyry]";
-    mes "\"Mh, yes. I remember him, he was very interested in the library and the researches we do here. He had an unordinary behaviour and appearance. But well, this isn't a reason to refuse someone, right?\"";
+    mes "\"Mh, yes. I remember him, he was very interested in the library and the researches we do here. He had an unusual behaviour and appearance. But well, this isn't a reason to refuse someone, right?\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Helper:
     mes "[Pyry]";
-    mes "\"Peetu? I was always glad to have him in the team. He really brought forward our work here.\"";
+    mes "\"Peetu? I have always been glad to have him on the team. He's really brought forward our work here.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"I was very surprised when I heard that he's responsible for the failed sealing spell. I'd never have expected that from him.\"";
     if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt
index 6018f4e6..6b768759 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning2.txt
@@ -13,17 +13,17 @@
     if (@slimes > 0) goto L_Progress;
 
     mes "[Nea]";
-    mes "\"Oh, hello. If I were you I wouldn't go deeper into the library. There are still some of those monsters left. Slipping around between the bookshelves.\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, hello. If I were you I wouldn't go deeper into the library. There are still some of those monsters left. Slipping between the bookshelves.\"";
     mes "She shudders.";
     next;
     mes "[Nea]";
-    mes "\"And they can explode! Nothing in the world could make go there. I'll do my work just right here, clean the floor and tidy up the books, while I keep my eyes open if they get over here.\"";
+    mes "\"And they can explode! Nothing in the world could make go there. I'll just do my work right here, clean the floor and tidy up the books, and I keep my eyes open in case they get over here.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Progress:
     mes "[Nea]";
-    mes "\"Oh, I'm so glad you're taking care about this scary slimes. You're so brave!";
-    mes "How much of the are still left, what do you think? Will it be secure to go there soon?\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, I'm so glad you're taking care about those scary slimes. You're so brave!";
+    mes "How many of them are still left, do you think? Will it be safe to go there soon?\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Thank:
@@ -44,25 +44,25 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
     mes "[Nea]";
-    mes "\"With a mask? Mh, I think I know who are you talking about, I remember vaguely that there was someone with a mask... but I can't recall any details, I didn't really pay attention.\"";
+    mes "\"With a mask? Mh, I think I know who are you talking about, I vaguely remember that there was someone with a mask... but I can't recall any details, I wasn't really paying attention.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Helper:
     mes "[Nea]";
-    mes "\"Peetu? Yeah, he's that kind of person who always wants to do things perfectly. That makes him a bit wearisome to work with him, since he has as high expectations to everyone else as he has to himself.\"";
+    mes "\"Peetu? Yeah, he's the kind of person who always wants to do things perfectly. That makes it a bit difficult to work with him, since his expectations for others are as high as for himself.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"I really wonder how that accident with the sealing spell could've happened. I'd have never expected him to mess up something like that.\"";
+    mes "\"I really wonder how that accident with the sealing spell could've happened. I'd had never expected him to mess something up like that.\"";
     if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
         goto L_Close;
     set @investigate, @investigate + 3;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt
index 3d80dcaa..e422f96a 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning3.txt
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
     if (@slimes > 0) goto L_Progress;
 
     mes "[Arvo]";
-    mes "\"Oh, this is so much work... I can't believe they let this happen! You would think they're carful when playing around with such powerful forces. Hah! Big mistake!\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, this is so much work... I can't believe they let this happen! You would think they'd be careful when playing around with such powerful forces. Hah! Big mistake!\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Progress:
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ L_Thank:
     mes "He sighs and has a careful look around.";
     next;
     mes "[Arvo]";
-    mes "\"But it shows that Nikolai's position isn't what it used to be. There's disturbance in the great circle of our Sages and things change. About one year ago the helpers of Nikolai wouldn't have needed help of a mere adventurer - no offense.\"";
+    mes "\"But it shows that Nikolai's position isn't what it used to be. There's disturbance in the great circle of our Sages and things have changed. About one year ago, Nikolai's helpers wouldn't have needed help of a mere adventurer - no offense.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"But it seems we were focusing too much on researches and this lead to neglect of other duties of a Sage's household. This is dangerous in times of changes. I'm worried about the future.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
@@ -46,13 +46,13 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning4.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning4.txt
index 19e180e2..6c0dd19b 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning4.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning4.txt
@@ -13,12 +13,12 @@
     if (@slimes > 0) goto L_Progress;
 
     mes "[Kristian]";
-    mes "\"Welcome. Please don't go deeper in the library, there are still some slimes left. But beside of that we really did a good progress. You should've seen the mess just after most of the slimes escaped!\"";
+    mes "\"Welcome. Please don't go deeper into the library, there are still some slimes left. But besides that we have made quite a bit of progress. You should have seen the mess just after most of the slimes escaped!\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Progress:
     mes "[Kristian]";
-    mes "\"Wow, it's really generous from you to fight those slimes for us.\"";
+    mes "\"Wow, it's really generous of you to fight those slimes for us.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Thank:
@@ -39,20 +39,20 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
     mes "[Kristian]";
     mes "\"Oh, there was such a visitor, yes. Strange guy, and didn't really know how to behave. He sneaked into the workshop area all the time, I think he was rather curious about the things going on there.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"But still, he can't just walk there, fiddle with the experiments and disturb the helpers doing their work.\"";
+    mes "\"But still, he can't just walk in there, fiddle with the experiments and disturb the helpers doing their work.\"";
     if ((@investigate != 3) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 9))
         goto L_Close;
     set @investigate, @investigate + 1;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt
index 7ca7af4b..9c9e8e02 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt
@@ -16,14 +16,14 @@
     menu
         "What are you doing?",-;
     mes "[Mirjami]";
-    mes "\"Oh? I'm just searching for some cleaning supplies. They must be somewhere around here, but everything got upside down when the slimes escaped.\"";
+    mes "\"Oh? I'm just searching for some cleaning supplies. They must be somewhere around here, but everything went upside down when the slimes escaped.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Thank:
     mes "[Mirjami]";
     mes "\"I heard you fought the slimes that were still roaming between the bookshelves. Thank you!\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"I was a bit worried that they might baffle our efforts by just messing everything up again after we just cleaned.\"";
+    mes "\"I was a bit worried that they might ruin our efforts by messing everything up again after we just cleaned.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Investigate:
@@ -39,18 +39,18 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
     mes "[Mirjami]";
-    mes "\"Ohh, I think I know who you mean. That was a strange guy. He always came over here in the workshop, said he's very interested in the researches. I suppose that's ok, but he didn't keep his hands by himself, but touched some experiments and I catched him on some storage rack.\"";
+    mes "\"Ohh, I think I know who you mean. That was a strange guy. He always came over here in the workshop, said he's very interested in the researches. I suppose that's ok, but he didn't keep his hands to himself, and touched some experiments and I caught him on some storage rack.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"Visitors should keep away from that!\"";
     if ((@investigate != 3) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 9))
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ L_Visitor:
 
 L_Helper:
     mes "[Mirjami]";
-    mes "\"Oh, eh, why are you asking me? I'm here only since a short while and don't really know all the people well enough yet.\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, eh, why are you asking me? I've only been here a short while and don't really know all of the people well enough yet.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Close:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt
index 48298d50..d1666966 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt
@@ -23,8 +23,8 @@
     mes "He sighs with a regretful look on his face.";
     next;
     mes "[Elias]";
-    mes "\"So, if you came because of the library, I'll have to disappoint you, there's not much left.";
-    mes "Though you look like a skilled adventurer. If you'd like to offer your help that'd be very appreciated.\"";
+    mes "\"So, if you came because of the library, I'll have to disappoint you, because there isn't much left.";
+    mes "Though you look like a skilled adventurer. If you'd like to offer your help that'd be highly appreciated.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"The library is on the third floor.\"";
     goto L_Close;
@@ -38,19 +38,19 @@ L_ShortHello:
     menu
         "Can you tell me if there were any unusual visitors before the accident?",-;
     mes "[Elias]";
-    mes "\"Mh, let me think. There were quite a lot of visitors with different concerns, but that's usual at this time of the year.";
-    mes "One of them was a bit odd, he was wearing a mask and had a strange way of talking. He said he comes from Thermin, that's a mining town in the west. I figured his face might have gotten deformed in some mining accident, but I didn't ask, that would've been rude.";
+    mes "\"Mh, let me think. There were quite a few visitors with different concerns, but that's usual at this time of the year.";
+    mes "One of them was a bit odd, he was wearing a mask and had a strange way of talking. He said he comes from Thermin, which is a mining town in the west. I figured his face might have gotten deformed in some mining accident, but I didn't ask, that would've been rude.";
     mes "If I remember correctly he wanted to see the library.\"";
     next;
     mes "Elias gets a bit excited now.";
     mes "[Elias]";
-    mes "\"Do you think he might have something to do with the accident? We're a very hospitable house, so I didn't see a reason to deny him the entrance. I mean, his mask might have been a bit unusual, but hey, there could've been many reasons why someone would wear a mask, don't you think so?\"";
+    mes "\"Do you think he may have had something to do with the accident? We're a very hospitable house, so I didn't see a reason to deny him the entrance. I mean, his mask might have been a bit unusual, but hey, there could've been many reasons why someone would wear a mask, don't you think so?\"";
 
     set @investigate, @investigate + 1;
     callfunc "updateBlueSageInvestigate";
 
     menu
-        "Sure, but it's interesting he was here shortly before the accident.",L_Close,
+        "Sure, but it's interesting that he was here shortly before the accident.",L_Close,
         "I'll ask some more people about that guy.",L_Close;
 
 L_Worry:
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ L_Confirmed:
 
 L_Thank:
     mes "[Elias]";
-    mes "\"Now that Chief Oskari knows about the backgrounds, the Sages will take care about it. It's really a shame how malicious people can be.\"";
+    mes "\"Now that Chief Oskari knows about the backgrounds, the Sages will take care of it. It's really a shame how malicious people can be.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"Thanks a lot for your help with revealing the truth.\"";
     goto L_Close;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMInk.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMInk.txt
index 36baa76c..05141ad3 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMInk.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMInk.txt
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
         "What do you need?",-,
         "Not my problem.",L_Investigate;
     mes "[Eevert]";
-    mes "\"I'm doing the covers and illustrations for the new books we create from the pieces of the old ones. But due to all the chaos when the slimes escaped, most of the phials with colored ink were broken. How am I supposed to do the illustrations without color?\"";
+    mes "\"I'm doing the covers and illustrations for the new books we create from the pieces of the old ones. But due to all of the chaos from when the slimes escaped, most of the phials of colored ink were broken. How am I supposed to do the illustrations without color?\"";
     next;
     mes "\"I think I'll need at least " + @water_amount + " Bottles of Water, " + @spectre_amount + " Spectre Powders, " + @poltergeist_amount + " Poltergeist Powders, " + @wisp_amount + " Wisp Powders and " + @ironpowder_amount + " Iron Powders to create new ink.\"";
     menu
@@ -69,18 +69,18 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
     mes "[Eevert]";
-    mes "\"A visitor? I don't really pay attention to visitors, except it's someone notably.\"";
+    mes "\"A visitor? I don't really pay attention to visitors, unless it's someone notable.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Helper:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMReed.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMReed.txt
index e8ef9ab4..288a8c02 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMReed.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMReed.txt
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
     menu
         "What's wrong?",-;
     mes "[Kullervo]";
-    mes "\"We're nearly out of paper. The new books require so much material... And it's not easy to get Reed Bundles for creating new.\"";
+    mes "\"We're nearly out of paper. The new books require so much material... And it's not easy to get Reed Bundles to create new paper.\"";
     if (BaseLevel < $@Q_BlueSageMinimumLevel)
         goto L_Close;
     menu
@@ -56,13 +56,13 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
@@ -78,8 +78,8 @@ L_Visitor:
 
 L_Helper:
     mes "[Kullervo]";
-    mes "\"Are you asking because people say it's his fault? Listen, I know Peetu since many years now, we started our service here about the same time. We share our room and became really close friends.";
-    mes "And in all this years, I never experienced him messing up anything important. He's a perfectionist. He isn't satisfied with anything minor than the best possible result when doing his work.\"";
+    mes "\"Are you asking because people say it's his fault? Listen, I've known many years now, we started our service here about the same time. We share our room and are really close friends.";
+    mes "And in all these years, I've never seen him messing up anything important. He's a perfectionist. He isn't satisfied with anything less than the best possible result when doing his work.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"I don't understand what went wrong with that spell, it just has to have another cause than Peetu. I'm worried about him, he must feel very miserable. But I can't leave my duty here.\"";
     if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMSilk.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMSilk.txt
index e65d81fe..5ac182c7 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMSilk.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMSilk.txt
@@ -14,13 +14,13 @@
     if (BaseLevel >= $@Q_BlueSageMinimumLevel) goto L_Quest;
 
     mes "[Janika]";
-    mes "\"This is going to be difficult... oh, hello. I'm working on recreating some of the books that got destroyed.\"";
+    mes "\"This is going to be difficult... oh, hello. I'm working on recreating some of the books that were destroyed.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Quest:
     mes "[Janika]";
     mes "\"This is going to be difficult...";
-    mes "Oh, hello. You don't have " + @silk_amount + " Silk Cocoons with you, have you? I need them for the book covers and binding of some of the more valuable books we're trying to recreate.\"";
+    mes "Oh, hello. You don't have " + @silk_amount + " Silk Cocoons with you, do you? I need them for the book covers and binding of some of the more valuable books we're trying to recreate.\"";
     menu
         "I have!",-,
         "I haven't, but I can try to get some.",L_Investigate,
@@ -57,13 +57,13 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt
index 805d8a5e..8ded86ff 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperMYetiClaw.txt
@@ -19,13 +19,13 @@
 
 L_Quest:
     mes "[Santeri]";
-    mes "\"Welcome. Are you an adventurer? I could need some help.\"";
+    mes "\"Welcome. Are you an adventurer? I could use some help.\"";
     menu
         "I am. What heroic action is needed?",-,
         "How can I help?",-,
         "I'm not interested.",L_Close;
     mes "[Santeri]";
-    mes "\"You see, we're working on repairing all the damaged books and creating new ones for those that are lost.";
+    mes "\"You see, we're working on repairing all of the damaged books and creating new ones for those that are lost.";
     mes "Therefore we need a lot of glue, but our supplies are nearly used up. I need " + @claw_amount + " Yeti Claws as ingredient to make new glue. Do you have that?\"";
     menu
         "Yes, here you go.",-,
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ L_Quest:
 
 L_Done:
     mes "[Santeri]";
-    mes "\"Thanks to you our glue supply is replenished and we can repair those books.\"";
+    mes "\"Thanks to you, our glue supply is replenished and we can repair those books.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_NoItem:
@@ -63,13 +63,13 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
@@ -79,9 +79,9 @@ L_Visitor:
 
 L_Helper:
     mes "[Santeri]";
-    mes "\"Oh, that's an interesting question. I was really surpised when I heard that he was responsible for the sealing spell. I've worked together with him once in a while, and I have to say, it really was a pleasure. He's very accurate and diligent, but also polite and helpful.\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, that's an interesting question. I was really surpised when I heard that he was responsible for the sealing spell. I've worked together with him before, and I have to say, it really was a pleasure. He's very accurate and diligent, but also polite and helpful.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"I really wonder what went wrong with that sealing spell, I can't imagine Peetu messing up something such important.\"";
+    mes "\"I really wonder what went wrong with that sealing spell, I can't imagine Peetu messing up something so important.\"";
     if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
         goto L_Close;
     set @investigate, @investigate + 3;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting1.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting1.txt
index 208ba68c..a1140f33 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting1.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting1.txt
@@ -13,10 +13,10 @@
     if (@bookpages > 0) goto L_Progress;
 
     mes "[Lenita]";
-    mes "\"Oh, hello. You didn't choose a good moment to visit. The library is a total mess. The slimes got out of control and ate most of the books.\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, hello. You didn't choose a good time to visit. The library is a total mess. The slimes got out of control and ate most of the books.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"We're trying to repair some of the valuable and important books. It's so much work!";
-    mes "I was up until late night yesterday, and went up so early today... I'm having a break right now.\"";
+    mes "I was up until late last night, and woke up so early today... I'm having a break right now.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
 
 L_Progress:
@@ -42,13 +42,13 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "See you later.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting2.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting2.txt
index 71f50af9..f4b9e118 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting2.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperResting2.txt
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
     if (@slimes > 0) goto L_Progress;
 
     mes "[Miro]";
-    mes "\"Hm? Oh, excuse me. I'm feeling so tired. We currently have some problems with some slimes out of control in the library. They ate most of the books and caused a total chaos.\"";
+    mes "\"Hm? Oh, excuse me. I'm feeling so tired. We currently have some problems with some slimes out of control in the library. They ate most of the books and caused total chaos.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"We need to clean up the mess and it's so much to do. I was cleaning the floor for hours and I'm having a break now.\"";
     goto L_Investigate;
@@ -41,25 +41,25 @@ L_Ask_Visitor:
 
 L_Ask_Helper:
     menu
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper,
         "Bye.",L_Close;
 
 L_Ask_Both:
     menu
         "Do you know anything about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor,
-        "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
+        "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper,
         "I need to leave.",L_Close;
 
 L_Visitor:
     mes "[Miro]";
-    mes "\"With a mask? I really don't know. I'm usually working in the workshop and most of the visitors spent their time in the library. Though sometimes they come to have a quick look in the workshop too, but I don't really pay attention to that, so... I can't recall a visitor with a mask, sorry.\"";
+    mes "\"With a mask? I really don't know. I'm usually in the workshop and most of the visitors spend their time in the library. Sometimes they come to have a quick look in the workshop too, but I don't really pay attention to that, so... I can't recall a visitor with a mask, sorry.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Helper:
     mes "[Miro]";
     mes "\"Peetu? It was his job to seal away the slimes before the night, right? I have to say I'm really surprised about what happened, because he's a very cautious person. I'd have never guessed that he'd mess up something as important as this.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"If Nikolai's helpers wouldn't be that carefully chosen I'd think this was some kind of a bad joke from someone.\"";
+    mes "\"If Nikolai's helpers weren't that carefully chosen I'd think this was some kind of a bad joke from someone.\"";
     if ((@investigate != 5) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 7))
         goto L_Close;
     set @investigate, @investigate + 3;
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt
index 82222309..b0027d8f 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
     if (BaseLevel < $@Q_BlueSageMinimumLevel)
         goto L_Close;
     next;
-    mes "\"You seem to be a quite experienced adventurer. I usually wouldn't ask for this, but since my dear friend Santa mentioned his good experiences with hiring additional helpers in times of pressure, I reconsidered.";
+    mes "\"You seem to be quite an experienced adventurer. I usually wouldn't ask for this, but since my dear friend Santa mentioned his good experiences with hiring additional helpers in times of pressure, I reconsidered.";
     mes "If you don't mind, every help with our current situation would be appreciated.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"There are many things to take care of at the moment, so if you'd like to aid us, the helpers will be able to tell you what they need.\"";
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ L_NoInvestigate2:
 L_StartPagesAdvice:
     // I heard the slimes ate most of the books...
     mes "[Nikolai]";
-    mes "\"This is true. But while hunting the slimes we discovered that they occasionaly drop bookpages that are still readable.";
+    mes "\"This is true. But while hunting the slimes we discovered that they occasionaly drop bookpages that are still legible.";
     mes "Since we had several copies of nearly all the books, we might be able to recreate most of them if we can get at least one copy of each page.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ L_SlimesAdvice:
 L_StartInvestigateAdvice:
     // How did this all happen?
     mes "[Nikolai]";
-    mes "\"We're not sure yet. The helper who was responsible to seal away the slimes has been sent to his room until they situation calms down and we can start an investigation.\"";
+    mes "\"We're not sure yet. The helper who was responsible for sealing away the slimes has been sent to his room until they situation calms down and we can start an investigation.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_InvestigateAdvice:
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ L_InvestigateAdvice:
 L_InvestigateAdvice2:
     // I told Chief Oskari what I found out about the accident.
     mes "[Nikolai]";
-    mes "\"Yes, he already let me know. You're investigations were very helpful! This is surely something we need to look into further.\"";
+    mes "\"Yes, he already let me know. Your investigations were very helpful! This is surely something we need to look into further.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"Did you already talk to Peetu? I'm sure he'll be glad to know about your results as well.\"";
     goto L_Close;
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ L_Full_Inv:
 
 L_Done:
     mes "[Nikolai]";
-    mes "\"Thanks for all your help.\"";
+    mes "\"Thanks for all of your help.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Close:
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/slimes.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/slimes.txt
index 6266b0cd..a88b28c5 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/slimes.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/slimes.txt
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ L_ClearedPoint:
 
     set @slimes, ((QUEST_BlueSage & $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_MASK) >> $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_SHIFT);
     if (@slimes == 255)
-        message strcharinfo(0), "That had been a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
+        message strcharinfo(0), "That was a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
     set @slimes, 0;
     goto L_Clean;
 }
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ L_ClearedPoint:
 
     set @slimes, ((QUEST_BlueSage & $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_MASK) >> $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_SHIFT);
     if (@slimes == 255)
-        message strcharinfo(0), "That had been a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
+        message strcharinfo(0), "That was a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
     set @slimes, 0;
     goto L_Clean;
 }
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ L_ClearedPoint:
 
     set @slimes, ((QUEST_BlueSage & $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_MASK) >> $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_SHIFT);
     if (@slimes == 255)
-        message strcharinfo(0), "That had been a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
+        message strcharinfo(0), "That was a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
     set @slimes, 0;
     goto L_Clean;
 }
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ L_ClearedPoint:
 
     set @slimes, ((QUEST_BlueSage & $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_MASK) >> $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_SHIFT);
     if (@slimes == 255)
-        message strcharinfo(0), "That had been a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
+        message strcharinfo(0), "That was a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
     set @slimes, 0;
     goto L_Clean;
 }
@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ L_ClearedPoint:
 
     set @slimes, ((QUEST_BlueSage & $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_MASK) >> $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_SHIFT);
     if (@slimes == 255)
-        message strcharinfo(0), "That had been a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
+        message strcharinfo(0), "That was a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
     set @slimes, 0;
     goto L_Clean;
 }
@@ -492,7 +492,7 @@ L_ClearedPoint:
 
     set @slimes, ((QUEST_BlueSage & $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_MASK) >> $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_SHIFT);
     if (@slimes == 255)
-        message strcharinfo(0), "That had been a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
+        message strcharinfo(0), "That was a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
     set @slimes, 0;
     goto L_Clean;
 }
@@ -573,7 +573,7 @@ L_ClearedPoint:
 
     set @slimes, ((QUEST_BlueSage & $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_MASK) >> $@Q_BlueSageSlimes_SHIFT);
     if (@slimes == 255)
-        message strcharinfo(0), "That had been a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
+        message strcharinfo(0), "That was a lot of slimes. You wonder if you're done now.";
     set @slimes, 0;
     goto L_Clean;
 }
diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/visitors.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/visitors.txt
index 9d5d20ee..1071ed14 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/048-2/visitors.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/visitors.txt
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
 
 048-2.gat,46,44,0|script|Connor|150,{
     mes "[Connor]";
-    mes "\"Oh, hello. There happened some big accident in the library!  Most of the books were damaged or destroyed!\"";
+    mes "\"Oh, hello. There was a big accident in the library!  Most of the books were damaged or destroyed!\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"As far as I understood it has to do with those weird slimes. They're white and blue! I never saw slimes with that color.\"";
+    mes "\"As far as I understand it had to do with those weird slimes. They're white and blue! I've never seen slimes of that color.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"I was so excited to get an opportunity to study some of the rare and valuable books and now this.";
     mes "I'd never have expected something like this happening in a Sages household. I thought they're so powerful and wise...\"";
@@ -23,14 +23,14 @@ L_Close:
         "Nah, I'm just having a look around.",L_Close,
         "Yes!",-;
     mes "[Parcival]";
-    mes "\"That's very commendable. But you'll be disappointed, there is some huge problem and the library is all upside down.";
+    mes "\"That's very commendable. But you'll be disappointed, there is a huge problem and the library is all upside down.";
     mes "This is very annoying! I was planning this trip months ago and now this!\"";
     mes "He sighs.";
     next;
     mes "[Parcival]";
     mes "\"I'll probably have to leave and come back another time. But I want to warm up first.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"I really wonder what they did... I can still feel some distortion in the magic pattern within this mansion. I mean, it's twisted anyway, because the Sages have their houses in a shifted dimension - that's why it is so much larger in the inside than from the outside.\"";
+    mes "\"I wonder what they did... I can still feel some distortion in the magic pattern within this mansion. I mean, it's twisted anyway, because the Sages have their houses in a shifted dimension - that's why it is so much larger in the inside than from the outside.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"But there's something else... Well, I've heard about the researches being done here. Seems there's some very advanced magic involved.\"";
     goto L_Close;