Minor grammar edits to birrod, kimarr, and yerrnk

1 files changed, 19 insertions, 19 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/033-1/yerrnk.txt b/world/map/npc/033-1/yerrnk.txt
index 8cb9e13d..64238524 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/033-1/yerrnk.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/033-1/yerrnk.txt
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
     mes "[Barbarian]";
     mes "\"Hello. I'm Yerrnk, first warrior of the Mangarr.\"";
     next;
-    mes "Yerrnk looks at you in a reserved way.";
+    mes "Yerrnk looks at you cautiously.";
     mes "[Yerrnk]";
     mes "\"Please take care of your own business.\"";
     goto L_Close;
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ L_Fluffy:
     mes "He sighs.";
     next;
     mes "[Yerrnk]";
-    mes "\"Are you going to accept Kimarr's task? It's an ancient ceremony in our tribe. A young member is accepted as an adult when completing it.\"";
+    mes "\"Are you going to accept Kimarr's task? It's an ancient ceremony in our tribe. A young member is accepted as an adult after completing it.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Kimarr:
@@ -39,32 +39,32 @@ L_Duty:
     mes "[Yerrnk]";
     mes "\"I'm not sure if you are aware about the meaning of your actions.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"You passed the inition ritus for hunters of our tribe. That means now you are a hunter of our tribe, with all the rights and duties that come along with that.\"";
+    mes "\"You passed the initiation rite for hunters of our tribe. That means now you are a hunter of our tribe, with all the rights and duties that come along with that.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"So you'll have to obey our laws and traditions, protect and help any member of our tribe that is in need and never show weakness nor fear in battle.\"";
+    mes "\"So you'll have to obey our laws and traditions, protect and help any member of our tribe that is in need, and show neither weakness nor fear in battle.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Keep this in mind. If you fail you'll have to recieve the elders judgement.\"";
+    mes "\"Keep this in mind. If you fail you'll have to receive the elders' judgement.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Sorrow:
     mes "[Yerrnk]";
     mes "\"I noticed that you're getting along with Kimarr and Birrod very well. That's good.\"";
-    mes "He smiles, but then an expression of worry gets back to his face.";
+    mes "He smiles, but then an expression of worry returns to his face.";
     next;
 
 L_Mission:
     mes "[Yerrnk]";
-    mes "\"Our tribe is going through dire straits. We used to live in harmony with the mountain ever since.";
+    mes "\"Our tribe is going through dire times. We have lived in harmony with the mountain since time beyond memory.";
     mes "Life is hard in the snowy mountains, but this life suits our nature.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Some weeks ago the Yetis started to act very strange. Usually they are very shy, but now...";
+    mes "\"Some weeks ago the Yetis started to act very strangely. Usually they are very shy, but now....";
     mes "They left the secluded areas high up in the mountains they used to live on and started roaming our hunting grounds.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"It became very dangerous to leave the village, so it's even harder to gather enough food to survive.";
-    mes "But not only this, the Yetis are getting more daring every day - they might attack the village itself sooner or later.\"";
+    mes "Not only this, but the Yetis are getting more daring every day. They might attack the village itself sooner or later.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"Other wild animals got more aggressive as well, though the Yetis are the most dangerous.";
-    mes "Something like that has never happened before. We have no idea what could cause the animals to behave like this.\"";
+    mes "\"Other wild animals are more aggressive as well, though the Yetis are the most dangerous.";
+    mes "Something like this has never happened before. We have no idea what could cause the animals to behave like this.\"";
     next;
     mes "\"That's why we were sent on a mission to find and talk to Santa, one of the Sages of Kaizei.";
     mes "The Sages are wizards of great power and wisdom, and we hope Santa might be able to give us advice.\"";
@@ -73,11 +73,11 @@ L_Mission:
 L_Birrod:
     mes "[Yerrnk]";
     mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", I have to admit that I'm surprised by your skills.";
-    mes "You've proved your braveness and strength.\"";
+    mes "You've proven your bravery and strength.\"";
     next;
     if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0)
         goto L_Not_Ready;
-    mes "\"Please talk to Birrod to receive the initiation ritual to become a warrior of the Mangarr.\"";
+    mes "\"Please talk to Birrod to receive the initiation rite to become a warrior of the Mangarr.\"";
     menu
         "Alright.",-,
         "Can you tell me again what you are here for?",L_Mission;
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ L_Warrior:
     mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", welcome back!";
     mes "Do you have any question?\"";
     menu
-        "Everything's alright, thanks.",-,
+        "Everything's all right, thanks.",-,
         "What are you doing down here?",L_Mission,
         "Can you explain the Raging ability to me?",L_Skill,
         "Do you have a task for me?",L_Task;
@@ -108,14 +108,14 @@ L_Skill:
     mes "\"As a warrior of our tribe it should be the most important thing to you to defend weaker members of the tribe.";
     mes "To achieve this goal our warriors are training the skill to stand the pain of being hit and even use it to get into a state of rage.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"It only works in a melee fight, when you hear your opponent gasping, smell his sweat, and feel the heat of his body.\"";
+    mes "\"It works only in a melee fight, when you hear your opponent gasping, smell his sweat, and feel the heat of his body.\"";
     next;
-    mes "Yerrnk gets excited, then he pauses a moment calming down.";
-    mes "\"Basically its a neglect of your own defense but therefor being able to hit the enemy with outstanding might.\"";
+    mes "Yerrnk gets excited, then he pauses a moment to calm down.";
+    mes "\"Basically you neglect of your own defense but gain the ability to hit your enemy with outstanding might.\"";
     next;
     mes "[Yerrnk]";
-    mes "\"You can imagine that this comprises some danger. That's why we usually fight as a group, so a weakened warrior can step back and recover while the others keep the fight.";
-    mes "It's also beneficial to have a healer, but very few members of our tribe are born with the capability to wield magic.\"";
+    mes "\"You can imagine that this creates some danger. That's why we usually fight as a group, so a weakened warrior can step back and recover while the others continue to fight.";
+    mes "It's also beneficial to have a healer, but very few members of our tribe are born with the ability to wield magic.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_Task: