Spell check of new and updated Tulimshar NPCs. -Frost

1 files changed, 10 insertions, 10 deletions

diff --git a/world/map/npc/022-1/anwar.txt b/world/map/npc/022-1/anwar.txt
index d61e271c..65454924 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/022-1/anwar.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/022-1/anwar.txt
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ OnInit:
     mes "[Anwar]";
     mes "\"That's the spirit! Ok, I'm tired of spending most of my time working on this field. I heard the magicians at the magic school are reasearching about ways to enhance the growth of plants with magic.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"I can't go there myself, since this area of the city is full with sneaky ragtags and they will rob my field if I leave here. Could you go to the magic school and ask for some magic enhancement for my field?\"";
+    mes "\"I can't go there myself, since this area of the city is full of sneaky ragtags and they will rob my field if I leave here. Could you go to the magic school and ask for some magic enhancement for my field?\"";
     next;
     mes "\"To find the school just follow the street south and then go west.\"";
     set @state, 1;
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ OnInit:
 
 L_FirstTry: // @state >= 1 but below 5
     mes "[Anwar]";
-    mes "\"I hope the wizards at the magic school can help me with the field. I'd really like to have more free time. I want to taylor, but I'm not experienced enough to make a living out of that.\"";
+    mes "\"I hope the wizards at the magic school can help me with the field. I'd really like to have more free time. I want to make clothing, but I'm not experienced enough to make a living out of that.\"";
     if (@state != 4)
         goto L_Close;
     menu
@@ -84,12 +84,12 @@ L_SecondTry: // @state >= 5 but below 10
     if (@state != 9)
         goto L_Close;
     menu
-        "Here is another one. Eomie casted a spell on it.",-;
+        "Here is another one. Eomie cast a spell on it.",-;
     mes "[Anwar]";
     mes "\"Eomie? I heard she's amazingly skilled with nature magic. I'll try if this works better.\"";
     mes "He takes the fertilizer and puts it on only a few plants, then waits a moment to see the result.";
     next;
-    mes "The plants recovers a bit and get more green again.";
+    mes "The plants recover a bit and become green again.";
     mes "[Anwar]";
     mes "\"Ah, this one is better. I'll put it on the entire field.\"";
     getexp @secondTry_exp, 0;
@@ -98,10 +98,10 @@ L_SecondTry: // @state >= 5 but below 10
     next;
 L_GiftMaterial: // @state == 10
     mes "[Anwar]";
-    mes "\"I want to show my gratitude for Tinris and Eomie. Can you help me once again? I would like to make some clothes for them and need " + @cloth_amount + " pieces of Cotton Cloth and " + @silk_amount + " Silk Cocoons.\"";
+    mes "\"I want to show my gratitude to Tinris and Eomie. Can you help me once again? I would like to make some clothes for them and need " + @cloth_amount + " pieces of Cotton Cloth and " + @silk_amount + " Silk Cocoons.\"";
     menu
         "I have it.",-,
-        "Where to get that?",L_Hint,
+        "Where can I get that?",L_Hint,
         "I'll see what I can do.",L_Close;
     getinventorylist;
     if (@inventorylist_count == 100)
@@ -127,12 +127,12 @@ L_Hint:
     mes "[Anwar]";
     mes "\"As far as I know Cotton Cloth is given out as reward for hunting monsters. You should talk to Aidan on the bazaar.\"";
     next;
-    mes "\"And silk cocoons are gotten from Silkworms. They live in the woodland area around Hurnscald. You can get there by taking the ferry.\"";
+    mes "\"And silk cocoons come from Silkworms. They live in the woodland area around Hurnscald. You can get there by taking the ferry.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_GiveTinris: // @state >= 11 but below 13
     mes "[Anwar]";
-    mes "\"Did you already bring the Green V-Nack Sweater to Tinris?\"";
+    mes "\"Did you already bring the Green V-Neck Sweater to Tinris?\"";
     if (@state != 12)
         menu
             "Not yet.",L_Close;
@@ -170,8 +170,8 @@ L_GiveEomie: // @state >= 13 but below 15
 
 L_Done: // @state == 15
     mes "[Anwar]";
-    mes "\"Thank you so much for your help. The plants are growing much better now, I don't have to spend all my time taking care about the field anymore.";
-    mes "Finally I can do what I'm really interested in and work on getting better in tayloring clothes.\"";
+    mes "\"Thank you so much for your help. The plants are growing much better now. I don't have to spend all my time working in the field any more.";
+    mes "Finally I can do what I'm really interested in and work on getting better at sewing clothes.\"";
     goto L_Close;
 
 L_NoItem: