Initial spell/grammar check for tutorial

1 files changed, 22 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/npc/042-2/tanisha.txt b/npc/042-2/tanisha.txt
index 5e040da3..3ed5c6bc 100644
--- a/npc/042-2/tanisha.txt
+++ b/npc/042-2/tanisha.txt
@@ -23,12 +23,12 @@
 		"Yes, thank you.",-,
 		"Yeah, but all my stuff is gone.",-;
 	mes "[Tanisha]";
-	mes "\"I see. It was really bad luck what happened to you.";
+	mes "\"I'm glad you're feeling better. It was really bad luck what happened to you.";
 	mes "Hey, I have an idea.\"";
 	next;
 L_Maggots:
 	set tanisha, 1;
-	mes "\"There are some maggots eating the goods and I shall get rid of them.";
+	mes "\"There are some maggots eating the goods and I'm supposed to get rid of them.";
 	mes "But they're so yucky!\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"If you kill them, I'll give you my knife.";
@@ -51,11 +51,11 @@ L_Fight_Again:
 	mes "\"Press A to focus on a monster. With X you can focus and start attacking the same time.";
 	mes "But it also works to click on the monster with your mouse.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"If you press Shift, you can abort your attack.\"";
+	mes "\"If you press the left Shift button, you can abort your attack.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Maggots aren't aggressive, so they won't harm you until you attacked them first. Take them out one by one.\"";
+	mes "\"Maggots aren't aggressive, so they won't harm you until you attack them first. Take them out one by one.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Sometimes dead monsters leave some useful things. You can pick them up with pressing Z or clicking with your mouse.\"";
+	mes "\"Sometimes dead monsters leave some useful things. You can pick them up by pressing Z or clicking on the items with your mouse.\"";
 	set tanisha, 2;
 	set @maggot, 0;
 	set @time, 0;
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ L_Stats:
 	mes "\"And it seems you became stronger and more experienced.";
 	mes "That means you got some status points which you can use to increase your abilities.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Press F2 to see your status window. There you can distribute your points on six different properties.\"";
+	mes "\"Press F2 or click the Status button in the bar at the upper right to see your status window. There you can distribute your points on six different properties.\"";
 	next;
 L_StatsRe:
 	mes "\"Strength makes you hit harder and you can carry more weight.\"";
@@ -85,17 +85,17 @@ L_StatsRe:
 	next;
 	mes "\"Intelligence is useful for magic attack and defense.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Dexterity is needed to hit a monster. It's also very important for the damage if you use a ranged weapon.\"";
+	mes "\"Dexterity is needed to hit monsters. It's also very important for the damage if you use a ranged weapon.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"Luck gives you the chance to do critical hits and lowers the chance to receive a critical hit from your opponent.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Think about how you want to play before putting the points.\"";
+	mes "\"Think about how you want to play before assigning the points.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "Also I heard rumors about a strange guy lurking around in the desert south of Tulimshar who can help you to forget your abilites!\"";
+	mes "Also I heard rumors about a strange guy lurking around in the desert south of Tulimshar who can help you to forget your abilities!\"";
 	mes "Tanisha looks at you with wide opened eyes.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Tanisha]";
-	mes "\"But I don't think he'd do that without a service in return.\"";
+	mes "\"But I doubt he'd do that without a service in return.\"";
 
 	if (tanisha == 3) goto L_Advice;
 	close;
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ L_StatsRe:
 L_Advice:
 	next;
 	mes "[Tanisha]";
-	mes "\"When you go to main Tulimshar, you could see Bernard. He can make a delicious soup!";
+	mes "\"When you go to Tulimshar, you should see Bernard. He can make a delicious soup!";
 	mes "Good luck!\"";
 	emotion 3;
 	if (tanisha == 3)
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ L_Again:
 	next;
 	if (hasan)
 		menu
-			"A guy named Hasan doesn't let me enter main Tulimshar.",L_Hasan,
+			"A guy named Hasan won't let me enter Tulimshar.",L_Hasan,
 			"Yes, could you explain again about...",L_Explain,
 			"No, thanks.",L_Close;
 	menu
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ L_Explain:
 		"... how to fight?",L_Fight,
 		"... monsters?",L_Mob,
 		"... status points?",L_StatsRe,
-		"... what to do in main Tulimshar?",L_Advice,
+		"... what to do in Tulimshar?",L_Advice,
 		"... nevermind.",L_Close;
 
 L_Fight:
@@ -137,21 +137,21 @@ L_Fight:
 	mes "\"Press A to focus on a monster. With X you can focus and attack.";
 	mes "But it also works to click on the monster with your mouse.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"If you press Shift, you can abort your attack.\"";
+	mes "\"If you press the left Shift button, you can abort your attack.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Sometimes dead monsters leave some useful things. You can pick them up with pressing Z or clicking with your mouse.\"";
+	mes "\"Sometimes dead monsters leave some useful things. You can pick them up with pressing Z or clicking on the items with your mouse.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"If you feel exhausted from battle you can sit down with pressing S to recover faster.\"";
+	mes "\"If you feel exhausted from battle you can sit down by pressing S to recover faster.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Mob:
 	mes "[Tanisha]";
 	mes "\"I don't know much about monsters, I'm just a little girl. But I know a few things.";
-	mes "There a several types of monsters, Aggressive, Neutral, and Assistants.\"";
+	mes "There are several types of monsters...Aggressive, Neutral, and Assistants.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"Aggressive monsters will attack you as soon as they see you.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Neutral monsters are peacefully until they get attacked.\"";
+	mes "\"Neutral monsters are peaceful until they get attacked.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"Assistants are monsters who help each other.\"";
 	close;
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ L_Hasan:
 
 L_Tut_Done:
 	mes "[Tanisha]";
-	mes "\"This yucky maggots! They're eating our goods!";
+	mes "\"These yucky maggots! They're eating our goods!";
 	mes "No matter how many of them you kill, they always come back.\"";
 	mes "She sighs.";
 	next;
@@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ L_Tut_Done:
 L_Crowded:
 	mes "[Tanisha]";
 	mes "\"That's great! But...";
-	mes "it seems it's crowded in there.\"";
+	mes "it seems a little crowded in there.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"Let's wait a short while.\"";
 	close;
@@ -203,13 +203,13 @@ L_Sleep:
 	close;
 
 L_Fail:
-	mes "Tanisha seems to try hard to supress laughter.";
+	mes "Tanisha seems to be trying hard to supress laughter.";
 	mes "[Tanisha]";
 	mes "\"The maggots defeated you.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "She bursts out with laughter.";
 	mes "[Tanisha]";
-	mes "\"Oups, I'm sorry. It's just too funny.";
+	mes "\"Oops, I'm sorry. It's just too funny.";
 	mes "Do you want to try it again?\"";
 	next;
 	menu