Spelling, grammar, formatting corrections for love triangle quest.

1 files changed, 22 insertions, 22 deletions

diff --git a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt
index 194c010a..cefbf61d 100644
--- a/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt
+++ b/npc/027-2_Caretakers_House/innkeeper.txt
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ L_Skip1:
 L_Offer_Help1:
 	mes "\"I.. I don't know you. Why should you help me?\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"Bring me a proof you are serious. My life seems to have ended in a terrible and sad way, I can feel it very clearly. If you want to help me, please bring me something that represents this immeasurable sadness I am feeling!\"";
+	mes "\"Bring me proof that you are serious. My life seems to have ended in a terrible and sad way, I can see it very clearly. If you want to help me, please bring me something that represents this immeasurable sadness I am feeling!\"";
 
 	set @state, 3;
 	callsub S_Update_Mask;
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ L_Check_Tears:
 	callsub S_Update_Mask;
 
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
-	mes "\"These tears.. how they shimmer in the candle light. Yes, it seems you are serious about your offer. I think you have the sensibility to help me find out the real meaning of this terrible feeling.\"";
+	mes "\"These tears.. how they shimmer in the candle light. Yes, it seems you are serious about your offer. I think you have the sensibility to help me find out the real meaning behind this terrible feeling.\"";
 	next;
 L_Ask_Life:
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
@@ -175,20 +175,20 @@ L_Ask_Life:
 
 	if (@kidstate == 5)
 		menu
-			"Please tell me about your life. Maybe this gives a clue what happened.",L_Skip2,
+			"Please tell me about your life. Maybe this will give a clue about what happened.",L_Skip2,
 			"Hi. I found this in the main hall. Do you know to whom it belongs?", L_Bracelet,
 			"I need to think about that.", L_Close;
 L_Skip2:
 	menu
-		"Please tell me about your life. Maybe this gives a clue what happened.",-,
+		"Please tell me about your life. Maybe this will give a clue about what happened.",-,
 		"I need to think about that.", L_Close;
 
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
-	mes "\"About my life? Well ok.\"";
+	mes "\"About my life? Well, ok.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"I'm the owner of this inn. I inherited it from my parents, who ran it while I was a child.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"My father - he was a very joyful man. But one day, I was just ten years old, he had an accident while carrying a barrel of beer.\"";
+	mes "\"My father - he was a very joyful man. But one day, when I was just ten years old, he had an accident while carrying a barrel of beer.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"The barrel smashed his legs and he wasn't able to walk anymore. He got very despondent about that and started to drink.\"";
 	next;
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ L_Skip2:
 		"Yes, yes, but what about your life shortly before you died?",-,
 		"I can imagine. I'm very sorry for you",-;
 
-	mes "She doesn't seem to pay much attention on what you say.";
+	mes "She doesn't seem to pay much attention to what you say.";
 	next;
 	mes "\"But Hamond, my friend since I was a child, helped me in those bad times. We built up the inn again and we - we married.\"";
 	next;
@@ -227,14 +227,14 @@ L_Check_Kid:
 	if ((Sex == 1) && (@kidstate < 7)) goto L_Man;
 	if ((Sex == 0) && (@kidstate < 7)) goto L_Woman;
 
-	mes "\"What I'm going to tell you is very personal, but your acts showed me you're a person I can trust. You kindly asked me about that bracelet you have found... and also, even my son, who is always so reserved with strangers, came to me and spent a long time telling me a lot of nice things about you. So I will tell you about my sad love.\"";
+	mes "\"What I'm going to tell you is very personal, but your acts have shown me that you're a person I can trust. You kindly asked me about that bracelet you have found... and also, even my son, who is always so reserved with strangers, came to me and spent a long time telling me a lot of nice things about you. So I will tell you about my sad love.\"";
 	next;
 
 L_Lovestory:
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
-	mes "\"It began as a completely normal day. We were taking care of our overnight guests and prepared the inn for the evening rush.\"";
+	mes "\"It began as a completely normal day. We were taking care of our overnight guests and preparing the inn for the evening rush.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"But that day, a very special patron checked in. His name was Savaric, and he was a student of magic. He came from far away to check some rumours about a legendary mana seed.\"";
+	mes "\"But that day, a very special patron checked in. His name was Savaric, and he was a student of magic. He came from far away to check some rumors about a legendary mana seed.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "Reid's Ghost has a completely enchanted look on her face.";
 	next;
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ L_Lovestory:
 	mes "She is pointing at her dead body with a sad look on her face. You take the key.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
-	mes "\"This is the key to our personal room, it is located at the very end of the corridor upstairs. You will find my dairy in the bookshelf, hidden behind a book with poems. Hamond don't like poems.\"";
+	mes "\"This is the key to our personal room, it is located at the very end of the corridor upstairs. You will find my diary in the bookshelf, hidden behind a book with poems. Hamond doesn't like poems.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"Please go and read it.\"";
 
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ L_Lovestory:
 
 L_Read_Diary:
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
-	mes "\"Please go in my room and read the diary. You will find my dairy in the bookshelf, hidden behind a book with poems.\"";
+	mes "\"Please go into my room and read the diary. You will find my diary in the bookshelf, hidden behind a book with poems.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Savaric:
@@ -276,19 +276,19 @@ L_Savaric:
 	mes "\"Oh, thank you.\"";
 	if (@golbanez < 5)
 		menu
-			"But I still didn't find out, what happened. I'll return when I have news.",L_Close;
+			"But I still didn't find out what happened. I'll return when I have news.",L_Close;
 	menu
-		"But I still didn't find out, what happened. I'll return when I have news.",L_Close,
+		"But I still didn't find out what happened. I'll return when I have news.",L_Close,
 		"I found out what happened to you and this place. I'll tell you.",-;
 
-	mes "You explain her about Golbanez, Savaric and the memories you have seen.";
+	mes "You explain to her about Golbanez, Savaric and the memories you have seen.";
 	next;
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
-	mes "\"Oh, I always knew we weren't doing the right thing! But how should we have known it would end like this?\"";
+	mes "\"Oh, I always knew we weren't doing the right thing! But how could we have known it would end like this?\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"I would never have expected Hamond to beat me - and Savaric... I trusted him with my life... And he uncarefully wasted it. Mine and that from everyone else in the inn.\"";
+	mes "\"I would never have expected Hamond to beat me - and Savaric... I trusted him with my life... And he carelessly wasted it. Mine and everyone else in the inn.\"";
 	next;
-	mes "\"I'm feeling hurt. And confused. Both Hamond and Savaric turned out not to be the person I believed them to be.\"";
+	mes "\"I'm feeling hurt. And confused. Both Hamond and Savaric turned out not to be the persons I believed them to be.\"";
 	set @state, 8;
 	callsub S_Update_Mask;
 	close;
@@ -343,12 +343,12 @@ L_Kidding:
 
 L_Tease:
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
-	mes "\"Don't be mean! I never feeled like that before.\"";
+	mes "\"Don't be mean! I never felt like that before.\"";
 	close;
 
 L_Thanks:
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
-	mes "\"I'm so glad, now I know what happened and spoke to Savaric and Hamond. Thank you so much. Please take this.\"";
+	mes "\"I'm so glad, now I know what happened and spoke to both Savaric and Hamond. Thank you so much. Please take this.\"";
 	getinventorylist;
 	if (@inventorylist_count == 100) goto L_Full_Inv;
 	getitem "MylarinDust", 1;
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ L_Happy:
 	mes "\"Thank you for all you've done.\"";
 	menu
 		"Can you tell me again about the powder you gave me?",L_Mylarin,
-		"I'm glad I could helped.",-;
+		"I'm glad I could help.",-;
 	close;
 
 L_Not_Enough_Tears:
@@ -388,7 +388,7 @@ L_Man:
 
 L_Woman:
 	mes "[Reid's Ghost]";
-	mes "\"What I have to tell you something very personal. You are a woman like me - I'm sure you would understand.\"";
+	mes "\"What I have to tell you is something very personal. You are a woman like me - I'm sure you would understand.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "\"But I'm not sure if I want to tell you. I know you helped me already and showed me you are a sensitive woman, but I barely know you. I am sorry, but I have to think a little bit more. Maybe later, when I know you better, I can tell you more about it. \"";
 	close;