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1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/018-1/flowerpentagram3.txt b/world/map/npc/018-1/flowerpentagram3.txt
index 1e41e555..81f994eb 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/018-1/flowerpentagram3.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/018-1/flowerpentagram3.txt
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
if (OrumQuest > 23) goto L_PlacedThirdFlower;
if (OrumQuest == 23) goto L_ThirdFlower;
- message strcharinfo(0), "Something is odd with this place.";
+ message strcharinfo(0), "Something is odd about this place.";
end;
L_ThirdFlower:
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ L_ThirdFlower:
if (isin("018-1.gat", 82, 28, 84, 30))
goto L_Place;
- mes "This doesn't work, you're too far away.";
+ mes "This isn't working, you're too far away.";
goto L_Close;
L_Place:
@@ -37,8 +37,8 @@ L_Place:
if (countitem("WhiteSummonFlower") < 1)
goto L_NoFlower;
delitem "WhiteSummonFlower", 1;
- mes "Knowing what will happen, you prepare yourself for a fight. Then you go ahead and place the magical flower.";
- mes "You feel the familiar tension around you. Here they come.";
+ mes "Knowing what will happen, you prepare yourself for a fight. Then you go ahead with the ritual and place the magical flower.";
+ mes "You feel the now familiar tension around you. Here they come.";
set OrumQuest, 24;
close2;
areamonster "018-1.gat", 73, 22, 89, 36, "", 1105, 1, "#FlowerPentagram3::OnSquirrelDeath";
@@ -84,24 +84,24 @@ OnAScorpionDeath:
L_MonstersAlive:
mes "As you get closer to the place, you feel an unnerving presence.";
- mes "The place has recently been used to summon something! And the beings are still near!";
+ mes "This place has recently been used to summon something! And the beings are still nearby!";
next;
mes "You should get rid of them before attempting the summoning yourself.";
goto L_Close;
L_NoFlower:
- mes "You reach into your inventory to take out the flower and place it. But you can't find it!";
- mes "Did you lose it somewhere along the way? If you can't find it again, go talk to Orum.";
+ mes "You reach into your inventory to take out the flower and place it, but you can't find it!";
+ mes "Did you lose it somewhere along the way? If you can't find it, go talk to Orum again.";
goto L_Close;
L_PlacedThirdFlower:
- mes "You see the place where you put the third of Orum's magical flowers.";
- mes "You can feel the magic power around the place, waiting to be unleashed.";
+ mes "You placed the third of Orum's magical flowers on this spot.";
+ mes "You can feel the magical power around the place, waiting to be unleashed.";
goto L_Close;
L_PlacedFifthFlower:
- mes "You remember this place. Here you put the third of Orum's magical flowers.";
- mes "But after the pentagram was finished and the summoning happened, everything is back to normal with this spot.";
+ mes "You remember this place. You placed the third of Orum's magical flowers here.";
+ mes "However, now that the summoning spell has been cast, everything is back to normal here.";
goto L_Close;
L_Close: