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diff --git a/world/map/npc/002-2/kps.txt b/world/map/npc/002-2/kps.txt
index 558166ec..73b40466 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/002-2/kps.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/002-2/kps.txt
@@ -25,23 +25,25 @@
L_Default:
mes "[KPS Manager]";
- mes "\"Kylian staying at the Inn bought this shop recently.\"";
- mes "\"I'm waiting for him to open the shop.\"";
+ mes "\"A rich salesman named Kylian bought this shop recently.\"";
+ mes "\"I'm waiting for him to give the go-ahead on opening it up, but I haven't heard from him in a while.\"";
next;
- mes "\"I wonder if he needs any help?\"";
+ mes "\"I wonder if he needs any help...\"";
+ next;
+ mes "\"If you could go over and check on him in the inn while I tend to the store, I'd really appreciate it.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_OfferJob:
mes "[KPS Manager]";
- mes "\"Hello and what how can I help you today?\"";
+ mes "\"Hello! How can I help you today?\"";
menu
- "My name is " + strcharinfo(0), L_MyName,
+ "My name is " + strcharinfo(0) + ".", L_MyName,
"Nothing.", L_Close;
L_MyName:
set @state, 11;
callfunc "SetKylianQuest";
- mes "\"Ahhh, Kylian said you would be dropping by.\"";
+ mes "\"Ah. Kylian said you would be dropping by.\"";
next;
mes "\"I assume you are looking for some work?\"";
menu
@@ -84,10 +86,10 @@ L_RandJob:
goto L_JobInfo;
L_JobInfo:
- mes "\"We have a delivery for:* " + $@random_quests$[@rand_quest] + "\"";
+ mes "\"We have a delivery for ##B" + $@random_quests$[@rand_quest] + "##b.\"";
menu
- "Take It.", L_StartRun,
- "Anything Else?", L_RandJob,
+ "I'll take it.", L_StartRun,
+ "Anything else?", L_RandJob,
"I need a break.", L_Close;
L_StartRun:
@@ -99,7 +101,7 @@ L_StartRun:
goto L_Close;
L_RunStarted:
- mes "Deliver this package to:* " + $@random_quests$[@run] + "\"";
+ mes "Deliver this package to ##B" + $@random_quests$[@run] + "##b.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_RunComplete:
@@ -118,7 +120,7 @@ L_SeeKylian:
goto L_Close;
L_Failed:
- mes "\"You need to be faster next time to earn a bonus.\"";
+ mes "\"If you're faster next time, you can earn a bonus.\"";
next;
goto L_RunAgain;
@@ -131,7 +133,7 @@ L_KylianReward:
mes "[" + $@delivery_money + " money]";
mes "[" + ($@delivery_exp_mod * BaseLevel) + " experience points]";
next;
- mes "\"I have a message Kylian wants me to send you over right away.\"";
+ mes "\"I've got news for you! Kylian wants me to send you over right away.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_RunAgain:
@@ -141,12 +143,13 @@ L_RunAgain:
mes "[" + $@delivery_money + " money]";
mes "[" + ($@delivery_exp_mod * BaseLevel) + " experience points]";
next;
- mes "\"Good job, keep up the nice work and I'm sure the bonus will give you a bonus.\"";
+ mes "\"Good job! Keep up the nice work, and I'm sure the boss will give you a bonus.\"";
next;
goto L_StartJobAgain;
L_NoPackages:
- mes "\"Come back tomorrow, maybe we will have some more work.\"";
+ mes "\"Sorry, but we don't have any more jobs open right now.\"";
+ mes "\"Come back tomorrow; maybe we will have some more work then.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_Close: