Fix english in advanced pirate raid strings

1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions

diff --git a/npc/016-8/main.txt b/npc/016-8/main.txt
index e702331dc..afcd90bcd 100644
--- a/npc/016-8/main.txt
+++ b/npc/016-8/main.txt
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 OnEvent:
     // TODO: Make this an instance?
     warp "016-8", 31, 33;
-    dispbottom l("##1The ship is under a pirate's raid! ##BKill both ship captains before they conclude the loot!");
+    dispbottom l("##1The ship is under a pirate raid! ##BKill both ship captains before they conclude the looting!");
     // How much time you have depend on how many rebirths you have
     .@time = (90 - (REBIRTH*5)) * 1000;
     addtimercount "#MarineShip::OnEvent", .@time+1000;
@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@ OnEvent:
 OnDefeat:
     warp "000-0-0", 47, 42;
     // TODO: Warp you to a deserted island? (alone or with the crew duplicates?)
-    dispbottom l("The ship was fully plundered and you were thrown in the sea.");
-    dispbottom l("You now must wait for a passing ship to rescue you and bring you to your original destination.");
+    dispbottom l("The ship was fully plundered and you were thrown into the sea.");
+    dispbottom l("You must now wait for a passing ship to rescue you.");
     // Maybe warp back to Candor instead?
     addtimer 90000, "#MarineShipAttack2::OnResumeTravel";
     addtimercount "#MarineShip::OnEvent", 120000;