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authorNick Ashley <nick@shley.us>2015-04-24 10:56:39 -0400
committerNick Ashley <nick@shley.us>2015-04-24 10:59:29 -0400
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Better dialog for Aisha
-rw-r--r--world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt24
1 files changed, 12 insertions, 12 deletions
diff --git a/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt b/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt
index 6749f0e3..5ad738a9 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/001-1/children.txt
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
L_1:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"Maggots are soo slimey!\"";
+ mes "\"Maggots are so slimey!\" %%^";
goto L_Close;
L_2:
@@ -26,12 +26,12 @@ L_2:
L_3:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"There are so many monsters; I hate scorpions!\"";
+ mes "\"There are so many monsters! I hate scorpions!\" %%3";
goto L_Close;
L_4:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"When I grow up, I want to be strong enough to kill a scorpion!\"";
+ mes "\"When I grow up, I want to be strong enough to kill a scorpion!\" %%=";
goto L_Close;
L_5:
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ L_5:
L_6:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"Have you tried to eat a roasted maggot? They are sooo yummy! And you feel much healthier afterwards, too!\"";
+ mes "\"Have you tried to eat a roasted maggot? They're sooo yummy! Mommy says they're healthy too!\" %%8";
goto L_Close;
L_7:
@@ -51,23 +51,23 @@ L_7:
L_8:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"That volcano was sooo scary! The earth was shaking and everything was breaking down... but now they have rebuilt everything.\"";
+ mes "\"That earthquake was sooo scary! The earth was shaking and everything was breaking down... but now they've rebuilt everything.\"";
goto L_Close;
L_9:
- mes "\"I know a very bad word. But I must not say it, because monsters will come and get me if I do!\"";
+ mes "\"I know a very bad word. But I can't say it because monsters will come and get me if I do!\"";
next;
menu
"A bad word?", L_tell,
- "Oh, you better keep it for yourself then.", L_Close;
+ "Oh. You better keep it to yourself then.", L_Close;
L_tell:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "\"Yes, I heard my mother say it once. And she made me promise her to never say it. Never.\"";
+ mes "\"I heard my mother say it once, and she made me promise her to never say it. ##BNever##b!\"";
next;
menu
"If I promise to never tell anyone, can you tell me the word?", L_keepword,
- "I understand, you do not need to tell me...", L_giveword,
+ "I understand. You don't need to tell me...", L_giveword,
"Goodbye!", L_Close;
L_keepword:
@@ -77,13 +77,13 @@ L_keepword:
L_giveword:
mes "[Aisha]";
- mes "Aisha looks around as she hushes you to silence. After a few seconds, she whispers to you.";
- mes "\"I like you! So I will tell you the bad word. But you can't tell anyone else about it! The bad word is '" + getspellinvocation("aggravate") + "'.\"";
+ mes "Aisha looks around as she leans in and hushes you to silence. After a few seconds, she whispers to you:";
+ mes "\"I like you, so I'll tell you the bad word. But you can't tell anyone else about it! The bad word is '" + getspellinvocation("aggravate") + ".'\"";
next;
mes "[Aisha]";
mes "Terrified, she looks around once more.";
- mes "\"But you mustn't tell anyone!\"";
+ mes "\"But you can't tell anyone!\" %%>";
goto L_Close;
L_Close: