From 5fb61b03b577161e35df12fde4afc381a0edd0db Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: TheKandiman Date: Wed, 26 Jan 2011 23:26:57 -0500 Subject: Spelling and grammar updates in NPC dialog for maps 018 to 032 --- npc/031-1_NivalisPort/angelaOutside.txt | 20 ++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/031-1_NivalisPort/angelaOutside.txt') diff --git a/npc/031-1_NivalisPort/angelaOutside.txt b/npc/031-1_NivalisPort/angelaOutside.txt index b42c5318..3812b918 100644 --- a/npc/031-1_NivalisPort/angelaOutside.txt +++ b/npc/031-1_NivalisPort/angelaOutside.txt @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ if (@rescue_Cindy == 1) goto L_Please_Help; mes "[Angela]"; - mes "\"Please, I need help! My little daugther!\""; + mes "\"Please, I need help! My little daughter!\""; next; mes "\"It's terrible, oh my dear child!\""; next; @@ -31,13 +31,13 @@ L_Whining: mes "[Angela]"; - mes "\"My poor little daugther, please! Oh no, oh no...\""; + mes "\"My poor little daughter, please! Oh no, oh no...\""; next; mes "\"We need to do something! My poor little Cindy! My cute little girl!\""; next; mes "\"It's so terrible, how could that happen? Please, I need help, it's so terrible.\""; next; - mes "\"That awful filthy monsters - terrible!\""; + mes "\"Those awful filthy monsters - terrible!\""; next; mes "\"Oh Cindy, my little Cindy - oh no...\""; next; @@ -45,11 +45,11 @@ L_Whining: next; mes "\"It's so terrible, my poor cute little Cindy...\""; next; - mes "\"Oh, when I think, what might happen to her right now!\""; + mes "\"Oh, when I think what might happen to her right now!\""; next; mes "\"She is crying and sobbing.\""; next; - mes "\"It seems, she is too upset to tell you anything helpful. If she would just calm down and concentrate a bit...\""; + mes "\"It seems she is too upset to tell you anything helpful. If she would just calm down and concentrate a bit...\""; close; L_Menu_Potion: @@ -66,11 +66,11 @@ L_Calm_Down: mes "[Angela]"; mes "\"Thank you, this was helpful.\""; next; - mes "\"My daughter Cindy and me were on our way to Santa, to bring him some presents. Many people here in Nivalis are helping Santa with his business.\""; + mes "\"My daughter Cindy and I were on our way to Santa, to bring him some presents. Many people here in Nivalis are helping Santa with his business.\""; next; - mes "\"When we passed the entrance of this cave, a pack of Yetis came out there. It's disturbing, usually, they are very shy.\""; + mes "\"When we passed the entrance of this cave, a pack of Yetis came out of there. It's disturbing, because usually they are very shy.\""; next; - mes "\"We tried to run away, but there were to many of them. They took my poor little Cindy and all the presents with them.\""; + mes "\"We tried to run away, but there were too many of them. They took my poor little Cindy and all the presents with them.\""; next; mes "\"Oh my poor little girl. I'm so worried - what might they do with her? Oh no!\""; next; @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ L_Please_Help: L_Please_Visit: mes "[Angela]"; - mes "\"Thank you so much for rescueing my beloved Cindy. Please come to visit us in our house at the beach.\""; + mes "\"Thank you so much for rescuing my beloved Cindy. Please come to visit us in our house at the beach.\""; next; mes "\"My husband is an adventurer like you, and I want to give you something he got on his travels to show my gratitude.\""; close; @@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ L_Please_Visit_Again: mes "[Angela]"; mes "\"Hello! You are welcome to visit us in our house at the beach everytime. Cindy loves to see you!\""; next; - mes "\"If you have found any present boxes, the Yetis took away, please bring them to our house. Usually, the Yetis are very shy... their behavior is a bit odd.\""; + mes "\"If you have found any present boxes the Yetis took away, please bring them to our house. Usually, the Yetis are very shy... their behavior is a bit odd.\""; close; S_Update_Mask: -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2