From 588cb548bb017b411a35b3a05376ca7131f24495 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: TheKandiman <thekandiman@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 25 Jan 2011 01:03:14 -0500
Subject: Spelling and grammar corrections in Tulim and Hurn NPCs...dialog
 only.

---
 npc/007-1_Woodland/voltain.txt | 22 +++++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

(limited to 'npc/007-1_Woodland/voltain.txt')

diff --git a/npc/007-1_Woodland/voltain.txt b/npc/007-1_Woodland/voltain.txt
index f66b107f..ff13d70b 100644
--- a/npc/007-1_Woodland/voltain.txt
+++ b/npc/007-1_Woodland/voltain.txt
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ next;
 
 menu
     "I've got the stingers!", -,
-    "I'll go search for the them.", L_CLOSE;
+    "I'll go search for them.", L_CLOSE;
 
 mes "[Voltain]";
     if (countitem("BlackScorpionStinger") < @BLACK_SC_ST_NEEDED) goto L_NOT_ENOUGH;
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ mes "[Voltain]";
 
 state4:
 mes "[Voltain]";
-mes "\"I need to thicken a veno.. Oh a potion actually. I want to try mauve herbs for that, so can you bring me " + @HERBS_NEEDED + ", please?\"";
+mes "\"I need to thicken a veno.. Oh, a potion actually. I want to try mauve herbs for that, so can you bring me " + @HERBS_NEEDED + ", please?\"";
 next;
 
 menu
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ mes "[Voltain]";
 
 state5:
 mes "[Voltain]";
-mes  "\"Hello I am looking for " + @RAWLOG_NEEDED + " raw logs, maybe you could help me, getting some? I want to try if i can build a mouboo trap.. Uhm actually no! I want to build a device to destroy these traps. So can you help me?\"";
+mes  "\"Hello I am looking for " + @RAWLOG_NEEDED + " raw logs, maybe you could help me getting some? I want to try to build a mouboo trap.. Uhm actually no! I want to build a device to destroy these traps. So can you help me?\"";
 next;
 
 menu
@@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ mes "[Voltain]";
     
 state7:
 mes "[Voltain]";
-mes  "\"I need to thicken a veno.. Oh a potion actually. Cobalt herbs might be good for that, so can you bring me " + @HERBS_NEEDED + ", please?\"";
+mes  "\"I need to thicken a veno.. Oh, a potion actually. Cobalt herbs might be good for that, so can you bring me " + @HERBS_NEEDED + ", please?\"";
 next;
 
 menu
@@ -249,12 +249,12 @@ mes "[Voltain]";
     getexp @SNAKETONGUE_REWARD_XP, 0;
     set zeny, zeny + @SNAKETONGUE_REWARD_GOLD;    
     set $state, 9;
-    mes "\"Excellent, now I can extract the venom to- uhm, nevermind, thanks for your help.\"";
+    mes "\"Excellent, now I can extract the venom to- uhm, nevermind. Thanks for your help.\"";
     close;
     
 state9:
 mes "[Voltain]";
-mes  "\"I need to thicken a veno.. Oh a potion actually. I want to try alizarin herbs for that, so can you bring me " + @HERBS_NEEDED + ", please?\"";
+mes  "\"I need to thicken a veno.. Oh, a potion actually. I want to try alizarin herbs for that, so can you bring me " + @HERBS_NEEDED + ", please?\"";
 next;
 
 menu
@@ -274,12 +274,12 @@ state10:
 mes "[Voltain]";
 mes   "\"Oh I am hungry. Maybe I can eat some steaks. Could you bring me a steak,  please?\"";
 next;
-mes   "\"Oh, I just wonder, if i can inject some ven... Forget about that! Bring me " + @STEAK_NEEDED + "steaks!\"";
+mes   "\"Oh, I just wonder if i can inject some ven... Forget about that! Bring me " + @STEAK_NEEDED + "steaks!\"";
 next;
 
 menu
     "Here you go.", -,
-    "Help yourself! In the Hurnscald Inn you get some meal for sure!", L_CLOSE;
+    "Help yourself! In the Hurnscald Inn you can get some meals for sure!", L_CLOSE;
 
 mes "[Voltain]";
     if (countitem("Steak") < @STEAK_NEEDED) goto L_NOT_ENOUGH;
@@ -306,12 +306,12 @@ mes "[Voltain]";
     getexp @ARROW_REWARD_XP, 0;
     set zeny, zeny + @ARROW_REWARD_GOLD;    
     set $state, 12;
-    mes "\"Thanks a lot. Now I feel more secure here in outdoors.\"";
+    mes "\"Thanks a lot. Now I feel more secure here in the outdoors.\"";
     close;
 
 state12:
 mes "[Voltain]";
-mes  "\"I need to thicken a veno.. Oh a potion actually. I want to try gamboge herbs for that, so can you bring me " + @HERBS_NEEDED + ", please?\"";
+mes  "\"I need to thicken a veno.. Oh, a potion actually. I want to try gamboge herbs for that, so can you bring me " + @HERBS_NEEDED + ", please?\"";
 next;
 
 menu
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@ mes "[Voltain]";
 
 L_NOHELP:
 mes "\"If you don't want to help me, then away with you. Bothering me won't help me get my work done.\"";
-mes "Voltain than mumbles something under his breath that you cannot quite make out"; 
+mes "Voltain then mumbles something under his breath that you cannot quite make out"; 
 mes "\"... These damn kids. \"";
 close;
 
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