From 4eed1c99a669e5a8dc331ba34e8bbe8867be21b4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sini Ruohomaa <sini.ruohomaa@iki.fi>
Date: Mon, 23 Aug 2010 23:31:01 +0300
Subject: Language checks and standardization++.

---
 npc/002-3_Desert_mines/mine_triggertwo.txt | 18 +++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

(limited to 'npc/002-3_Desert_mines/mine_triggertwo.txt')

diff --git a/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/mine_triggertwo.txt b/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/mine_triggertwo.txt
index ff1ff654..21e1d965 100644
--- a/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/mine_triggertwo.txt
+++ b/npc/002-3_Desert_mines/mine_triggertwo.txt
@@ -6,14 +6,14 @@
 	if (TMW_Quest == 35) goto L_Trigger_Wrong_2;
 	if (TMW_Quest == 34) goto L_Trigger_Wrong_2; 
 
-	mes "A large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+	mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
 	close;
 
 L_Trigger_Wrong_2:
-	mes "A large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+	mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
 	menu
-		"Put key in, turn right.", L_Right_Wrong_2,
-		"Put key in, turn left.", L_Left_Wrong_2,
+		"Put the key in, turn right.", L_Right_Wrong_2,
+		"Put the key in, turn left.", L_Left_Wrong_2,
 		"Do nothing.", L_Nothing_2;
 	close;
 
@@ -24,14 +24,14 @@ L_Right_Wrong_2:
 
 L_Left_Wrong_2:
 	set TMW_Quest, 34;
-	mes "You turn the key left";
+	mes "You turn the key left.";
 	close;
 
 L_Trigger_2:
-	mes "A large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
+	mes "There is a large button on the ground.  A key hole appears on the button.";
 	menu
-		"Put key in, turn right.", L_Right_2,
-		"Put key in, turn left.", L_Left_2,
+		"Put the key in, turn right.", L_Right_2,
+		"Put the key in, turn left.", L_Left_2,
 		"Do nothing.", L_Nothing_2;
 	close;
 
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ L_Right_2:
 L_Left_2:
 	set TMW_Quest, 37;
 	set Open_Underground_Palace_Barrier, 1;
-	mes "You turn the key left, the sound of clicking is heard throughout the mine.  A loud thump is heard.";
+	mes "You turn the key left. A clicking sound echoes throughout the mine, followed by a loud thump.";
 	close;
 
 L_Nothing_2:
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