From 99385b26263c27020d8ce526afaa1811e4eceaa1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jesusaves <cpntb1@ymail.com>
Date: Fri, 8 Oct 2021 20:48:01 +0000
Subject: NPC Improvements

---
 npc/014-2/mouboo.txt | 24 ++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

(limited to 'npc/014-2')

diff --git a/npc/014-2/mouboo.txt b/npc/014-2/mouboo.txt
index 2ed7f1b83..303310551 100644
--- a/npc/014-2/mouboo.txt
+++ b/npc/014-2/mouboo.txt
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
 L_Begin:
     .@q=getq(HurnscaldQuest_InjuriedMouboo);
     .@q2=getq2(HurnscaldQuest_InjuriedMouboo);
-    mesn l("Injuried Mouboo");
+    mesn l("Injured Mouboo");
     mesq l("Booo....");
     mesc l("The Mouboo seems to be lying in pain.");
     next;
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ L_Begin:
     switch (@menu) {
         case 3:
             mesc l("The Mouboo is lying down on the grass.");
-            mesc l("There doesn't seems to be any physical wound.");
+            mesc l("There doesn't seem to be any physical wound.");
             mesc l("A closer inspection suggests this mouboo has been... CURSED.");
             if (.@q == 0)
                 setq HurnscaldQuest_InjuriedMouboo, 1, 100;
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ L_Begin:
 
             // If ID is invalid, there's not enough items, it is bound = Cannot bury
             if (.@id < 1) {
-                mesc l("You are not using a weapon for a merciful (?) last blow.");
+                mesc l("You are not using a weapon for a merciful last blow.");
                 close;
             }
 
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ L_Begin:
             next;
             if (askyesno() == ASK_YES) {
                 .@atk=getiteminfo(.@id, ITEMINFO_ATK);
-                mesn l("Injuried Mouboo");
+                mesn l("Injured Mouboo");
                 if (.@q2 < 20)
                     mesq l("Re-ref... Reflect.");
                 else
@@ -187,19 +187,19 @@ L_Healed:
         mesc l("Give a @@ to the Mouboo?", getitemlink(Coffee));
         next;
         if (askyesno() == ASK_YES) {
-            mesn l("Injuried Mouboo");
-            mesc l("*scream*");
+            mesn l("Injured Mouboo");
+            mesc l("*screams*");
             mes "";
-            mesc l("The Mouboo doesn't wants to drink the Coffee. Try to force him to drink anyway?");
+            mesc l("The Mouboo doesn't want to drink the Coffee. Try to force it to drink anyway?");
             next;
             if (askyesno() == ASK_YES) {
                 delitem Coffee, 1;
-                mesc l("There's no change in the Mouboo condition.");
+                mesc l("There's no change in the condition of the poor Mouboo.");
                 next;
-                mesc l("Maybe Hurnscald alchemist, Wyara, could explain why.");
+                mesc l("Maybe the Hurnscald alchemist, Wyara, could explain why.");
             } else {
-                mesc l("Coffee is good, why the Mouboo don't want it?");
-                mesc l("Maybe someone in Hurnscald can help me?");
+                mesc l("Coffee is good, why does the Mouboo refuse to drink it?");
+                mesc l("Maybe someone in Hurnscald can help me.");
             }
         }
     }
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ L_Uncursed:
     close;
 
 L_Killed:
-    mesc l("Did this Mouboo just blinked? No, I made sure to kill it. Must have been my imagination.");
+    mesc l("Did this Mouboo just blink? No, I made sure it was truly dead. Must have been my imagination.");
     close;
 
 OnInit:
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