From 2ce22a8fa0414159d7e8517cc7fa00f2f809bcda Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: NetSysFire <16-NetSysFire@users.noreply.git.themanaworld.org>
Date: Sun, 19 Feb 2023 14:31:58 +0000
Subject: Batch of typo fixes and rewording. Also minor tweaks to Helena
 rewards and Pylon production.

---
 npc/007-1/pylon.txt | 20 +++++++++-----------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

(limited to 'npc/007-1/pylon.txt')

diff --git a/npc/007-1/pylon.txt b/npc/007-1/pylon.txt
index a326955c2..20f8023a4 100644
--- a/npc/007-1/pylon.txt
+++ b/npc/007-1/pylon.txt
@@ -30,15 +30,15 @@ L_Menu:
     mesn strcharinfo(0);
     // We could add a drag zone, and allow players to drag their gems, but... Meh.
     select
-        l("Hum, how many gem powders can I get from one gem?"),
+        l("How many gem powders can I get from one gem?"),
         rif(countitem(Diamond) >= 1 && Zeny >= 100, l("Yeah sure, take my Diamond!")),
         rif(countitem(Ruby) >= 1 && Zeny >= 100, l("Yeah sure, take my Ruby!")),
         rif(countitem(Emerald) >= 1 && Zeny >= 100, l("Yeah sure, take my Emerald!")),
         rif(countitem(Sapphire) >= 1 && Zeny >= 100, l("Yeah sure, take my Sapphire!")),
         rif(countitem(Topaz) >= 1 && Zeny >= 100, l("Yeah sure, take my Topaz!")),
         rif(countitem(Amethyst) >= 1 && Zeny >= 100, l("Yeah sure, take my Amethyst!")),
-        rif(countitem(IronOre) >= 1 && Zeny >= 100, l("And what's about Iron Ore?")),
-        rif(countitem(SunnyCrystal) >= 1 && Zeny >= 1000, l("And what's about Sunny Crystal?")),
+        rif(countitem(IronOre) >= 1 && Zeny >= 100, l("And what about Iron Ore?")),
+        rif(countitem(SunnyCrystal) >= 1 && Zeny >= 1000, l("And what about Sunny Crystals?")),
         l("No, thanks, I will keep my gems.");
 
     mes "";
@@ -65,9 +65,7 @@ L_Question:
     mesn;
     mesq lg("That depends on your luck!");
     next;
-    mesq l("With one gem you can expect to get 1 to 3 powders!");
-    next;
-    mesc l("We must blame Saulc!");
+    mesq l("With one gem you can expect to get 2 to 4 powders!");
     next;
     mesq lg("By the way would you like to transform your gem?");
     next;
@@ -87,7 +85,7 @@ L_Ore:
 
 L_MenuOre:
     menu
-        rif(countitem(IronOre) >= 1 && Zeny >= 100, l("Make me an Iron Powder.")), L_OreOk,
+        rif(countitem(IronOre) >= 1 && Zeny >= 100, l("Make me some Iron Powder.")), L_OreOk,
         l("Nah, thank you."), L_Close;
 
 L_OreOk:
@@ -103,7 +101,7 @@ L_OreOk:
         getitem SulfurPowder, 1;
     mes "";
     mesn;
-    mesq l("Here you go, I tried my best! Do you want another?");
+    mesq l("Here you go, I tried my best! Do you want more?");
     next;
     goto L_MenuOre;
 
@@ -115,7 +113,7 @@ L_Powder:
     .@pw=DiamondPowder+@menu-2;
 
     // Amount
-    .@am=rand2(1,3);
+    .@am=rand2(2,4);
     inventoryplace .@pw, .@am;
 
     // Del items and EXP
@@ -132,13 +130,13 @@ L_Powder:
     mesn;
     mesq l("Here is your powder! I hope it will be useful.");
     next;
-    mesq l("Would you like to transform one more?");
+    mesq l("Would you like to transform some more?");
     next;
     goto L_Menu;
 
 
 L_Savior:
-	// FIXME This is a dirt hack. TODO There should be no such checks
+	// FIXME This is a dirty hack. TODO There should be no such checks
 	if (checkbound(SunnyCrystal)) {
 		mesn;
 		mesc l("Not every @@ with you belongs to you.", getitemlink(SunnyCrystal)), 1;
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