From 575e1c9e5562b263d5032c9151d4d084671fa8b2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jesusaves Date: Wed, 5 Jun 2019 17:06:19 -0300 Subject: Shorten a bit this intro on Nard, it is boring --- npc/002-3/nard.txt | 12 +++--------- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/002-3') diff --git a/npc/002-3/nard.txt b/npc/002-3/nard.txt index d57961778..fedaf75fb 100644 --- a/npc/002-3/nard.txt +++ b/npc/002-3/nard.txt @@ -24,9 +24,6 @@ L_Checker: next; mesq lg("I am pleased to see that you have woken up and are active. Elmo came here to tell me this good news!"); next; - mesn; - mesq l("Hehehe, he is a bit nervous, please forgive him, it is not everyday we find someone on the sea!"); - next; mesq l("So, how do you feel? I see that Juliet did a marvellous job! You look like you're in good health now."); next; @@ -42,16 +39,13 @@ L_Checker: next; mesq l("We have made a stop at a little island, before making it on to the port of Tulimshar."); next; - mesq l("It would be good for you to do some exercise, the ship isn't big enough for that."); - next; - mesq l("I know that you are just starting to feel better, but I'd like you to explore the island we're currently at."); + mes l("I know that you are just starting to feel better, but I'd like you to explore the island we're currently at."); + mes l("It would be good for you to do some exercise, and the ship isn't big enough for that."); next; break; case 2: mesn; - mesq l("You have an awful case of amnesia."); - next; - mesq l("She is the nurse and shipkeeper of this ship."); + mesq l("You have an awful case of amnesia. She is the nurse and shipkeeper of this ship."); next; mesq lg("But most important, she is the one who took care of you when you were unconscious."); next; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50