From 5ed3c07d5c566487fab4814ee570089b8fea9ea6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Hal9000 Date: Sat, 5 Jan 2013 11:17:57 +0100 Subject: Clean up and improve the Two Liutenants quest. --- npc/000-2-0/julia.txt | 29 +++++++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/000-2-0/julia.txt') diff --git a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt index abe25d6fe..d7afb810e 100644 --- a/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt +++ b/npc/000-2-0/julia.txt @@ -20,9 +20,9 @@ // 11 Quest accepted. // 12 Ingredients collected, ready to poison Julia. // 13 Julia poisoned. -// 14 Quest complete. -// 15 PoisonDish Return. -// 16 Quest aborted. Julia wins. +// 14 Quest complete. Chef Gago wins. +// 15 Quest complete. Julia wins (poison dish returned). +// 16 Quest complete. Julia wins. // Nard: // 20 Introduction of the boxes and Nard. This is displayed when the player never spoke to Nard or his box. // 21 Nard spoke and gave access to the outdoor of the ship. @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ l_Menu: menu - rif(@q3 == 3, l("I heard rumors about some old hostilities between you and Gado. Are they true?")), l_Rumors, + rif(@q3 == 3, l("I have heard rumors about some old hostilities between you and Gado. Are they truthful?")), l_Rumors, rif(@q2 == 2 && countitem("PoisonedDish", 1), l("Well... No wait, I have something for you but you shouldn't eat it... I'm taking it back to the kitchen.")), l_Regret, rif(@q2 == 2 && countitem("PoisonedDish", 1), l("I have brought you a tasty present for your delicate mouth.")), l_PoisonJulia, lg("I made a mistake, I would like to change my language."), l_ChooseLang, @@ -233,28 +233,33 @@ l_Regret: l_Rumors: mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("You shouldn't believe all of the stories drunk sailors tell you."); + mesq l("You shouldn't believe all stories sailors tell when they are drunk."); next; menu - l("Let's say the person who told me about that is well respected on this ship and never drunk."), -; + l("Let's say that who told me that was a respectable person and not even drunk."), -; mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("Hahaha! All sailors aboard this ship are always drunk... Well... Except... Wait, what?! Nard told you?!"); + mesq l("Ahahah. All sailors here are always drunk, well... Except... What?! Nard told you that?!"); next; - mesq l("Doesn't he like the way I'm taking care of his ship? Everything is clean and tidy with me, rightful lieutenant of La Johanne."); + mesq l("Doesn't he appreciate how I'm taking care of his ship? Everything is finally clean and tidy with me as the liutenant of La Johanne."); next; - mesq l("I give tasks to every single sailor, all day long. That should make him happy!"); + mesq l("I give tasks to every sailor all day long to make him happy!"); next; menu - l("Well... I don't think it is the best way to rule a ship. Think about it."), l_Quit, - l("Actually, everything seems to work perfectly under your guidance. Nard has done the right choice."), -; + l("Uhm I don't think it is the best way to rule a ship. See you..."), l_Quit, + l("Actually everything seems in perfect order under your guidance. Nard has done the right choice."), -; + setq ShipQuests_ChefGado, 6; mes ""; mesn; - mesq l("I'm glad you're on my side! See you around."); + mesq l("I'm glad you are on my side."); + next; + mesq l("Take this money as a reward for your nice words."); + set zeny, zeny + 40; + message strcharinfo(0), l("You receive 40 GP!"); close; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2