From 9adc8abaa6ce3d5535b419fc2588a54d9755fe82 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: eaac Date: Thu, 13 Apr 2006 01:35:50 +0000 Subject: - Added up the locations but temporal names of Poring track npcs. Will be worked on over time. [erKURITA] - Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos on most of the npc\guides. Visual update to the guards, for short. [erKURITA] - Added some info to the docs.[erKURITA] - Added "case" npcs of lighthalzen, they're the first on npc/cities/? Mostly guards. [erKURITA] git-svn-id: https://rathena.svn.sourceforge.net/svnroot/rathena/trunk@6025 54d463be-8e91-2dee-dedb-b68131a5f0ec --- npc/guides/guides_pay.txt | 215 +++++++++++++++------------------------------- 1 file changed, 67 insertions(+), 148 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/guides/guides_pay.txt') diff --git a/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt b/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt index 7a2141734..053b93cfd 100644 --- a/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt +++ b/npc/guides/guides_pay.txt @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ //===== By: ================================================== //= kobra_k88 //===== Current Version: ===================================== -//= 1.3a +//= 1.4 //===== Compatible With: ===================================== //= eAthena 0.5.2 + //===== Description: ========================================= @@ -15,28 +15,22 @@ //= 1.3 Updated the guide according to how it is on iRO, thanks [MasterOfMuppets] //= to Muad_Dib //= 1.3a Fixed some problems with duplicated text, thanks to muad_dib [MasterOfMuppets] +//= 1.4 Fitted the many lines into 1 or 2, and corrected some typos [erKURITA] //============================================================ payon.gat,162,67,4 script Guide 708,{ cutin "pay_soldier",2; mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Welcome to the"; - mes "mountain city of Payon."; - mes "if you're unfammiliar with this"; - mes "area, I can help you find what"; - mes "you're looking for around here."; + mes "Welcome to the mountain city of Payon."; + mes "If you're unfammiliar with this area, I can help you find what you're looking for around here."; L_MENU: next; menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END; L_CITY: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Please select"; - mes "a location from"; - mes "the following menu."; - mes "Would you like me"; - mes "to mark locations"; - mes "on your Mini-Map?"; + mes "Please select a location from the following menu."; + mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?"; next; menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO; L_NO: @@ -48,143 +42,103 @@ L_CONT: L_MENU_2: menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Pub",L_PUB,"Central Palace",L_PALACE,"The Empress",L_EMPRESS,"Palace Annex",L_ANNEX,"Royal Kitchen",L_KITCHEN,"Forge",L_FORGE,"Cancel",-; mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Pleas ask me to Remove"; - mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you"; - mes "no longer wish to have the"; - mes "location marks displayed"; - mes "on your Mini-Map."; + mes "Please ask me to remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map."; goto L_MENU; L_ARCHER: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The Archer Guild handles"; - mes "Job Changes to the Archer"; - mes "Class. You'll need to enter"; - mes "the Archer Village wich is"; - mes "to the northeast of Payon."; + mes "The Archer Guild handles Job Changes to the Archer Class."; + mes "You'll need to enter the Archer Village wich is to the northeast of Payon."; viewpoint 1,228,326,1,0xFF0000; next; goto L_WIPE; L_WEAPON: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The Weapon Shop"; - mes "can be found in the"; - mes "northwest corner of"; - mes "the city of Payon."; + mes "The Weapon Shop can be found in the northwest corner of the city of Payon."; viewpoint 1,139,158,2,0xFF00FF; next; goto L_WIPE; L_TOOL: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The Tool Shop"; - mes "is located near"; - mes "the northwest"; - mes "corner of Payon."; + mes "The Tool Shop is located near the northwest corner of Payon."; viewpoint 1,144,85,3,0xFF00FF; next; goto L_WIPE; L_PUB: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The Pub can be"; - mes "found in the northeast"; - mes "part of Payon. It's the"; - mes "best place to relax after"; - mes "a long day of hunting."; + mes "The Pub can be found in the northeast part of Payon."; + mes "It's the best place to relax after a long day of hunting."; viewpoint 1,220,117,4,0xFF00FF; next; goto L_WIPE; L_PALACE: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The Central Palace"; - mes "is located to the north"; - mes "within the city of Payon."; + mes "The Central Palace is located to the north within the city of Payon."; viewpoint 1,156,245,5,0x00FF00; next; goto L_WIPE; L_EMPRESS: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The Empress"; - mes "can be found to the"; - mes "northwest in Payon."; + mes "The Empress can be found to the northwest in Payon."; viewpoint 1,107,327,6,0x00FF00; next; goto L_WIPE; L_ANNEX: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The Palace Annex"; - mes "can be found in the"; - mes "western part of Payon."; + mes "The Palace Annex can be found in the western part of Payon."; viewpoint 1,127,204,7,0x00FF00; next; goto L_WIPE; L_KITCHEN: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The Royal Kitchen"; - mes "is located near the"; - mes "northern end of Payon."; + mes "The Royal Kitchen is located near the northern end of Payon."; viewpoint 1,155,327,8,0x00FF00; next; goto L_WIPE; L_FORGE: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The Forge is"; - mes "situaded near"; - mes "the center of Payon."; + mes "The Forge is situaded near the center of Payon."; viewpoint 1,142,172,9,0xFFFF00; next; goto L_WIPE; L_WIPE: - if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2; - viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000; - viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF; - viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF; - viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF; - viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00; - viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00; - viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00; - viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00; - viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00; + if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2; + viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000; + viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF; + viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF; + viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF; + viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00; + viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00; + viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00; + viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00; + viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00; goto L_MENU_2; L_REMOVE: - viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000; - viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF; - viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF; - viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF; - viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00; - viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00; - viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00; - viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00; - viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00; + viewpoint 2,228,326,1,0xFF0000; + viewpoint 2,139,158,2,0xFF00FF; + viewpoint 2,144,85,3,0xFF00FF; + viewpoint 2,220,117,4,0xFF00FF; + viewpoint 2,156,245,5,0x00FF00; + viewpoint 2,107,327,6,0x00FF00; + viewpoint 2,127,204,7,0x00FF00; + viewpoint 2,155,327,8,0x00FF00; + viewpoint 2,142,172,9,0xFFFF00; goto L_MENU; + L_NOTICE: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Advances in sorcery and"; - mes "technology have allowed"; - mes "us to update our information"; - mes "system, enabling up to mark"; - mes "locations on your Mini-Map"; - mes "for easier navigation."; + mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation."; next; mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Your Mini-Map is located"; - mes "in the upper right corner"; - mes "of the screen. If you can't"; - mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab"; - mes "keys or click the 'Map' button"; - mes "in your Basic Information Window."; + mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen."; + mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window."; next; mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "On your Mini-Map,"; - mes "click on the '+' and '-'"; - mes "symbols to zoom in and"; - mes "out of your Mini-Map. We"; - mes "hope you enjoy your travels"; - mes "here in the city of Payon."; + mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map."; + mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Payon."; goto L_MENU; L_END: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Be safe in"; - mes "your travels,"; - mes "brave adventurer."; + mes "Be safe in your travels, brave adventurer."; cutin "pay_soldier",255; close; } @@ -192,22 +146,15 @@ L_END: pay_arche.gat,85,30,2 script Guide 708,{ cutin "pay_soldier",2; mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Welcome to the"; - mes "mountain city of Payon."; - mes "if you're unfammiliar with this"; - mes "area, I can help you find what"; - mes "you're looking for around here."; + mes "Welcome to the mountain city of Payon."; + mes "If you're unfammiliar with this area, I can help you find what you're looking for around here."; L_MENU: next; menu "City Guide",L_CITY,"Remove Marks from Mini-Map",L_REMOVE,"Notice",L_NOTICE,"Cancel",L_END; L_CITY: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Please select"; - mes "a location from"; - mes "the following menu."; - mes "Would you like me"; - mes "to mark locations"; - mes "on your Mini-Map?"; + mes "Please select a location from the following menu."; + mes "Would you like me to mark locations on your Mini-Map?"; next; menu "Yes.",L_YES,"No.",L_NO; L_NO: @@ -217,83 +164,55 @@ L_YES: set @COMPASS_CHECK,1; L_CONT: L_MENU_2: - menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Payon Dungeon",L_DUNGEON,"Cancel",-; + menu "^FF0000Archer Guild^000000",L_ARCHER,"Weapon Shop",L_WEAPON,"Tool Shop",L_TOOL,"Pub",L_PUB,"Central Palace",L_PALACE,"The Empress",L_EMPRESS,"Palace Annex",L_ANNEX,"Royal Kitchen",L_KITCHEN,"Forge",L_FORGE,"Cancel",-; mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Pleas ask me to Remove"; - mes "Marks from Mini-Map if you"; - mes "no longer wish to have the"; - mes "location marks displayed"; - mes "on your Mini-Map."; + mes "Please ask me to remove marks from Mini-Map if you no longer wish to have the location marks displayed on your Mini-Map."; goto L_MENU; L_ARCHER: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The Archer Guild,"; - mes "found northeast in"; - mes "the Archer Village,"; - mes "handles Job Changes"; - mes "to the Archer Class."; + mes "The Archer Guild, found northeast in the Archer Village, handles Job Changes to the Archer Class."; viewpoint 1,144,164,1,0xFF0000; next; goto L_WIPE; L_TOOL: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The Tool Shop"; - mes "is located near"; - mes "the northwest"; - mes "corner of Payon."; + mes "The Tool Shop is located near the northwest corner of Payon."; viewpoint 1,71,156,2,0xFF00FF; next; goto L_WIPE; L_DUNGEON: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "The entrance to"; - mes "the Payon Dungeon"; - mes "is located at the west"; - mes "end of the village."; + mes "The entrance to the Payon Dungeon is located at the west end of the village."; viewpoint 1,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF; next; goto L_WIPE; L_WIPE: - if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2; - viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000; - viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF; - viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF; + if(@COMPASS_CHECK == 1)goto L_MENU_2; + viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000; + viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF; + viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF; goto L_MENU_2; L_REMOVE: - viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000; - viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF; - viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF; + viewpoint 2,144,164,1,0xFF0000; + viewpoint 2,71,156,2,0xFF00FF; + viewpoint 2,34,132,3,0xFFFFFF; goto L_MENU; + L_NOTICE: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Advances in sorcery and"; - mes "technology have allowed"; - mes "us to update our information"; - mes "system, enabling up to mark"; - mes "locations on your Mini-Map"; - mes "for easier navigation."; + mes "Advances in sorcery and technology have allowed us to update our information system, enabling up to mark locations on your Mini-Map for easier navigation."; next; mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Your Mini-Map is located"; - mes "in the upper right corner"; - mes "of the screen. If you can't"; - mes "see it, press the Ctrl + Tab"; - mes "keys or click the 'Map' button"; - mes "in your Basic Information Window."; + mes "Your Mini-Map is located in the upper right corner of the screen."; + mes "If you can't see it, press the Ctrl + Tab keys or click the 'Map' button in your Basic Information Window."; next; mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "On your Mini-Map,"; - mes "click on the '+' and '-'"; - mes "symbols to zoom in and"; - mes "out of your Mini-Map. We"; - mes "hope you enjoy your travels"; - mes "here in the city of Payon."; + mes "On your Mini-Map, click on the '+' and '-' symbols to zoom in and out of your Mini-Map."; + mes "We hope you enjoy your travels here in the city of Payon."; goto L_MENU; L_END: mes "[Payon Guide]"; - mes "Be safe in"; - mes "your travels,"; - mes "brave adventurer."; + mes "Be safe in your travels, brave adventurer."; cutin "pay_soldier",255; close; } -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2