From f056ec60c63a52b32efd0cba0a84e2163413c736 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: The Kandiman Date: Mon, 30 Apr 2012 09:56:26 -0400 Subject: Spelling and grammar corrections for Blue Sage quest. --- world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt index d1666966..fb678af4 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt @@ -14,17 +14,17 @@ if (QUEST_BlueSage > 0) goto L_ShortHello; mes "[Elias]"; - mes "\"Welcome in the residence of Nikolai, member of the Sages of Kaizei.\""; + mes "\"Welcome to the residence of Nikolai, member of the Sages of Kaizei.\""; next; mes "\"Our house is famous for its extraordinary and well equipped library."; mes "Ahm, usually well equipped.\""; next; - mes "\"We had an accident with some magic experiment, that caused some slimes get out of control. They ate most of the books in the library.\""; + mes "\"We had an accident with some magic experiments, that caused some slimes to get out of control. They ate most of the books in the library.\""; mes "He sighs with a regretful look on his face."; next; mes "[Elias]"; mes "\"So, if you came because of the library, I'll have to disappoint you, because there isn't much left."; - mes "Though you look like a skilled adventurer. If you'd like to offer your help that'd be highly appreciated.\""; + mes "Though you look like a skilled adventurer. If you'd like to offer your help that'd be greatly appreciated.\""; next; mes "\"The library is on the third floor.\""; goto L_Close; @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ L_ShortHello: next; mes "Elias gets a bit excited now."; mes "[Elias]"; - mes "\"Do you think he may have had something to do with the accident? We're a very hospitable house, so I didn't see a reason to deny him the entrance. I mean, his mask might have been a bit unusual, but hey, there could've been many reasons why someone would wear a mask, don't you think so?\""; + mes "\"Do you think he may have had something to do with the accident? We're a very hospitable house, so I didn't see a reason to deny him the entrance. I mean, his mask might have been a bit unusual, but hey, there could've been many reasons why someone would wear a mask, don't you think?\""; set @investigate, @investigate + 1; callfunc "updateBlueSageInvestigate"; @@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ L_ShortHello: L_Worry: mes "[Elias]"; - mes "\"After your questions I'm really getting worried about this guy with the mask. In the afterthought it really seems suspicous."; - mes "It might be a good idea to ask around if someone else observed something odd connected to this person.\""; + mes "\"After your questions I'm really getting worried about this guy with the mask. In retrospect it really seems suspicous."; + mes "It might be a good idea to ask around if anyone else observed something odd connected to this person.\""; goto L_Close; L_Confirmed: @@ -68,9 +68,9 @@ L_Confirmed: L_Thank: mes "[Elias]"; - mes "\"Now that Chief Oskari knows about the backgrounds, the Sages will take care of it. It's really a shame how malicious people can be.\""; + mes "\"Now that Chief Oskari knows about the sequence of events, the Sages will take care of it. It's really a shame how malicious people can be.\""; next; - mes "\"Thanks a lot for your help with revealing the truth.\""; + mes "\"Thanks a lot for your help revealing the truth.\""; goto L_Close; L_Close: -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50