From dbd2ea1bb30c0bf051411bb2a24e56d633c8c029 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Pihro Date: Wed, 25 Apr 2012 14:40:11 -0500 Subject: Fixed Grammar/Dialogue issues in the Blue Sage Quest --- world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt index 7ca7af4b..9c9e8e02 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperCleaning5.txt @@ -16,14 +16,14 @@ menu "What are you doing?",-; mes "[Mirjami]"; - mes "\"Oh? I'm just searching for some cleaning supplies. They must be somewhere around here, but everything got upside down when the slimes escaped.\""; + mes "\"Oh? I'm just searching for some cleaning supplies. They must be somewhere around here, but everything went upside down when the slimes escaped.\""; goto L_Investigate; L_Thank: mes "[Mirjami]"; mes "\"I heard you fought the slimes that were still roaming between the bookshelves. Thank you!\""; next; - mes "\"I was a bit worried that they might baffle our efforts by just messing everything up again after we just cleaned.\""; + mes "\"I was a bit worried that they might ruin our efforts by messing everything up again after we just cleaned.\""; goto L_Investigate; L_Investigate: @@ -39,18 +39,18 @@ L_Ask_Visitor: L_Ask_Helper: menu - "What's your impression about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper, + "What's your opinion about Peetu and how he does his work?",L_Helper, "See you later.",L_Close; L_Ask_Both: menu "Can you tell me something about the visitor with the mask?",L_Visitor, - "What's your impression about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper, + "What's your opinion about Peetu and how does he do his work?",L_Helper, "Bye.",L_Close; L_Visitor: mes "[Mirjami]"; - mes "\"Ohh, I think I know who you mean. That was a strange guy. He always came over here in the workshop, said he's very interested in the researches. I suppose that's ok, but he didn't keep his hands by himself, but touched some experiments and I catched him on some storage rack.\""; + mes "\"Ohh, I think I know who you mean. That was a strange guy. He always came over here in the workshop, said he's very interested in the researches. I suppose that's ok, but he didn't keep his hands to himself, and touched some experiments and I caught him on some storage rack.\""; next; mes "\"Visitors should keep away from that!\""; if ((@investigate != 3) && (@investigate != 6) && (@investigate != 9)) @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ L_Visitor: L_Helper: mes "[Mirjami]"; - mes "\"Oh, eh, why are you asking me? I'm here only since a short while and don't really know all the people well enough yet.\""; + mes "\"Oh, eh, why are you asking me? I've only been here a short while and don't really know all of the people well enough yet.\""; goto L_Close; L_Close: -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50