From 5df19e3c04e55acad16f28c38ba29055c58d3b85 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Dino Paskvan Date: Mon, 15 Jul 2013 16:05:44 +0200 Subject: Orum and Waric quest proofreading and editing All the NPCs involved in the quest have been edited, with help from Dyna. --- world/map/npc/012-1/shops.txt | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/012-1/shops.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/012-1/shops.txt b/world/map/npc/012-1/shops.txt index b15b2c3d..ac627e1f 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/012-1/shops.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/012-1/shops.txt @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ menu "Sure.", L_Shop, "Not right now.", L_Close, - "Can I trade this Rose Hat against a different one?", L_RoseHat; + "Can I trade this Rose Hat for a differently colored one?", L_RoseHat; L_Shop: shop "#FlowerShop"; @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ L_RoseHat: "A white one.", -, "A pink one.", -, "A yellow one.", -, - "A orange one.", -, + "An orange one.", -, "A blue one.", -; set @have_id, @base_id + @menu - 1; @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ L_RoseHat: "A white one.", -, "A pink one.", -, "A yellow one.", -, - "A orange one.", -, + "An orange one.", -, "A blue one.", -; set @receive_id, @base_id + @menu - 1; @@ -51,17 +51,17 @@ L_RoseHat: L_NoItem: mes "[Blossom]"; mes "\"Oh, you don't have a Rose Hat in that color."; - mes "Did you mean something else?\""; + mes "Did you mean a different color?\""; menu "Yes, I meant a different color.", L_RoseHat, "No, I changed my mind.", L_Close; L_SameColor: mes "[Blossom]"; - mes "\"Oh, but it doesn't make sense to trade agains the same color."; - mes "Did you mean something else?\""; + mes "\"Oh, you already have a hat in that color."; + mes "Did you want something else?\""; menu - "Yes, let me correct.", L_RoseHat, + "Yes, let me pick a different color.", L_RoseHat, "No, I changed my mind.", L_Close; L_Close: -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50