From f1950cff02b1db440eccd1d0c1c66a8df7caa02a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jessica Tölke Date: Tue, 21 Aug 2012 00:03:25 +0200 Subject: Revise dialogue of Orum and Waric. - Replace ".." with either "." or "..." in many places. - No "next;" before "menu". - Remove NPC name on some places where it was superfluous. --- world/map/npc/009-4/barriers.txt | 18 +++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/009-4/barriers.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/009-4/barriers.txt b/world/map/npc/009-4/barriers.txt index ae18bcb4..9bc486d9 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/009-4/barriers.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/009-4/barriers.txt @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ L_Error2: if (OrumQuest == 2) goto L_Started; warp "009-4.gat", 37, 118; - mes "As you try to pass, two torches begin to flare and push you back. They seem to form some kind of barrier.."; + mes "As you try to pass, two torches begin to flare and push you back. They seem to form some kind of barrier."; close; L_Started: @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ L_Started: if (OrumQuest >= 5) close; - message strcharinfo(0), "Nothing seems to happen as you enter this room.. The barrier must need both of its torches to function properly.."; + message strcharinfo(0), "Nothing seems to happen as you enter this room. The barrier must need both of its torches to function properly."; set OrumQuest, 5; close; } @@ -71,10 +71,10 @@ L_Started: goto L_Allow_Second_Passage; warp "009-4.gat", 61, 56; - mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there's a way to get past it.."; + mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there's a way to get past it."; mes ""; setarray @colors$,"transparent","red","dark orange","orange","light orange","yellow","light green","green","dark green","blue","dark purple","purple","light purple"; - mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it.."; + mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it."; close; L_Allow_Second_Passage: @@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ L_Allow_Second_Passage: close; L_Advance_Quest: - message strcharinfo(0), "The torches dim as you enter like the first. You must be on the right trail.."; + message strcharinfo(0), "The torches dim as you enter like the first. You must be on the right trail."; set OrumQuest, 9; close; } @@ -116,10 +116,10 @@ L_Advance_Quest: goto L_Allow_Third_Passage; warp "009-4.gat", 24, 64; - mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there is a way to get past it.."; + mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there is a way to get past it."; mes ""; setarray @colors$,"transparent","red","dark orange","orange","light orange","yellow","light green","green","dark green","blue","dark purple","purple","light purple"; - mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it.."; + mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it."; close; L_Allow_Third_Passage: @@ -229,10 +229,10 @@ L_Advance_Quest: L_Deny_Final_Passage: warp "009-4.gat", 48, 36; - mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there is a way to get past it.."; + mes "As you try to pass, the torches begin to flare and push you back. Perhaps there is a way to get past it."; mes ""; setarray @colors$,"transparent","red","dark orange","orange","light orange","yellow","light green","green","dark green","blue","dark purple","purple","light purple"; - mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it.."; + mes "Looking closely between the two torches you can see the barrier has a " + @colors$[@BarrierColor] + " tint to it."; close; L_Allow_Final_Passage: -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50