From de412c1946b5ab117140b04858157c50360c885e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: remoitnane <remoit(DOT)nane(AT)gmail(DOT)com>
Date: Sat, 31 Jul 2010 18:47:00 -0700
Subject: Correct some issues in Parua's dialogue

---
 npc/029-3_Fight_Cave/parua.txt | 25 +++++++++++++------------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

(limited to 'npc/029-3_Fight_Cave/parua.txt')

diff --git a/npc/029-3_Fight_Cave/parua.txt b/npc/029-3_Fight_Cave/parua.txt
index 3a8cb3ee..cdbfe064 100644
--- a/npc/029-3_Fight_Cave/parua.txt
+++ b/npc/029-3_Fight_Cave/parua.txt
@@ -6,13 +6,13 @@
 	mes "\"Hello.\"";
 	next;
 	mes "[Parua]";
-	mes "\"Do you dare challenge the powers that sleep here.\"";
-	menu "No, Ill let it sleep", L_Exit,
-	     "Ha! Whats the worst it could do?", -;
+	mes "\"Do you dare challenge the power that sleeps here?\"";
+	menu "No, I'll let it sleep.", L_Exit,
+	     "Ha! What's the worst it could do?", -;
 	mes "[Parua]";
-	mes "\"Very well, for a fee of 20,000 gp Ill will awake the power.\"";
-	menu "No, what a ripoff", L_Exit,
-	     "Fine, here you go", -;
+	mes "\"Very well, for a fee of 20,000 GP, I will awaken that power.\"";
+	menu "No, what a ripoff!", L_Exit,
+	     "Fine, here you go.", -;
 
 	if (zeny < 20000) goto L_NotEnough;
 	if ($@FIGHT_CAVE_STATUS != 0) goto L_AlreadyStarted;
@@ -31,22 +31,23 @@
 
 L_Enjoy:
 	mes "[Parua]";
-	mes "\"Enjoy the fight\"";
+	mes "\"Enjoy the fight!\"";
 	goto L_Exit;
 
 L_NotEnough:
 	mes "[Parua]";
-	mes "\"Seems you can't meet my fee\"";
+	mes "\"Seems you can't meet my fee.\"";
 	goto L_Exit;
 
 L_AlreadyStarted:
 	mes "[Parua]";
-	mes "\"Seems your friend already paid me\"";
+	mes "\"Seems your friend already paid me.\"";
 	goto L_Exit;
 
 L_NotEnoughPlayers:
 	mes "[Parua]";
-	mes "\"Maybe you should bring some friends with you, this will get messy\"";
+	mes "\"Maybe you should bring some friends with you; this will get messy.\"";
+	mes "He takes a moment to calculate. \"You'll probably need at least...five people, including yourself.\"";
 	goto L_Exit;
 
 L_Exit:
@@ -80,7 +81,7 @@ L_NextRound:
 
 	if ($@FIGHT_CAVE_LAST + 30  < $@FIGHT_CAVE_LEVEL) goto L_Announce;
 L_Return_2:
-	npctalk "Next round starting, round level is " + $@FIGHT_CAVE_LEVEL;
+	npctalk "The next round (level " + $@FIGHT_CAVE_LEVEL + ") is starting.";
 
 	set $@MOB_1_SUMMON, 0;
 	set $@MOB_2_SUMMON, 0;
@@ -98,7 +99,7 @@ L_Summon:
 	goto L_Return_1;
 
 L_Announce:
-	mapannounce "029-1.gat", "Parua: Round " + $@FIGHT_CAVE_LEVEL + " starting with " + $@FIGHT_CAVE_PLAYER_COUNT + " player(s) left alive." , 0;
+	mapannounce "029-1.gat", "Parua: The next round (level " + $@FIGHT_CAVE_LEVEL + ") is starting with " + $@FIGHT_CAVE_PLAYER_COUNT + " player(s) left alive." , 0;
 	set $@FIGHT_CAVE_LAST, $@FIGHT_CAVE_LAST + 30;
 	goto L_Return_2;
 
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