From 0bc8cd75797e485f792608c3b7deda5d8f1abc77 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: TheKandiman Date: Tue, 25 Jan 2011 23:41:30 -0500 Subject: Spelling and grammar corrections in NPC dialog for maps 009 through 016 --- npc/009-4/torches.txt | 21 +++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/009-4/torches.txt') diff --git a/npc/009-4/torches.txt b/npc/009-4/torches.txt index d1ea73be..a00ab95c 100644 --- a/npc/009-4/torches.txt +++ b/npc/009-4/torches.txt @@ -84,21 +84,21 @@ function script InRangeTorch1 { if (isin("009-4.gat",67,20,69,25)) return; - mes "Your too far away to do anything with that torch."; + mes "You're too far away to do anything with that torch."; close; } function script InRangeTorch2 { if (isin("009-4.gat",65,41,69,46)) return; - mes "Your too far away to do anything with that torch."; + mes "You're too far away to do anything with that torch."; close; } function script InRangeTorch3 { if (isin("009-4.gat",33,84,37,88)) return; - mes "Your too far away to do anything with that torch."; + mes "You're too far away to do anything with that torch."; close; } @@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ L_Use_Blue: goto L_Show_Color; L_No_Powder: - mes "You notice your all out of that color of powder.. Perhaps Orum can make you some more."; + mes "You notice you're all out of that color of powder.. Perhaps Orum can make you some more."; close; L_Show_Color: @@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ L_Show_Color: if (@TorchColor == @lastColor) goto L_Wrong_Color; misceffect 5; set @lastColor, @TorchColor; - mes "As your pour the powder into the flame you can see it's tint transform to a " + @intensities$[@TorchIntensity] + " " + @colors$[@TorchColor] + ".."; + mes "As your pour the powder into the flame you can see its tint transform to a " + @intensities$[@TorchIntensity] + " " + @colors$[@TorchColor] + ".."; goto L_Color_Loop; L_Wrong_Color: @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ L_Use_Blue: goto L_Show_Color; L_No_Powder: - mes "You notice your all out of that color powder.. Perhaps Orum can make you some more."; + mes "You notice you're all out of that color powder.. Perhaps Orum can make you some more."; close; L_Show_Color: @@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ L_Show_Color: if (@TorchColor == @lastColor) goto L_Wrong_Color; misceffect 5; set @lastColor, @TorchColor; - mes "As your pour the powder into the flame you can see it's tint transform to a " + @intensities$[@TorchIntensity] + " " + @colors$[@TorchColor] + ".."; + mes "As your pour the powder into the flame you can see its tint transform to a " + @intensities$[@TorchIntensity] + " " + @colors$[@TorchColor] + ".."; goto L_Color_Loop; L_Wrong_Color: @@ -269,6 +269,7 @@ L_Failed: close; } + // Third Torch 009-4.gat,33,86,0 script Torch 127,{ callfunc "InRangeTorch3"; @@ -285,7 +286,7 @@ L_Failed: goto L_Color_Loop; L_Too_Far: - mes "Your too far away to do anything with that torch."; + mes "You're too far away to do anything with that torch."; close; L_Color_Loop: @@ -326,7 +327,7 @@ L_Use_Blue: goto L_Show_Color; L_No_Powder: - mes "You notice your all out of that color powder.. Perhaps Orum can make you some more."; + mes "You notice you're all out of that color powder.. Perhaps Orum can make you some more."; close; L_Show_Color: @@ -335,7 +336,7 @@ L_Show_Color: if (@TorchColor == @lastColor) goto L_Wrong_Color; misceffect 5; set @lastColor, @TorchColor; - mes "As your pour the powder into the flame you can see it's tint transform to a " + @intensities$[@TorchIntensity] + " " + @colors$[@TorchColor] + ".."; + mes "As your pour the powder into the flame you can see its tint transform to a " + @intensities$[@TorchIntensity] + " " + @colors$[@TorchColor] + ".."; goto L_Color_Loop; L_Wrong_Color: -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2