From 9cc1783bc108842cfce916dc0e8cebf8c42ba25e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Sini Ruohomaa Date: Sat, 21 Aug 2010 13:09:48 +0300 Subject: Language polish and some cute boost on the side. --- npc/001-1_Tulimshar/sarah.txt | 20 ++++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) (limited to 'npc/001-1_Tulimshar') diff --git a/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/sarah.txt b/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/sarah.txt index d815b6d3..d75e5c38 100644 --- a/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/sarah.txt +++ b/npc/001-1_Tulimshar/sarah.txt @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if (TMW_Quest == 6) goto L_Start; mes "[Sarah]"; - mes "\"Boy am I hungry\""; + mes "\"Boy, am I hungry or what!\""; close; L_Start: @@ -23,34 +23,34 @@ L_Opening0: L_Opening1: mes "[Sarah]"; - mes "\"[Cherry Cake]...I love it \""; + mes "\"Mmm, [Cherry Cake]...I love it!\""; next; goto L_Ask; L_Ask: - mes "\"Can you bring me a piece of [Cherry Cake]?\""; + mes "\"Can you bring me a piece of [Cherry Cake]? Pretty please?\""; menu - "Yes", L_Req0, - "No", L_No; + "Yes.", L_Req0, + "No.", L_No; L_Req0: mes "[Sarah]"; - mes "\"I want one piece of [Cherry Cake]! If you get one, I'll give you a hat !\""; + mes "\"Yippee! Bring me a piece of [Cherry Cake], and I'll give you a nice hat!\""; next; goto L_Set; L_Set: set TMW_Quest,7; mes "[Sarah]"; - mes "\"Please bring me it!\""; + mes "\"Please bring it to me!\""; close; L_Progress: if (countitem("CherryCake") < 1) goto L_NotEnough; mes "[Sarah]"; - mes "\"Hummm!\""; + mes "\"Whee!\""; next; - mes "You brought me my [Cherry Cake]! Here is the hat, as promised.\""; + mes "You brought me [Cherry Cake]! Here is your new hat, as promised.\""; emotion 9; getinventorylist; if ((@inventorylist_count - (countitem("CherryCake") == 1)) > 99) goto L_TooMany; @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ L_Progress: L_NotEnough: mes "[Sarah]"; - mes "\"I'm starving, please bring me a [Cherry Cake].\""; + mes "\"Oh, I'm starving! Please bring me [Cherry Cake]!\""; close; L_Done: -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2