From 7c4f4103ae8fcbca684376c6f0517961025d0178 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jessica Tölke <jtoelke@mail.upb.de>
Date: Sun, 21 Oct 2012 15:27:33 +0200
Subject: Some spelling corrections to Mirak scripts.

---
 world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt |  2 +-
 world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt   | 17 ++++++++---------
 2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to 'world')

diff --git a/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt b/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt
index f678cce2..c72a17f7 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/056-2/barrier.txt
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ L_Block:
     end;
 
 L_Weak:
-    message strcharinfo(0), "I cannot enter. The magic is to strong. Maybe I should train some more.";
+    message strcharinfo(0), "I cannot enter. The magic is too strong. Maybe I should train some more.";
     end;
 
 }
diff --git a/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt b/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt
index 9522ebd4..d61437e2 100644
--- a/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt
+++ b/world/map/npc/056-2/mirak.txt
@@ -45,11 +45,11 @@ L_Talk:
         goto L_Talk1;
     if (@talk == 2)
         goto L_Talk2;
-    mes "The old man reads a book and looks up when he sees you comming";
-    mes "He looks at you angrily";
+    mes "The old man reads a book and looks up when he sees you coming.";
+    mes "He looks at you angrily.";
     next;
     mes "[Mirak]";
-    mes "\"Hi my name is Mirak. You might have the impression that I am nice, but I am NOT! I want to be left alone to read at piece! I tried that at my mansion in Port City but it did not work. My damn brother, he always kept going on about Bat Wings...\"";
+    mes "\"Hi, my name is Mirak. You might have the impression that I am nice, but I am NOT! I want to be left alone to read in peace! I tried that at my mansion in Port City but it did not work. My damn brother, he always kept going on about Bat Wings...\"";
     next;
     mes "Suddenly his face gets red. He breathes slowly three times...";
     next;
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ L_Talk2:
     mes "[Mirak]";
     mes "\"What do you want?!\"";
     menu
-        "Nothing", -,
+        "Nothing.", -,
         "Money!", L_Quest;
     mes "[Mirak]";
     mes "\"Ahhhh! Get lost, or you'll regret it!\"";
@@ -82,7 +82,6 @@ L_Talk2:
     close;
 
 L_Quest:
-
     set @dq_cost, DailyQuestPoints;
     set @dq_money, 20;
     set @dq_exp, 20;
@@ -94,9 +93,9 @@ L_Quest:
     goto L_Exit;
 
 L_TooSoon:
-    mes "Mirak looks up sees you and gets angry";
+    mes "Mirak looks up, sees you, and gets angry.";
     mes "[Mirak]";
-    mes "\"I told you not to bother me again! Thats why I paid you!\"";
+    mes "\"I told you not to bother me again! That's why I paid you!\"";
     goto L_Kill;
 
 L_Kill:
@@ -106,10 +105,10 @@ L_Kill:
     callsub S_Update_Mask_Annoy;
     set Mirak_Bantime, gettimetick(2) + 30; // Real: 86400;
     set Mirak_Questtime, 0;
-    mes "The old man stands up and looks at you angier than ever. He mumbles something and your head explodes.";
+    mes "The old man stands up and looks at you angrier than ever. He mumbles something and your head explodes.";
     next;
     mes "[Mirak]";
-    mes "\"That's what you get for annoying me! I studied under the Mage of Tulimshar!";
+    mes "\"That's what you get for annoying me! I studied under the Mages of Tulimshar!";
     mes "I feel better now.\"";
     next;
     mes "The old man sits back down and continues to read.";
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