From b6d55a492b58f6d57e6f94eaacab98cb1e0e97fe Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: The Kandiman Date: Thu, 8 Dec 2011 23:26:56 -0500 Subject: Minor spelling and grammar corrections for Christmas event. --- world/map/npc/xmas/2011/reinboos.txt | 54 ++++++++++++++++++------------------ 1 file changed, 27 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/xmas/2011/reinboos.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/reinboos.txt b/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/reinboos.txt index efb7f59a..d1553842 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/reinboos.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/xmas/2011/reinboos.txt @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ L_Help: mes "Meireles, Reilemes, Meileres and Leiremes are missing!"; mes "And I have no idea where they could be!\""; next; - mes "\"They could be anywhere and I can't leave here. Would you search them for me?\""; + mes "\"They could be anywhere and I can't leave here. Would you find them for me?\""; menu "Don't worry, they're as good as home.",-, "I'll keep my eyes open.",-, @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ L_Help: mes "\"Oh, one thing before you leave!\""; next; mes "\"As I told you, they're a bit like children. And as children they love all kind of candy."; - mes "But it's not good for them, they get their stomach upset from eating sweet stuff.\""; + mes "But it's not good for them, they get an upset stomach from eating sweet stuff.\""; next; mes "\"So don't give them candy! You might want to take some apples with you, that's much better for them."; mes "Red apples. Don't give them candy. Good luck.\""; @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ L_Help: L_Search: mes "[Grombadil]"; mes "\"Welcome back! I hope you'll be able to find my fosterlings before it's too late."; - mes "Imagine what would be if they don't arrive in time!\""; + mes "Imagine what would happen if they don't arrive in time!\""; next; mes "\"And remember, don't give them candy, but red apples. Those are the best ones."; goto L_Close; @@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ L_Search: mes "[Meireles the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Your smell is familiar!\""; menu - "Grombadil sent me to search you.",-, + "Grombadil sent me to find you.",-, "I don't talk with animals!",L_Close; mes "[Meireles the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Oh! Yes, I shouldn't be here, but home."; @@ -160,12 +160,12 @@ L_Search: "What happened?",-; mes "The Reinboo seems to feel ashamed."; mes "[Meireles the Reinboo]"; - mes "\"I was stupid. I was on the way home, but there were some guy with a mask."; + mes "\"I was stupid. I was on the way home, but there was some guy with a mask."; mes "He gave me tasty cakes! So tasty...\""; next; - mes "\"He made me go with him, he said he has more cakes. But he tricked me!"; + mes "\"He made me go with him, he said he had more cakes. But he tricked me!"; mes "He dashed some powder into my face and ran away."; - mes "The powder burned in my nose and made me forget to the smell of the way home.\""; + mes "The powder burned in my nose and made me forget the smell of the way home.\""; next; mes "\"I tried to find the way, but I'm totally lost."; mes "This place is very odd.\""; @@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ L_Food: goto L_Cake; mes "[Meireles the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Can you bring me some Orange Cakes? Please?"; - mes "When I had something to eat I can follow your smell back home.\""; + mes "When I have something to eat I can follow your smell back home.\""; if (countitem("RedApple") < @apple_amount) goto L_Close; menu @@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ L_GiveCake: delitem "OrangeCake", @cake_amount; mes "[Meireles the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Yam!\""; - mes "The Reinboos munches the Orange Cakes."; + mes "The Reinboo munches the Orange Cakes."; set xmas11, xmas11 | $@xmas11_firstReinbooDone; goto L_Close; @@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ L_GiveApple: delitem "RedApple", @apple_amount; mes "[Meireles the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Apples, bah. Ok.\""; - mes "The Reinboos munches the Apples."; + mes "The Reinboo munches the Apples."; set xmas11, xmas11 | $@xmas11_firstReinbooDone; set xmas11, xmas11 & ~$@xmas11_firstReinboo; goto L_Close; @@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ L_Good: L_Bad: mes "[Meireles the Reinboo]"; - mes "\"Uh, I don't feel well. My stomache hurts. I have to rest a little longer.\""; + mes "\"Uh, I don't feel well. My stomach hurts. I have to rest a little longer.\""; goto L_Close; L_NoEvent: @@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ L_NoEvent: L_RewardTime: mes "[Meireles the Reinboo]"; - mes "\"Phew, I that was short. I nearly didn't make it back in time."; + mes "\"Phew, that was close. I nearly didn't make it back in time."; mes "But everything went well and now I came back because this place made me curious.\""; goto L_Close; @@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ L_Search: mes "[Meileres the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Mh, you smell like home.\""; menu - "Grombadil sent me to search you.",-, + "Grombadil sent me to find you.",-, "Back off from me!",L_Close; mes "[Meileres the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Grombadil! He must be worried!\""; @@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ L_Search: "What are you doing here?",-; mes "The Reinboo seems abashed."; mes "[Meileres the Reinboo]"; - mes "\"There was this guy with the candy. Very tasty candy."; + mes "\"There was this guy with candy. Very tasty candy."; mes "He promised to give me more candy, so I followed him.\""; next; mes "\"But he didn't give me more candy! He dashed some stinging powder into my face!"; @@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ L_GiveCake: delitem "ChocolateCake", @cake_amount; mes "[Meileres the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Yay!\""; - mes "The Reinboos munches the Chocolate Cakes."; + mes "The Reinboo munches the Chocolate Cakes."; set xmas11, xmas11 | $@xmas11_secondReinbooDone; goto L_Close; @@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ L_GiveApple: delitem "RedApple", @apple_amount; mes "[Meileres the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Hrm, ok, I'll eat the apples.\""; - mes "The Reinboos munches the Apples."; + mes "The Reinboo munches the Apples."; set xmas11, xmas11 | $@xmas11_secondReinbooDone; set xmas11, xmas11 & ~$@xmas11_secondReinboo; goto L_Close; @@ -351,7 +351,7 @@ L_Good: L_Bad: mes "[Meileres the Reinboo]"; - mes "\"Uh, my stomache. It hurts. I have to rest a little longer.\""; + mes "\"Uh, my stomach. It hurts. I have to rest a little longer.\""; goto L_Close; L_NoEvent: @@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ L_NoEvent: L_RewardTime: mes "[Meileres the Reinboo]"; - mes "\"Phew, I that was short. I nearly didn't make it back in time."; + mes "\"Phew, that was close. I nearly didn't make it back in time."; mes "But everything went well and now I came back because this place is interesting.\""; goto L_Close; @@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ L_Search: mes "[Reilemes the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Did you met Reimeles? He's my best friend. I miss him.\""; menu - "Yes, Grombadil sent me to search you.",-, + "Yes, Grombadil sent me to find you.",-, "Hey, stay away from me!",L_Close; mes "[Reilemes the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Oh, Grombadil! He's very nervous, right? I should have been home long ago.\""; @@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ L_GiveCake: delitem "WhiteCake", @cake_amount; mes "[Reilemes the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Yay!\""; - mes "The Reinboos munches the White Cakes."; + mes "The Reinboo munches the White Cakes."; set xmas11, xmas11 | $@xmas11_thirdReinbooDone; goto L_Close; @@ -453,7 +453,7 @@ L_GiveApple: delitem "RedApple", @apple_amount; mes "[Reilemes the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Hrm, ok, I'll eat the apples.\""; - mes "The Reinboos munches the Apples."; + mes "The Reinboo munches the Apples."; set xmas11, xmas11 | $@xmas11_thirdReinbooDone; set xmas11, xmas11 & ~$@xmas11_thirdReinboo; goto L_Close; @@ -470,7 +470,7 @@ L_Good: L_Bad: mes "[Reilemes the Reinboo]"; - mes "\"Uh, my stomache. It hurts. I have to rest a little longer.\""; + mes "\"Uh, my stomach. It hurts. I have to rest a little longer.\""; goto L_Close; L_NoEvent: @@ -479,7 +479,7 @@ L_NoEvent: L_RewardTime: mes "[Reilemes the Reinboo]"; - mes "\"I nearly was late! But everything went well."; + mes "\"I was nearly late! But everything went well."; mes "Now I'm playing hide and seek with Reimeles.\""; goto L_Close; @@ -517,7 +517,7 @@ L_Search: mes "\"Searching for me? Oh, I'm late, right? I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to cause trouble.\""; menu "How did you get lost?",-, - "Well, now I found you. How did come here?",-; + "Well, now I found you. How did you come here?",-; mes "The Reinboo looks at you sheepishly."; mes "[Leiremes the Reinboo]"; mes "\"I... I did something stupid. There was a man, he was really friendly to me. He gave me candy!"; @@ -526,7 +526,7 @@ L_Search: mes "\"So I went with him. But he was evil! He didn't give me candy! He dashed some bad itchy powder in my face."; mes "It made me forget the smell of the way home and now I'm lost.\""; next; - mes "\"I was wandering around and searched it. But that only made me tired. And hungry. Oh, I wish I had more candy.\""; + mes "\"I was wandering around and searching for it. But that only made me tired. And hungry. Oh, I wish I had more candy.\""; L_Food: mes "The Reinboo snuffles on you again."; set xmas11, xmas11 | $@xmas11_fourthReinboo; @@ -560,7 +560,7 @@ L_GiveCake: delitem "AppleCake", @cake_amount; mes "[Leiremes the Reinboo]"; mes "\"Hooray!\""; - mes "The Reinboos munches the Apple Cakes."; + mes "The Reinboo munches the Apple Cakes."; set xmas11, xmas11 | $@xmas11_fourthReinbooDone; goto L_Close; @@ -570,7 +570,7 @@ L_GiveApple: delitem "RedApple", @apple_amount; mes "[Leiremes the Reinboo]"; mes "\"But - but cakes are much more tasty! Bleah, ok.\""; - mes "The Reinboos munches the Apples."; + mes "The Reinboo munches the Apples."; set xmas11, xmas11 | $@xmas11_fourthReinbooDone; set xmas11, xmas11 & ~$@xmas11_fourthReinboo; goto L_Close; -- cgit v1.2.3-70-g09d2