From dbd2ea1bb30c0bf051411bb2a24e56d633c8c029 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Pihro Date: Wed, 25 Apr 2012 14:40:11 -0500 Subject: Fixed Grammar/Dialogue issues in the Blue Sage Quest --- world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt index 82222309..b0027d8f 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/sageNikolai.txt @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ if (BaseLevel < $@Q_BlueSageMinimumLevel) goto L_Close; next; - mes "\"You seem to be a quite experienced adventurer. I usually wouldn't ask for this, but since my dear friend Santa mentioned his good experiences with hiring additional helpers in times of pressure, I reconsidered."; + mes "\"You seem to be quite an experienced adventurer. I usually wouldn't ask for this, but since my dear friend Santa mentioned his good experiences with hiring additional helpers in times of pressure, I reconsidered."; mes "If you don't mind, every help with our current situation would be appreciated.\""; next; mes "\"There are many things to take care of at the moment, so if you'd like to aid us, the helpers will be able to tell you what they need.\""; @@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ L_NoInvestigate2: L_StartPagesAdvice: // I heard the slimes ate most of the books... mes "[Nikolai]"; - mes "\"This is true. But while hunting the slimes we discovered that they occasionaly drop bookpages that are still readable."; + mes "\"This is true. But while hunting the slimes we discovered that they occasionaly drop bookpages that are still legible."; mes "Since we had several copies of nearly all the books, we might be able to recreate most of them if we can get at least one copy of each page.\""; goto L_Close; @@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ L_SlimesAdvice: L_StartInvestigateAdvice: // How did this all happen? mes "[Nikolai]"; - mes "\"We're not sure yet. The helper who was responsible to seal away the slimes has been sent to his room until they situation calms down and we can start an investigation.\""; + mes "\"We're not sure yet. The helper who was responsible for sealing away the slimes has been sent to his room until they situation calms down and we can start an investigation.\""; goto L_Close; L_InvestigateAdvice: @@ -221,7 +221,7 @@ L_InvestigateAdvice: L_InvestigateAdvice2: // I told Chief Oskari what I found out about the accident. mes "[Nikolai]"; - mes "\"Yes, he already let me know. You're investigations were very helpful! This is surely something we need to look into further.\""; + mes "\"Yes, he already let me know. Your investigations were very helpful! This is surely something we need to look into further.\""; next; mes "\"Did you already talk to Peetu? I'm sure he'll be glad to know about your results as well.\""; goto L_Close; @@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ L_Full_Inv: L_Done: mes "[Nikolai]"; - mes "\"Thanks for all your help.\""; + mes "\"Thanks for all of your help.\""; goto L_Close; L_Close: -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50