From dbd2ea1bb30c0bf051411bb2a24e56d633c8c029 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Pihro Date: Wed, 25 Apr 2012 14:40:11 -0500 Subject: Fixed Grammar/Dialogue issues in the Blue Sage Quest --- world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt | 14 +++++++------- 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt index 48298d50..d1666966 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/048-2/helperJanitor.txt @@ -23,8 +23,8 @@ mes "He sighs with a regretful look on his face."; next; mes "[Elias]"; - mes "\"So, if you came because of the library, I'll have to disappoint you, there's not much left."; - mes "Though you look like a skilled adventurer. If you'd like to offer your help that'd be very appreciated.\""; + mes "\"So, if you came because of the library, I'll have to disappoint you, because there isn't much left."; + mes "Though you look like a skilled adventurer. If you'd like to offer your help that'd be highly appreciated.\""; next; mes "\"The library is on the third floor.\""; goto L_Close; @@ -38,19 +38,19 @@ L_ShortHello: menu "Can you tell me if there were any unusual visitors before the accident?",-; mes "[Elias]"; - mes "\"Mh, let me think. There were quite a lot of visitors with different concerns, but that's usual at this time of the year."; - mes "One of them was a bit odd, he was wearing a mask and had a strange way of talking. He said he comes from Thermin, that's a mining town in the west. I figured his face might have gotten deformed in some mining accident, but I didn't ask, that would've been rude."; + mes "\"Mh, let me think. There were quite a few visitors with different concerns, but that's usual at this time of the year."; + mes "One of them was a bit odd, he was wearing a mask and had a strange way of talking. He said he comes from Thermin, which is a mining town in the west. I figured his face might have gotten deformed in some mining accident, but I didn't ask, that would've been rude."; mes "If I remember correctly he wanted to see the library.\""; next; mes "Elias gets a bit excited now."; mes "[Elias]"; - mes "\"Do you think he might have something to do with the accident? We're a very hospitable house, so I didn't see a reason to deny him the entrance. I mean, his mask might have been a bit unusual, but hey, there could've been many reasons why someone would wear a mask, don't you think so?\""; + mes "\"Do you think he may have had something to do with the accident? We're a very hospitable house, so I didn't see a reason to deny him the entrance. I mean, his mask might have been a bit unusual, but hey, there could've been many reasons why someone would wear a mask, don't you think so?\""; set @investigate, @investigate + 1; callfunc "updateBlueSageInvestigate"; menu - "Sure, but it's interesting he was here shortly before the accident.",L_Close, + "Sure, but it's interesting that he was here shortly before the accident.",L_Close, "I'll ask some more people about that guy.",L_Close; L_Worry: @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ L_Confirmed: L_Thank: mes "[Elias]"; - mes "\"Now that Chief Oskari knows about the backgrounds, the Sages will take care about it. It's really a shame how malicious people can be.\""; + mes "\"Now that Chief Oskari knows about the backgrounds, the Sages will take care of it. It's really a shame how malicious people can be.\""; next; mes "\"Thanks a lot for your help with revealing the truth.\""; goto L_Close; -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50