From 839210b8ce57f3a3b01b9d2e843e7a6153c6fcda Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jessica Tölke Date: Sat, 21 Jan 2012 20:16:04 +0100 Subject: Barbarians quests: dialogue polishing. --- world/map/npc/033-1/yerrnk.txt | 13 +++++++------ 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) (limited to 'world/map/npc/033-1/yerrnk.txt') diff --git a/world/map/npc/033-1/yerrnk.txt b/world/map/npc/033-1/yerrnk.txt index c5d37ce9..8cb9e13d 100644 --- a/world/map/npc/033-1/yerrnk.txt +++ b/world/map/npc/033-1/yerrnk.txt @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ L_Mission: mes "\"Our tribe is going through dire straits. We used to live in harmony with the mountain ever since."; mes "Life is hard in the snowy mountains, but this life suits our nature.\""; next; - mes "\"But some weeks ago the Yetis started to act very strange. Usually they are very shy, but now..."; + mes "\"Some weeks ago the Yetis started to act very strange. Usually they are very shy, but now..."; mes "They left the secluded areas high up in the mountains they used to live on and started roaming our hunting grounds.\""; next; mes "\"It became very dangerous to leave the village, so it's even harder to gather enough food to survive."; @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ L_Mission: mes "\"Other wild animals got more aggressive as well, though the Yetis are the most dangerous."; mes "Something like that has never happened before. We have no idea what could cause the animals to behave like this.\""; next; - mes "\"That's why we were sent on a mission to find and talk to Santa, one of the Sages of Kazei."; + mes "\"That's why we were sent on a mission to find and talk to Santa, one of the Sages of Kaizei."; mes "The Sages are wizards of great power and wisdom, and we hope Santa might be able to give us advice.\""; goto L_Close; @@ -75,11 +75,12 @@ L_Birrod: mes "\"" + strcharinfo(0) + ", I have to admit that I'm surprised by your skills."; mes "You've proved your braveness and strength.\""; next; - if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0) goto L_Not_Ready; + if (getskilllv(SKILL_POOL) == 0) + goto L_Not_Ready; mes "\"Please talk to Birrod to receive the initiation ritual to become a warrior of the Mangarr.\""; menu "Alright.",-, - "Can you tell me again what are you here for?",L_Mission; + "Can you tell me again what you are here for?",L_Mission; goto L_Close; L_Not_Ready: @@ -98,7 +99,7 @@ L_Warrior: menu "Everything's alright, thanks.",-, "What are you doing down here?",L_Mission, - "Can you explain the raging ability to me?",L_Skill, + "Can you explain the Raging ability to me?",L_Skill, "Do you have a task for me?",L_Task; goto L_Close; @@ -143,7 +144,7 @@ L_Hunt_Yeti: menu "I'm on it.",-, "What are you doing down here?",L_Mission, - "Can you explain the raging ability to me?",L_Skill; + "Can you explain the Raging ability to me?",L_Skill; goto L_Close; L_Yeti_Success: -- cgit v1.2.3-60-g2f50